Subconscious Being

Jlargent

Jlargent #1 · Sep 27th, 2016 · 3 · ·

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Well this is going to be awkward to explain.

CrossRedstone

CrossRedstone #2 · Sep 27th, 2016 · · ·

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7600035 That's putting it lightly.

kul

kul #3 · Sep 27th, 2016 · · ·

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Ahhh. What an ending!
You pulled a very good symphatetic Midnught Sparkle here! Aw man, I felt bad about hating her now

CrossRedstone

CrossRedstone #4 · Sep 27th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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7600110 Could never really hate her. I kinda understand her actually. Honestly, when I get that kind of power, run! First, I'd do the same. Second, I'd have no idea what I was doing and lots of stupid stuff would happen.

kul

kul #5 · Sep 27th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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7600117
I agree with that last part. New material means more fan canons and fan creations.. I mean, I keep trying to shut up my brain from giving more depth to Filthy Rich's motive to buy Camp Everfree (saving his old camp alumni from incompetent hand of a naive owner?) so I understand why you do this lol.
Im really hoping that everyone will enjoy this fic as i am, and you'll make a shenanigan-full sequel!

CrossRedstone

CrossRedstone #6 · Sep 27th, 2016 · · ·

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7600151 Rich? Not sure what to think of him. There are some implications he doesn't care about nature, but I have no solid proof to anything right now and not enough to come up with a decent theory.

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Krazyfan1

Krazyfan1 #8 · Sep 27th, 2016 · · ·

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and here i thought Midnight Sparkle was revealed to be a Tulpa...

A tulpa is a consciousness parallel to your own that is self-aware, can think, has free will, has memory and (can have) appearance they self-identity with. They are independent of their creator's consciousness, but share the same body and sometimes some parts of the mind.
A tulpa's personality is a product of the unconscious mind, your consciously chosen traits, and the emergent consciousness of the tulpa itself. It is developed through interactions and conversations with the tulpa and through personality work, which can have many forms. A tulpa is not a personification of your subconscious, they are their own consciousness.
A tulpa can think on their own, has their own decision-making skills, their own preferences, opinions and tastes, and all of these can be distinct from your own (no matter how similar or dissimilar they may be). They are able to talk and function on their own. They exist within the mind, and thus can easily interact directly with other consciousnesses in the same mind, such as their creator and any other tulpa occupying the same body. There are a number of ways a tulpa can interact with someone or something outside the body. For example, a host can relay what their tulpa says, or can allow the tulpa to control the body directly.
A tulpa's form is an imagined body existing in mental space, which they associate with as an extension of themselves. This form can be chosen during the creation of the tulpa, or can emerge naturally from their personality or the subconscious. A tulpa often self-identifies with their form, but may change it if they desire. These changes may or may not be more drastic than simple alterations, and may include total transformations of appearance. The form can act as a reference point for interacting with a tulpa, and allows for methods of visual communication and expression, such as body language. The form is initially seen in the mind's eye or in daydreams, but can be made externally visible to the host as a controlled hallucination.
In conclusion, a tulpa is first and foremost a consious mind that often identifies with a form, created by an individual as a mental companion.

CrossRedstone

CrossRedstone #9 · Sep 27th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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7600255 Da fuq? I was more thinking in the direction of the persona games, specifically Persona 4.
But damn, that's some awesome stuff right there.

Cpt Creampuff

Cpt Creampuff #10 · Sep 27th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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Sequal like right now after u finish reading this comment get to writing drop whatever you're doing.

jollymusician

jollymusician #11 · Sep 27th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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Midnight Sparkle as an actual character, separate from Sci-Twi.

Grey Bard

Grey Bard #12 · Sep 28th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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Lethal Desire

Lethal Desire #13 · Sep 28th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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I'd say a sequel is a good idea, this is one of the better cliffhangers I've read. nicely writen.

darkstone57

darkstone57 #14 · Sep 28th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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I like this. Go for the sequel.

Rocka Leone

Rocka Leone #15 · Sep 28th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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sequel please.

Krazyfan1

Krazyfan1 #16 · Sep 28th, 2016 · · ·

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7600271
yup
awesome is right
i'm reading a fanfic on SV by a Tulpa actually

mutualism_is_nice

mutualism_is_nice #17 · Sep 28th, 2016 · 3 · ·

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A sequel could be pretty rad

silverMEGAlicorn

silverMEGAlicorn #18 · Sep 28th, 2016 · 3 · ·

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Yep, let's get a sequel for this

CrossRedstone

CrossRedstone #19 · Sep 28th, 2016 · · ·

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Alright, alright! I get it! Jeez, likes would have been enough. Gimme some time, I have to other projects that require an update right now. Though, knowing me, I'll have the prologue done before any of the updates...

Wasteland_Tyrant

Wasteland_Tyrant #20 · Oct 3rd, 2016 · 3 · ·

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RNBW

RNBW #21 · Oct 4th, 2016 · · ·

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Well, this indeed needs a sequel.

Revan

Revan #22 · Oct 4th, 2016 · · ·

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I liked this portrayal of Midnight Sparkle. Onwards to the sequel!

Greatazuredragon

Greatazuredragon #23 · Oct 5th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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The only reason I lost control back then was because I think your love for Spike is bigger than was your hatred for the world.

And Spike gets an upgrade from saving a city state to saving reality itself!
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Boulder

Boulder #24 · Oct 6th, 2016 · · ·

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In case you have forgotten, here a little reminder.

here's

"But no more! My friends' belief in me! They showed me that I don't need to fear magic! That I don't need to fear you!"

believe

You Twilight Sparkle created me, Midnight Sparkle insight your very subconsciousness.

inside
I like it, the friendship magic collecting pendant, once Midnight became majority good, is absorbed into the pendant. Then is released into reality as her own living entity.

HiddenMaster

HiddenMaster #25 · Oct 10th, 2016 · 2 · ·

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Nice depiction and origins for Midnight Sparkle as a separate entity from Sci-Twi.

I'll definitely have to check out the sequels, but overall? This is nice. You really need to work on punctuation and dialogue punctuation especially, but overall not bad.

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