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Congrads on two miles words, haven't read it yet cuz I read it over on fanfiction. So don't keep me waiting forever!
7702418 Definitely worth it, this makes it hard to read other stories because alot of them don't stack up to the bar it sets.
5th time!
Hello! just want to say that I've done a reread and i love the story so far, keep it up! btw, congrats on reaching
2 million word barrier :D very few fictions have ever made it this far :D
I'm going to start with the following.
If you're a black person and can easily get offended... Piss off because I as a black male found the stereo types funny as hell. I too listen to rap music loudly and I dislike the beach.
Congratulations on 2 mill words. Not going to harp on the chapter too much.
Daemon corruption is bad. Reformed Moonbeam is good. Noble Nav is cool. Fancy is gay and Fleur is a slut. Some hints towards our resident vampire. And more Flow.
Well, that happened. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
To whatmustido: I salute you for your dedication to this story. You're awesome, man.
To the readers: Y'know now that it's confirmed that Nav's wing was turning bat-like, I'm pretty sure we know what physical change is going to be caused by that cursed ring.
Is it a good thing that I actually teared up at the scene with Moonbeam and Celeastia coming to an understanding and agreeing to look to the future? It seems like this story is just getting better and better with each new chapter.
Grants on the 2 million words!
Btw I thought humans made the alicorns and discord made the ponies from the alicorns. Which would make him as much the creator of the ponies as the humans of alicorns.
Congrats on the big two mil!
I want to read this but it's so biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig...
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Gaaayyyyyyyyy.
Really gay.
Even gayer than I am, and that's pretty gay.
jk don't be mad at me.
So he's slowly turning into Discord himself. The question. Is this another time paradox, or it's just the part of the deal from the prologue?
Now a demon wing. That's very fucked up and marysueish. I know what you are doing but it still rubs me the wrong way.
Outsider coming in to just say... this thing is over two million words...
God damn I say boy God damn
7702820
obviasly.. it was known from the start that nav is basicly discord.
Anyone else getting the feeling that nav is gonna become a female draqonicus. Tgen most likley will fight discord.
Seriously pegasus and bat wing.
Also bring back luna.
two million bloody words
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Somehow I feel like Luna would be totally cool with getting that as a gift.
Good chapter, shitlord.
A new chapter! Well, well, isn't this a surprise? So early in the month. You're patterns are hard to place. Anyway;
Well, we all know what happens when someone SHARES love with a changling. heheh.
"But sir, we've just begun learning about red caps and hinkie punks. We're not meant to start nocturnal beasts for weeks." (hahahahahaha. I love you.)
Alright, I know what the wing symbolizes... And I can only hope that I'm wrong. A certain someone has a bat wing and a feathery wing. And I'm not referring to Nav. If it turns out that that is what happens I'll be disappointed. I've had my suspicions for quite a while and this is not what I was hoping it would turn out as. It's not my story to tell, but it is mine to read and that entitles me to my own interpretation to what the story is. No matter the outcome, it'll remain my all time favorite piece of literature. I mean, I'm at the beginning of a 7th read.
I would like to congratulate you on writing 2,000,000 words. You probably don't care, but I honestly think you should be proud of what you've achieved. I haven't been here since the beginning, but I have been here for over half of the journey. Seeing your writing styles evolve over time has been an interesting and unique experience, one that I'm glad to have been allowed to have. Thank you, deeply and truly, for all that you have written, whatmustido. It means the world to me.
2,000,000 word achievement get! It's been a long road and we made it.
As a black person, I can confirm these stereotypes with a smile on my laughing face.
But I have just question:
How far are we into this fan-fiction? I'm not sure if you have already answered this question but I have a feeling we are around the 30~45% mark. Nav, you, and all the readers have come a long way to get this point and it's only going to get longer (inb4 we have to deal with Luna again ffs) and would be nice to know how far we have gotten on this wonderful journey if possible.
{P.S. If you need help with naming the titles of the chapters, I do not mind re-reading past chapters and offering title suggestions for you in the comments or email.)
All I'm seeing now when I think of Navarone is this:
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7703276 40 Chapters ago, he said 3/5ths the way or something like that.
So, Nav has a bat wing now.
On a side note, what pronouns should I use to refer to Nav? Male or female?
And YAY! 2 million words!
I've noticed his appearance has been getting more and more....chaotic. Since his wing got chopped I've had the theory that he would get a bat like wing. This further parallels him to Discord. I wonder if by the end he will fully become Discord, or essentially become the next Discord.
7703292 wow, I was just thinking that as I was looking through my old card collection and saw the chapter update
7703242 The out come of Nav turning into Discord is implicit in the deal he and Celly struck in the first chapter.
Also, am I the only one who saw the bat wing coming? Honestly, I was surprised when he didn't go with a bat wing and feathered wing back when he had the chance to decide.
