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Crystal Aura


Long lost Princess of Crystal Empire | Writer & Editor | Admin@ Female Writers & Please Read My Story!

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Cindershy, was a young maiden whose parents had died & was staying with her step-mother & step-sisters. She had a friend to support her through all the worse things that her family used to do for her. She loved the Prince of her kingdom. One day, a Ball is announced. But when Cindershy wanted to go to the Ball, her sisters tore her clothes & made her unfit for the Ball. Will she be able to meet the Prince or will she keep on living the life of misery with her family?

Inspired by Magpiepony & the story, Sleep While I Drive.

[Update : 28/03/2023] Thank you to all who read my story for my story now has 1,205 views!

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 20 )

When I heard Cinder, I immediately jumped to Cinder Fall.

this is sweet.

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I love FlutterCord! :heart:

can't wait to see more.

Neat chapter.

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Glad you like it! xxxx

But, Cinderella isn't a tragedy!

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Thank you for noticing, maybe I've mistakenly added it. I'll have it changed! xxxx

Comment posted by Crystal Aura deleted Sep 19th, 2018

can't wait to see the ending

Pacing. You needed to pace the meeting with the prince. Transitions, use them!

How did they meet?

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Discord and Cindershy

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During Discord's visits to his Kingdom, he bumped onto Cindershy. From that first visit, he slowly got to know her, as for some odd reason, they both kept on bumping into each other. He was curious to know where she lives & all, & the rest is mentioned in the story! And thus the story progresses, my friend. Thank you for asking that question! xxxx

you can do a bonus chapter.

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