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Summer Dancer

On Wednesdays, we wear PINK!


Cheese Sandwich and Pinkie Pie are hired to throw an anniversary party in Paris for the Mayor and her husband. Unfortunately, a band of thieves also has their sights set on the party, with every intention of crashing it.

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Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

And you used that cool picture!!!:heart:

5203337 Yes sireee! :pinkiehappy: My fav pic

Plus, you used Prance! :twilightsmile:

5203342 I know, it's so adorable!!!! Dude my heart exploded.:heart::heart::heart:

Who? Pinkie?
No, your mother.

I was about to say "No, Frankenstein" :rainbowlaugh:

Oh man i am loving this so far now MOAR :flutterrage: I say.

grinned up at her friend. “We have so much to catch up on!”

Cheese nodded. “I know! Oh, Hey! How’s boneless doing?”

Pinkie’s smile froze on her face.


Oh crap he doesn't know about boneless being used as a key yet.

Heh. This is fun.

The funny thing is that at the end of It Bombed In Seaddle, I had Cheese playing the accordion, pretty much out of despair:

He sat up, holding the instrument between both hooves, closed his eyes, and began to play.
Every mare sat down, one by one, in order to listen better. Even Rainbow Dash hovered a bit lower. Twilight hadn’t realized that an accordion could sound so sweet and melancholy. It wasn’t just a funny instrument, and Cheese Sandwich wasn’t just a funny pony. And neither is Pinkie, she thought, but we act as though she is all the time. Maybe she wants us to think that. We’ll probably never know.

And then Pinkie shows up:

“Well, of course, he was playing the accordion, DUH,” said Pinkie. “Nopony plays the accordion like that.”

La Vie En Rose is actually the song he plays. Because in my headcanon, it's always his distress call to Pinkie: "Pinkie, pick up."

Because he sees the world through pink colored glasses, that's why.

So it's great to see you doing something with this.

Since I watch doctor who the only French word I know is allons-y which means "lets go" :rainbowlaugh:

5203651 Thank You! Lol what a coincidence! Huge fan of yours! Also, things will get more dark and serious as we go further into the story. I'm glad you like it. :heart:

Loved it! Super cute and your plot's got me really interested. The bit with Cheese's common sense was super creative. I've never seen that done in a Cheese Pie fic before. Pretty hilarious. Can't wait for me! You've got my up-vote.

Although, they never did figure out why a raven was like a writing desk.

Last Unicorn Reference! Or maybe that's just my imagination . . .

5215274 Thank You! I'm glad you like it! And you should definitely write a CheesePie fic, it's really fun. And yes, that was a reference :twilightsmile:


And you should definitely write a CheesePie fic, it's really fun

:rainbowlaugh: I've got an ongoing 150 k Cheese Pie fic! What Changes May Come. And yes, it's very fun to write!

5215339 Oh wow, it's you! :pinkiehappy::twilightblush: Very good story, by the way :twilightsmile:

I remember my cousin showing me that song (she took French). It was actually kind of nice to have a little reminder of her in this fic, though it obviously wasn't your intention.

This is awfully cute, and I can't wait to read more. :twilightsmile:

Love the song! Awesome chapter! Need more man! :pinkiehappy::flutterrage::raritywink::raritystarry::scootangel:

I need more!!!!! :rainbowkiss:
I feel like this is Spanish (because I can speak it) even thou its French the titles sound Spanish to me :rainbowderp: wow I need help :rainbowlaugh:

“And that is why you should never drink brandy in the tub."
What? :rainbowderp:

Pancakes, bacon, eggs, cereal, milk, hash browns doughnuts…

Bacon...? :rainbowhuh:

If I remember correctly, ponies don't eat meat. But other than that, the second part was so incredibly cute and awkward I was squealing on the inside!

She looked so cute and peaceful in the morning light. She snored softly, nearly sending him to HNNG! land.

You and me both Cheese you and me both.....Funny i am introverted as they can be and my dream girl is a girl like her. Cheese is a lucky man er stallion DAMN IT! french always gets me into a romantic mood *slaps self* bad boy head out of the gutter! :rainbowwild: This going to be one of those romantic action adventure stories this is getting good.:twilightsmile:

Actually i saw a video some time ago on youtube where this dude fed his pony a hamburger O_O

You have no idea how happy I was to see a new chapter.:pinkiehappy: It was amazing, I hope to read more soon:raritywink: Though I understand if you get busy.:twilightsmile:

It was a cute little chapter. The bit where Cheese and Pinkie got the passengers on the train to start singing was really enjoyable. Though, I can't help but feel that the pacing was really off on this one. It really was too fast, especially at the end. The plot contrivances like the rooms not being ready and the drink on the couch felt forced. It could have done with a lot more fleshing out and build up. Also . . . Cheese have you no morals! :flutterrage: Good chapter, but it could use a little work.

