Translating from Dovahzul / Fixing Speech To Text Errors: by Jcc10
Editor (Chapters 7 & 8) by The Collapsed Library
(We are still looking for a editor, please contact Jcc10)
Twilight Sparkle the Princess of Friendship finds a weird gem that sends her back in time, around 200 years before Discord came into the picture. When she comes to she looks at her reflection from a lake to find that her fur and mane colors have changed. Even her cutie mark has changed completely. But yet she still is an alicorn. Thinking that somehow she is in alternate dimension of her home world. And that was what she looked like in the dimension. So she thought she would just play along even though the area she was in looked a little bit more old equestrian then the Equestria of her time. Soon she bumped into who she thinks is Princess Celestia. But is now a male counterpart of her known as Prince Solarium. She began to say her whole name but as soon as she said Twilight she saw Princess Luna!
She quickly figures out that this was not a different dimension. But the past, not wanting to reveal who she fully was she changes her last part of her name to Shimmer. Now everyone in the past believes that she is Twilight Shimmer. Except for Princess Luna and Prince Solarium. Who figured it out right away that Twilight is not of this time. But both respect the fact that she does not feel comfortable revealing the future to them. Knowing that there would be a good chance that. Twilight might not even exist if they learn about their future.
Join Twilight as she tries to get back to her time. While wondering how in the wide world of Equestria. Could Princess Celestia ever have been a male. And is thinking that the two elder princesses had a lot of explaining to do when she returned back to her time. But the longer she stuck in the past might cause her to change her mind and wish to stay in the past find out.
Note I do not make the picture nor do I know who made the picture that I used for cover art I just googled it by just typing time looked at images and found it so I have no credit for this picture whatsoever. I just thought it looked cool and I posted it as my cover for this fanfic. Nothing more nothing less.
When I put this through a grammar check, it said that you have 56 critical grammar issues; just in this one chapter! Please look into getting a new editor, the one you have right now is just not working.
6368231 Editor here: What grammar checker are you using? I am using Language tool.
Further more you need to look at what it is complaining about. No tool is faultless, Language tool complains about stuff when altering it would make it harder to read.
Thank you in advance for providing us with the information and I shall look into it.
From what I've read all I can see as major errors is a lack of commas. But that in no way detracts from the story, I'm gonna keep reading and by the way. I love the concept!
there are a few words that I had to do a double take on grammar wise but all in all it looks pretty good so far 
I will say that there are a few times when words aren't used in the right context:
That should be "do" for example...
But truth be told that's pretty much nitpicking, it again doesn't detract in any way and I personally didn't notice until I looked back.
Personally I feel u did an excellent job editor. Although some mistake got through they dont detract at all and flow is pretty stable, a little run on-ish but stable all the same.
Man I just gotta say that this:
I had to pause and think "what did she say now?"
And what's weird... I could see her doing it too
Anyways I found that humorous.
I feel like I should apologise for taking three comments to post all this but I'm posting as I read
This a common one for fimfiction:
It should be "still to be"
I make this one slot whenever I'm writing
Then again I could be wrong I have been before
Anyways shutting up!!!
Sorry for all the comments again but when did this become a thing?
did Hasbro make that a thing?
Cause I don't remember who did and forgetting who did it ticks me off
As I was reading I noticed something...
You may be over thinking the thought process of a thinkaholic.
Not that that's bad but her thinking does seem a tiny bit out of character.
A lot of writers do that actually.
You will be reading and suddenly she's thinking on a whole 'nother level
...I... did not expect that
You have me intrigued good sir/ma'am I find this story amusing and adorkable
Your grammar slipped a little towards the end of the chapter, but its still a bloody good read!
Now I shall continue reading good sir Good day
Dear narrator...do you have a lisp?
In all seriousness I'm not sure if that was the intended word but as I was reading I hit that and suddenly every word after came out with a lisp and I started laughing
I believe the word "seemed" could be changed out there but whatevs
Sir/ma'am I just have to say... This is an be of my favorite stories about of the twilestia genre, it is very good despite the grammar errors, but those are to be expected with a software like dragon naturally speaking. They again didn't detract from the story but seemed to give the narrator a humorous quality, like he\she is part of an inside joke. I understand that this is going to hit on sadness but I really enjoy the dynamic feel of the author. Keep writing sir!!!!!!
6400934 thank you for liking it so far.
Hmmm I just realized how many comments I sent... Yeahhhh... Probably should have read it all and then summarized my bad. And you're welcome by the way
this genre needs more stories like this a little advice though... Slow down, you will be able to get your end result with or without all the fluff we don't need all the facts in one sitting. Try to tease at the answer you're going for with subtle clues first and slowly bring the details in over a few chapters if necessary. Anyways, you don't really need to listen to me as its a wonderful read either way.
