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Who am I? Why, I'm just a passing through Kamen Rider... Got it memorized?

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Twilight had planned to visit Sunset Shimmer and her friends over in the other world for a nice, quiet weekend, away from all the worries and problems associated with being a Princess of Equestria. Unfortunately, things rarely go as planned.

After an accident cuts her off from Equestria, Twilight finds herself stuck in the human world until the gateway between the two worlds can be fixed. Which wouldn't normally be a problem...

...If she wasn't still a pony.


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Proofread by Dusty Old Qrow, RQK, Dusty Tomes (Ch. 2), Emtu, and Doctor Candor.

Chapters (15)
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Comments ( 1164 )

I should have known Sunset would go for a motorcycle.

This is going to be absolutely adorable!
Can't wait to see human Fluttershy's reaction! :pinkiehappy:

this story is alsome, it been please in my top 10 fave. cant wait to read more till than please update

you have doneyour self proud with this story! cant wait for more! congrats!

I think you made a story everyone wants as a new eqg movie.

Who's the idiot that disliked the story??

OH MY GOD YES YES!!
TAKE ALL MY YESIS :pinkiehappy:

This is brilliant plz update soon

I think that Twilight is also a bit smaller then she would normally be. I would but her normally about 3 and a half feet tall normally but now she is in fun sized! This will allow her to get into all sorts of trouble very easily while being able to easily hide if necessary. Great story will be tracking!

Yes, take my money!!!! Take my internets... hell take my pants! I love the concept of this story. With the upcoming official My Little Pony movie taking place sometime in 2017 (according to the wikia) this is everything I ever wanted.

Edit: Whew, now that I actually read it, nothing ultimately changed other than the supremely epic chapter being expanded on. I normally wait till things are done, but I tend to make exceptions for really well done summaries of stories I couldn't wait for. Not a lot of authors can do that.

Is there an underlying action segment that is going to happen as Twilight learns to adapt to the human world... this time as a pony instead of a human? Or am I reading too much into the plotline? I shall track, favorite and all that happy stuff.

I hope to read more from this soon... but I think you should consider adding a action adventure setting where some government suits try to examine Twilight and the Humane 6 should protect her. But whatever your plans for the story work too, I just read way WAY too many of the genre and like stories of this nature.

I'll track and upvote this for now...this intrigues me...

I don't know if hiding your non-transformation is a good move, Twilight. If magical repair is needed for the portal, not knowing something that important could cause... problems.

Yeah, I'd be as surprised as Sunset, I guess. I figured ponies were about doberman-sized. Considering that Equestria has trees, cows, dogs, and cats that are appropriately proportioned to ponies... it wouldn't be so bad if the world was a completely alien one, but it must be incredibly weird to find out that your home is apparently itty bitty.

It would be funny to see the girl's reactions if Sunset ever mentions the attractiveness (or lack thereof?) of Twilight. They've known Sunset Shimmer as a human for so long, I wonder if they really recognize that at the core of her being she's still a pony?

So... since this may very well extend past the weekend, what'll Twilight & Co. get up to over her stay? Sunset mentioned that she hasn't gotten a chance to study magic in forever, and Twilight's always willing to share knowledge (especially about magic). Considering that Sunset can sort-of use magic now via music, that could come in handy.

6279686 We can only hope Twilight survives. Fluttershy may ver well forget to let her breath.

This is a very promising opening. Definitely looking forward to more of this.

It occurs to me that since neither Twilight nor Sunset are really sure just how big a pony should be compared to a human, the mishap may have reduced the alicorn to less than her normal size. Regardless, it's going to be fun to see the other human girls' reactions, since they've never seen an Equestrian's natural form before.

Glompfest from EGFluttershy incoming in 3 ... 2 ...

I want to read more of this :derpytongue2: .. no I NEED too! :pinkiecrazy:

Dear god, this is going to be adorable ! :rainbowkiss:

You know, I don't care that much about Flash Sentry. But I predict a hilarious encounter later on.

glomp...... please dear goddess celestia this is soo daaaaaaawww

There is still no proof the Twilight can use magic. She's done literally nothing but sit there behind the statue and hop into the backpack.
Can she still levitate things? Does she still have equestrian hoof grabbing? Can she fly?

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You could do a visual comparison of the relative sizes by assuming Sunset's Friendship Diary and it's clone are the same size.

You could also use the Element of Magic for comparison, but it is likely it morphed in size through the Portal to fit the head of its Bearer.

Are there people who just lurk around the featured page and immediately hit dislike just to troll everyone:twilightangry2::facehoof:? Cause why would any dislike this story? seriously its to early to say if this will be a bad fic. All signs point towards it being awesome. I definitely need more of this.:yay:

Now if only it was a romance fic, this would easily reach top ten fics instantly in my book:derpytongue2:

This is off to a good start. A little weird to have Twilight be THAT small, but I get where you're going with that, so okay.

You need to do another editing pass on this, there are a few errors floating around. Also, you probably need to dial back your use of the word "iconic" a bit. As in, don't use it at all. Both times it's in here, it's...not the best match for the context.

Anyway, tracking this.

6280385 It could just as easily be a perspective thing. Or a trans-dimensional mechanic issue. The distance between atoms in the two worlds could be different, for instance. So, proportionally, you would be right about the size, but in coming to the other world without the change makes the actual difference obvious.

