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Summer Dancer


On Wednesdays, we wear PINK!

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For Sunset Shimmer, Twilight Sparkle is a great friend and is always a joy to be around.

It's just Midnight she has trouble with.

Inspired by art from Tralalayla, and commissioned by nonimportantstuff

Now with Reading by Scribbler Productions

Video commissioned by Sarsath

Legend of Everfree spoilers

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 96 )

7666406 Hehehehe... HEHEHEHE.... HAHAHAAAAAAAAA

7666411 No need for that! Have a drink instead...

This- this was amazing,:rainbowlaugh:

Exorcise the demon. :flutterrage:The hick preist! :trollestia:I love it!:raritystarry:

Somepony needs to make a comic dub for this.:pinkiehappy:

YAY NEW STORY!!!

It could be worse, she could have this guy for a roommate:

All the lolz :rainbowlaugh:

I predict this will be featured tomorrow. My mystical orb of fate's destiny has spoken

7666439 It's a bit early to assume, but thanks :rainbowlaugh:

This was great. :rainbowkiss:

7666440 great job by the way. I really liked it.

And I'm just assuming because it's happened with my stories before (featured overnight), and statistically speaking, it'll probably happen with the flood of people coming to read it. I just assume this since the featured box is automated.

We'll see, but I think there will be a good chance. This reminds me, I need to write my next oneshot once my two tests are over

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Outlines of students stumbled out of their tents

Add a full stop here.

7666459 next fluff oneshot. My "speciality", yes :twilightsheepish:

7666482 I hope it'll be good. I'm still kind of worried.

The title is a bit misleading, it made me think sunset and midnight may live together and this was a story about that.

Sweet Celestia that was something! Amazingly well done :twilightsmile:

Midnight City Bitch!!!!

:rainbowderp:

Well that happened. :rainbowlaugh:

Needs an editing pass.

:rainbowhuh: "So, uhh...Applejack. Why do you carry around a spray bottle full of holy water?"
:ajbemused: "Ever since Apple Bloom got her period, Ah've seen things."

This is awesome!
And wow...Midnight acts like my little cousin...

... Dafuq? That is the most stubborn teenager I've ever seen, and I've seen stubborn.:rainbowlaugh:

7666991 *sings "You At Not Alone"*

This was fun! :pinkiehappy:

Oh god... you've invoked the MLP Supernatural fans! RUN!!!
*sounds of Carry on My Wayward Son heard in the distance

“Now Dash,” Sunset said. “By spanking Midnight, we’d also be spanking Twilight, which would be weird.”

You sure it would be weird for you, Sunny? :rainbowkiss:

Nah, I'm just playing. Amazing story as always!

Well. That was a thing. Good thing Midnight is apparently satisfied enough with local magic that she didn't feel the need to tear the universe apart. Again.

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:ajbemused: "And I figured somethin' special with all seven of us'd probably lead t' demons one way or another. I don't like it, but I can see the pattern."
:rainbowderp: "Oh. Well yeah, I guess that makes sense."
:ajbemused: "Also, I heard there might be pear trees 'round these parts, an' Granny wouldn't let me bring a flamethrower."
:rainbowhuh: "..."

Am I the only one who noticed the Steven Universe style artwork?

No?

Anyone?

Okay, whatevs...

7667199 I noticed that and it annoyed me. Was hesitant on reading this BECAUSE of it but kinda glad I did now. I enjoyed it.

EDIT: Huh, four downvotes... I'll take it XD I was honestly prepared for nasty comments given what I was insulting but I'm fine with just downvotes.

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Little did you know, we were here the whole time.

Do please continue. I would love to see this evolve into a sitcom.

Magic noogie, worst noogie.

gutting Dash

"Gutting" means "disembowelling." I'm pretty sure she didn't do that.

7667303 When the girls go to college and Sunset rooms with both Twilight and Midnight? :rainbowlaugh:
7667495 You did!

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I knew I'd find someone else if I disguised myself as a normal boring person! You see my concerns with the demon thingy up there, right?

That was absolutely hilarious. Midnight Sparkle definitely enjoyed her night out. I saw her as an immature teen who just wanted to cut loose and have fun, the polar opposite of Sci-Twi who is more timid and restrained. I wasn't expecting Applejack to carry holy water with her. It makes you wonder why she even had it in the first place.

There is some editing needed in a couple of places--mainly incorrect words--but overall this was well worth the read.

I'd... actually kinda like to see the idea explored a little bit more. Obviously Sunset did something to Midnight at the Friendship games, since she only has control of Twilight after midnight, and instead of a raging she-demon who's a threat to multiple dimensions, she's just a particularly irritating bully with super-powers. Also, the "Moms" thing was hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

Welp... Noice...:rainbowderp: Ha! That ending doe!:rainbowlaugh:

Midnight sure is quite the rule-breaker.

Midnight: "Screw the rules, I have magic!"

That reference probably wasn't asked for:twilightsheepish:.

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"So, you do that assignment?" I rolled around in my position on the couch, squirming inside of my nest of a blanket. Midnight looked down at me with irritated eyes, flicking a stray lock of her hair back to the top of her head, only for it to once again fall. I held back a chuckle, switching on the telly.

"What assignment?" she finally answered, though definetly not the answer I was hoping for.

"That assignment."

"That?"

"Yes, that."

"What is that?"

"That's a. . . goose riding a raccoon," I said, squinting so hard at the film going on inside of the television screen that I was starting to get a headache. Midnight seemed rather confused by my answer, however.

"What?"

"You wanted to know what that is."

"The assignment was that?"

"No, that's a goose riding a raccoon!" I clarify.

That sitcom would be hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

This was entertaining beyond belief! :rainbowlaugh:
Applejack's part had me laughing the hardest. :ajsmug:

Also:

“I swear I should have stayed home.”

Arnold?
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7668407
Indeed. :rainbowkiss:
Dat exorcism, do. :rainbowlaugh:

Can't be any worse than having Jigsaw as a roommate...

Oh my gosh this was just what I needed. I laughed so hard.

To good. Wish I hadn't missed the movie. This may or may not have been another fantastical story that made me laugh.

This was great.

I noticed an error with a sentence.

“Now I know who’s been crank calling me at night since the Friendship Games.”

Isn't it supposed to be prank?

Why does Applejack just have a spray bottle of holy water lying around?

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