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Summer Dancer


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Aww, that was cute. :pinkiehappy: Nice job!

I think this is the first story of yours I've read. Really cute :twilightsmile:

Good idea, you get a thumbs up.

BTW I didn't like the episode but you gave me a reason to watch that scene again. Maybe spot him since I was kinda drooling with boredom during it.

Cheese nodded. “I know.” He stopped short and spluttered. “I-I mean you're not hot...I mean you are hot, but--NO, what I meant to say was…” He felt his face and cleared his throat. “I’m pretty hot too. It’s kinda stuffy in here. A lot of body heat in here, y’know.” He rubbed the back of his neck. “That’s what I meant to say.”

:rainbowlaugh: Smooth.

That was very cute! Well done

Cutie, short and sweet although I'm not sure what he's doing in Crystal Prep but whatever.

"Fornication by fruit punch" the fourth weirdest thing I heard in my life

Aww, way to go Sunny Flare:fluttercry:

6479684 Yeah... Almost as good as Anna in Frozen

:rainbowkiss:

That ending tho...

“What’s wrong? Are you hot?” he asked.
“No...I’m Pinkie Pie…”

you don't know how much i laughed at this... you dont't know... :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

Alright imagine Jontron's oh may god. Multiply that sound by 2 and about a fraction deeper and you've got a pretty close reaction. Other than the awes and laughs and clasping my hands together in one of those d'aww fashions

Amazing story as always, my dear. Simply wonderful. I an tell you've been practicing and improving quite a lot! This is very well-done. I loved the "hot" interaction. It read very naturally and flowed perfect. I may not ship it romantically, but this I can totally friendship it all the way!

This was my daily dose of fluff for the day, and it succeeded in putting a smile on my face. Too bad this didn't happen in the movie, though! Would have been cute as a background gag or something. :scootangel:

Eek! That was way too cute for me! I just watched the movie today (late, I know...). Yeah, it's too bad he didn't appear.

For some reason I forgot this was a one shot, so I got a bit upset when I realized it ended. :rainbowlaugh:

I love love love the story. Where did you get the idea for the title?

6541026 Actually, I had no idea what I was going to put for the title...then this popped up in my head :scootangel:

Cool. You're so awesome.

I have no idea how I missed this, but it's awfully cute!

Adorable, as many CheesePie fics are, but I'm kinda sad that he didnt rip away from Sunny and grab Pinkie like "Nu, she's my horse-tail-swishing Wondercolt!" and then badda-bing badda-boom togetherness. ROLL CREDITS!


What just happened XD

Im confused were they flirting or not and why in the world did we decide that hot meant that people look good and the the temperature is high

Cheese’s mouth dropped. “So we weren’t flirting!?”

:rainbowlaugh: Haha Cheese, you are so clueless

CheesePie is best couple for sure:pinkiehappy::heart:

100th like by me!
Loved it! :D

6665869 that line was hilarious!:rainbowlaugh:

Cheese looked at her and smiled knowingly.

there ya go!

On that day Cheese received a new nickname, Grilled Cheese.

“...Mmm...I’m seriously about to blow groceries right now…”

That's literally the best thing I've ever heard for someone telling someone else that they're going to be sick.:rainbowlaugh:

So... at the risk of exposing my social ineptitude: were they, or were they not flirting?

Also: what the devil is fornication by fruit punch?

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1. That's for you to decide :rainbowkiss:
2. Trust me...you DON'T wanna know :twilightoops:

7276804 Answers:
1) Yes, yes they were flirting and nothing short of Zeus will make me change my opinion.
2) I was going to make an epic badass boat about how I DO want to know and how I could handle the horrors, but I got lazy and just said 'meh'

Are you going to continue this by any chance?

7276874 Wait shit I meant boaSt, not boat!

7276874 This story is done, but I do plan to write another story in this timeline. I wonder if it will count as a sequel or not :rainbowderp:

7276897 Probably better to just expand as a story. Maybe have the romance be developed more as Cheese and Pinkie interact more with each other during the progress of Friendship Games?

lol... hilarious

Okay, that was awesome! I always love stories that ship these two! And the 'hot' joke is old, but a classic. Good Job! :twilightsmile:

This is adorable, and this is hilarious. And Cheese, It's Pinkie she could have been flirting, or she could haven serious. Who cares.

Also, fornication by fruit punch. :raritydespair: Damn Sunny, your mind went to dark and inappropriate places. :twilightoops:

Well. I don't know why I hadn't read this sooner, but I'm in love. :)

Well that was adorable. Hopefully Cheese will make more appearances in the show.

Awww! Very cute.

Cheese’s mouth dropped. “So we weren’t flirting!?”

:rainbowlaugh: My goodness, Cheese is such a dork here, and it's perfect!

This was adorable, and I hope cheese sandwich shows up in season 7/ the movie

Ahhh!! This was fantastic! Such a cute story! And I feel you captured their characters so well! :heart:

So cute! Have a Mustachio.
:moustache:

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