She smirked deviously. “Good work Lilly,” She said, patting the young mare on the head. Lily smiled.

make up your mind one or two l's

5232417 Yeah, it was pretty much a problem for me when I was done with the chapter, and the thing at the end was simply for comedic purposes :twilightblush: I still have a lot to learn with writing these types of stories though, I'll make sure of that next chapter :pinkiehappy:

5229376 I have a cousin that I'm most close to, but she lives pretty far away, so I'm glad it brought back some good memories! And thanks!:pinkiehappy:

First part: Aww! :heart:

Second part: Get away from him MISTY!!! Cheese is PINKIE'S!!!:flutterrage: Cat fight.:flutterrage:

Third part: NOPE! NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE I'm sorry had to skip that part! I DIDN'NT WANT BAD DREAMS. :fluttershysad:

Last part: WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::applecry::twilightoops::raritydespair:NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Wait, forgot part 3.5: DISCORD!!!! HAHAHAHAHA:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: I COMPLETLY FLIPPED OUT AND CLAPPED MY HANDS.


Ooooh. This chapter was much better than the last one! The pacing improved, and I liked the character interactions a lot. Seeing Discord was a pleasant surprise. He's one of my favorite characters. I loved the dark elements by the way. Guess it comes from writing serious stuff so much. I can't resist a dark scene that challenges the characters. Looking forward to your next chapter!

Comment posted by Sonata_Dusk deleted Nov 11th, 2014

I almost broke out in song pshttttttt I won't thou.....................FIVE NIGHTS AT FREDDYS THIS IS THE PLACE WHERE YOU WANNA BE I JUST DON'T GET IT WHY DO YOU WANT TO STAY!!!!!

NNNNNNNOOO I AM NOT READY FOR FREDDY! XD oh man things are getting tense please dont leave us hanging!

stepping on every crack on the sidewalk.

At first I thought you meant that they were "breaking" their mothers backs and I went wide eyed. :rainbowderp:

Misty didn’t even flinch. “You heard me. Why do you care so much, anyway?”

I was like, I will murder you and do this on your grave!" :twilightangry2::flutterrage:

“And I knew the guy’s cousin…” Pinkie added. “And he was a special music producer pony, and his name was Mary, and I asked him why that was… Turns out that his father was named Mary…”
“And his father before him was named Mary…”
“And his father before him was named Craig. But anyways…”

Not only do I know the episode that that reference came from, but I also know the person who said it and where they said it. :trollestia:


When I saw the words "pizza joint", I immediately knew what it was! :rainbowlaugh:

But, poor them... from the beginning I had predicted that Pinkie would get kidnapped, but woah, I didn't expect both of them to be!

Nice job!

Once again our heroes were saved by the skewed morals of criminals!

Now we're getting to the good part.

5254285 Thanks! I'm glad you liked Discord, because at first, I had some doubts because i never wrote him before, but I just thought about what he would say in this sort of situation, and ran with it :twilightblush:

More to come :twilightsmile:

Man I love discord. This chapter was so freaking amazing!!!!!!!!! I needs as moooooorrrreeeee!!!

"Summertime"'s a lot older than that. It's from the opera Porgy and Bess, by Ira and George Gershwin, and it was written in 1935. It's the number that opens the show.

Sorry--used to be an opera director, and I am a huge sucker for early twentieth century pop music!

(Also, it's "Braeburn." Hope you don't mind my mentioning that.)

Anyway, I'll be interested to see what comes next. I'm quite worried about Pinkie and Cheese.

I like it! I was wondering on how Rarity was doing for some reason. :rainbowhuh: It's back to cheesepie after this! Yes! Sorry that I haven't wrote another chapter for my cheesepie story. I'm busy with something else. Something for Christmas............................................:moustache:

5291035 Oh Yeah! She sings so pretty :twilightsmile:

Thank You for the Braeburn tip, because I was conflicted about that.... thinks get pretty grim from now on, but I think these two will be alright :pinkiehappy:

Also, I don't mind, I love stuff from the twenties and beyond (Huge movie geek) :twilightblush:

Wow, rarity had definitely had better days.
Also, homework is a total buzzkill. :ajbemused:

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