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That ran on for a while... Good night and good writing
6400712 Yah... I have been disobeying some grammar rules to attempt to make it easier to read... I am also running off of Speech To Text (STT) and that can make things even more confusing... (If you would like to proof read I would love to have you over in the folder I have set up)
6400733 Internally updated, waiting for the author to update...
6400750 The fringe logic I have is this: If touching the gem sent HER back in time, what would eating it do to spike? Make a "Doctor" dragon? (Also missed changing the period into a comma...)
6400765 How about "to remain an Alicorn"? Does "remain" work for you?
6400776
6400797 Which one?
6400812 Thanks... No one else was offering to do editing... If you would like to become a proof-reader that would be really nice.
You would even gain access to our buffer vault! 
(Stopping comment buffer here)
6400830 Yah... I think dragon still is giving out stuff that I just don't notice... Fixed on my end, update should come about in 6-24 hours...
6400934 Speaking of
This is what I have been mainly dealing with, grammar comes second to changing that to
even if I miss some...
Sorry...
6403581 Yah... I am still going for the Discord and Luna are stuck in the attic for ~4 months... But I have been told that is not going to happen... Any who I don't write the story so I actually cant help you there.
To be honest the Spanish Inquisition
took me by surprise.
6403581 thanks for your input it might happen it might not you just have to wait and see
6403946
Shhhhhhh! No one is supposed to see that!
I've been reading and commenting from my tablet and auto correct/fill hate my very existence
6403946 why did you compare me to spanish Inquisition which I really didn't get the video
6404429 I was comparing the other Guy's many comment's.
6404835 I see Okay
just a fast mistake I noticed in this sentence
Thank you mother and auntie you as well father. Now I must be going
6414659 thank you for letting me know I just fix it
6414831 np just helping out
I'm wondering... Is Celestia going to change back if Twilight returns? Or did the spell he/she used was permanent?
Oh wait spoilers
6415118 maybe, maybe not that is for me to know and you to find out
6415051
This story continues to intrigue me...
and I LOVE IT!!!!!!
My only concern is still punctuation but again it doesn't detract at all and I understand that dragon naturally speaking is hard to punctuate accurately with.
All in all... Keep going good sir! You have my wholehearted support!
Oh! That gift had better be good or...
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6415810 thank you also I'm a she not a he
I'm not really shier a male would use sakura as part of ther name since it is a girls name in Japan
would they???
6415810 okay just saw the pitcher and that pitcher better be a joke
and I mean it if you are really meaning what you are saying in with that pitcher you are not going to be happy
I will not take threats as a joke so pleas refrain form threat joke
I figured as much, if you remember in my many other comments I would say "he/she" yes? That's because I was pretty sure on your gender but I've been wrong on this site before so I try to stay gender nonspecific when I comment, i apologise for the slip up.
6415872 that is fine no harm done with that the pitcher on the other hand I'm not likening
Ah my sincere apologies Madame, just say the word and I shall remove it post haste.
Is the new picture better? I don't like angering authors I like so I replaced the offending image
And again I apologize for any inconvenience or insult caused by my post.
6416245 it is okay you didn't know that about me and the new picher I would think candence would be there instead ot twilight
6417030 i know right? I was looking for memes and then that showed up, I mean, the show is about love and tolerance but that picture seems out of place. but...
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6403940 sorry for taking so long to reply, okay... here we go:
1)I would love to proofread!
2)the one I was talking about is when she just got there and is pondering what happened,
it just seemed a little too in depth, I mean it is twilight, but even this seems a little OOC.
3) I remember that bit but I always thought that Celestia taught that to her
4) "remain" works.
5) Oh man, that would be fantastic!
6) I understand that STT is an interesting writing tool to say the least.
but if this is edited with STT then I really didnt notice!
Whew! that was a long one!
6415165 Oh wow... I haven't thought about this but if she is a he, in the world where Sunset Shimmer is would that Celestia be a guy!
6418146 Okay, I thought about this myself, but you need to think about this human Celestia and Luna are not immortal like pony Celestia Luna and Solarium spell was very thorough. So when human Solarium died and reborn he became Celestia and kept being reborn at Celestia, over and over again up to this point hope this makes sense to you and clear as anything up about that topic.
I'm intrigued and tracking this. It seems to be updating quickly so I plan to wait till it's complete to read...if I can last that long! *laughs*
Once I do read it I plan to comment ^^
See you!
6436365 okay good to know thank you for letting me know
6436365 At the rate we are going that will be in about 2 months, would you like to get a PM when we post the last chapter?
6437717 you mean when I'm done typing the end of the story or when I post the last chapter here???
6437734 just a question why did you post the same chapter two times
6437759 read the anthers note in chapter 7 part 2 that holds your answer or read this link
6437795 oohh okay my fault for not noticing
6437832 it is fine
6437734 Umm... When It's Posted...
6437717
Sure ^^ That'd be great thank you.
6437849 okay just checking
6437872 my bad I miss read it