I hope you actually finish this and don't just leave it. Anyway seems my upvote button is broken because it only goes up by one, so I'll have to make do with that.

6279527 It's the leather jacket, really makes you think of a biker chick.

'Tis cute. Like and fave

That little Twilight has one hell of a man jaw.

I don't just like this story .I :heart:it . It kind of funny . Next chapter please.:fluttercry: please:fluttercry:

Fluttershy will go into full on squee mode, unless she outright faints from an overload.
Also, if Twi is now as big as a dog, does that mean that Spike actually got larger after traveling through the portal? You know, because Twi is now about as big as he was when he was a dog.
Fun!

I see you've adopted SS&E's idea of ponies being the size of cats. Nothing wrong with that whatsoever; in fact, I'm happy you did that for this story because it's almost too adorable!

Love this

Giving the bag one final shake to make sure there wasn’t anything stuck, she lowered the bag directly in front of Twilight, motioning with her hand towards the opening. Twilight’s eyes widened as she picked up on Sunset’s meaning.

This makes me think of this image pre05.deviantart.net/b604/th/pre/i/2015/159/2/d/backpack_twily_by_mistydash-d8wjv0d.png

Love this can't wait for more its just too CUTE :heart::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

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I cant get that image out of my mind reading this chapter, its going to be interesting. Lets see where it all goes.

6281776 it's just too Cute and I cant wait to see what happens :twilightsmile:

The imagery alone is too cute to handle!!! :heart::rainbowkiss:

911 Dispatcher: "911 Emergency, what is the nature of your emergency?"
Man calling: "There all dead!"
Dispatcher: "Who's all dead"
Man: "Hundreds of them!"
Dispatcher: "How did they all die?"
Man: "They all crowded around a computer screen staring at something, then they all just started dropping like flies!"
Dispatcher: "Do you know what caused this."
Man: "Diabetus!"
Dispatcher(talking to supervisor): "Dear god it's a code C U T E"
Supervisor: *Pulls off glasses* "Make sure it get's destroyed, the world must never know of what lies on that computer."

So Twilight is in the human world for who knows how long. I known shenanigans and cuteness will ensue (let's just start with Fluttershy and go down from here) so I'm not worried about that... and never mind awkwardness with Flash Sentry (that's going to be a good laugh :rainbowlaugh:) but I also hope to see another side of Twilight: since she isn't in immediate danger and has nothing really to do while the others work in the mirror I'd love to see Twilight explore and research the EqG!human world: from different places to customs to their nonmagical technology and literature.

Great premise, I'll keep watch on this.

Fluttershy is gonna die...no getting around that.

This is adorable so far. The cover image, and the whole pony in a backpack. Makes my grin grow. And my left arm go numb.

Why do I taste copper?

*thump*

6281206 Yes, unfortunately. We know them by many names: 'Those Who Dwell Within,' 'Authors' Bane,' or 'The Butthurt Ones,' just to name a few. I'm partial to the latter. :pinkiecrazy: We learn to ignore it. *sageliest of nods*

6281167 That's assuming that the journal didn't resize for similar reasons, since in many areas of media a magic item will resize to be the appropriate size for its user. Regardless, I think both Sunset and Twilight are more concerned with other things at the moment and likely wouldn't think of that yet.

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Meanwhile
AGH!
SO CUTE!
*Drops Dead*

I have seen a few (2) "Sunset-as-pony-in-human-world"-stories, but this is the first "Twilight-as-pony-in-human-world"-story I found.

This is going to be adorable!!
Take my Like and straight to my tracking-list.
(It's on top of the feature-box, by the way.)

This is Adorable and amazing I wish to see more!!!!!

Technically, ponies from Equestria are just about half the height of an average human, or about the size of a 2nd grader. :twilightsmile:

AAAAAAAAANNNNNNYYYWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYSSSSSSSSSSSSS...

*Head explodes from cuteness*

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To those wondering about Twilight's size, I was inspired by 1) the cover art, 2) SS&E Because Ponies Are the Size of Cats and They Love to Cuddle (which you all should read because it's adorable) and 3) As an owner of both large and small dogs, I find it's much easier to hug something that's not as big as you.

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All in good time. All in good time.

HNRRRRRNNNGGGH. *heart asplode of diabeetus*

Poor E.G. Fluttershy is gonna lose her mind.

6281417 I wonder if Sunset Shimmer's already established as a biker chick...

6283156 I'm a bit confused by that. My last dog was a mutt (with at least some Great Pyrenees and Golden Retriever) just a touch shorter than a St. Bernard, and my current dog is actually a pig in disguise that has convinced people that it's a Jack Russel/Beagle mix. Sure it's easy to wrap around a smaller dog with mostly forearm movements, but you don't get that same full, stretchy, embrace-y feeling that comes from cuddling with a giant armful of dog.

On the plus side, small dogs can't ninja-push you off the couch.

The picture is absolute adorable.

Good start. I'm just hopeful that people (Fluttershy especially) don't treat her as a pet (stroking her fur, picking her up without her okay) once they get over the initial dawww stage - it always comes across as them not caring about the transformee's true sapience/intelligence and makes them look bad.

6283661 You know with Fluttershy it's doomed to happen (At least at first.)

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