Dude you are awesome.
I'll be honest, I skip all the smut (thanks for putting in skip functionality btw) but the story itself is GREAT :)
7703198 Let's just hope Nav get's her soul back so she can be free from Discord's control.
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I don't know, maybe?
7703610
Why do you hate sex?
7703506
Why would anyone choose that? It seems really uncomfortable and inconvenient. It would also look super weird and honestly kinda suck.
7703364
Whichever you want, fam. Triggering Nav would be difficult.
7703276
I dunnolol. And if you want to suggest titles, feel free.
7703108
No, you're right, it's pretty gay.
7703168
Understandable. I prefer rubbing things the right way, but sometimes things that are wrong just feel so right. I can guarantee you that it was not done to make him look cool, because I personally think it looks pretty fucking stupid.
7703149
Nav is a strong independent black woman that don't need no mare.
7703203
When Pinkie goes back to suggesting names for a female Nav, she should call him Eris.
7703241
That hurts my feelings
7703242
I have a feeling that if I ever miss a month, someone might find out who I am, kidnap me, break my legs, and force me to write.
7703680
The name Navarone has no meaning or an unknown origin, use it to your advantage.
Navarone the unknown to take the throne.
Nav's transformation into a bad DeviantArt OC is almost complete. Now all he needs is heterochromia! His eyes are weird, but they match, and that's unacceptable.
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That's actually a very good point that I hadn't considered. But if his limbs start changing, I think Celestia might get suspicious.
7703667
never had one to begin with. nav is a puppet. a golem. a recurring vessel to which discord has been using since the dawn of time. re-using cain over and over again to fulfill his wishes.
7703680 ...I like your story, but I'd never go Misery on your ass. That's too far.
7702741 I've read a Pokemon one that did. Don't think it's continuing anymore, but got over 2mill words last I checked.
7703753 It goes darker than that.
A Pegasi Wing, and a Bat Pony Wing. Relations with Griffons, Felines, Deer, Dragons, Ponies, Nagas, and other races. Created them, maybe in 'his own image'. Why, this is sounding more and more like someone we know. But who could that be. Do you know, Fluttershy?
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7703680
Bah, you've skipped a couple months at a time before. Sure, there would be much wailing and gnashing of teeth but you'd need at least a good 6-8 month hiatus before something like that happened. It takes time and effort to plan a kidnapping after all.
7702820 Agreed. Granted the sex change would be a point against that, but... well, Eris is a thing in some stories.
7703764 Don't forget, that freaky zebra shaman
saidcryptically stated that it was possible to sever Discord's control by getting Anonymous' soul or by accepting Ava as a replacement soul.Though whether that will actually work or not remains to be seen.
Does Nav's new wing use magic like his pegasus wing?
Huh. You know, I forgot about Athena. Been a while since she's been brought up.
Wait, if Athena is real, wouldn't that make the rest of Greek Mythology real?
...No.
Supernatural historical weapons, including a blade with the ability to freeze man or beast on contact, and a spear of lightning only capable of being held by specific beings...
The existence of Arachne, Athena, and Discord, which is the literal translation of the Greek Goddess, Eris...
A journey to collect objects to fight a literal god...
It is. I've discovered the truth.
Navarone is Percy Jackson grown up.
7703478 Sorry, 264.
7703680 One, I wouldn't and obviously neither would Nav since he didn't but I model Nav's choices as mirroring Discord's interests and I assumed Discord would want to change Nav into himself. Two, Nav constantly makes choices that are "super weird and honestly kinda suck. "
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Nope. 265
7703680
I don't hate sex. I'm just asexual IRL. I have almost no libido or sex drive. Sucks, but what can ya do.
Not my fault I was born with my 'sex drive' button in my brain set to 'off'
Whhheeee, the BIG 2 Mega OH.
Nav gets full transmutation, and doesnt take his previous body for an Iron Will or Gustav? Wow, that previous night really tired him out.
If Flo can offset Litho entire paintings at speed, maybe Nav needs to intrduce bulk simple paints, of whatever variation? Or even start using the Elementals in a Manufactory?
7702045 all that you get is down votes.
;
Maybe think over your opinion?
And his design just keeps getting weirder and weirder... By the end of this he's going to be half Ageless One half hell squid.
7703149 So, I guess your profile image is going to need updating, now isn't it? Unless that isn't supposed to be Nav, in which case my life for the past few months has been a lie... And technically it would have needed that since the permanent female change, and I'm just making a fool of myself goodbye.
Loving every new chapter! It's so good to see a fic on here last this long, and read along with 45+ people
I keep waiting for someone to notice his power to change the colors of the lamps. Blue balls!
Aaaaah! Yes. Congrats on shattering 2 million words
Another great chapter. It always makes my day when i see this updated. Keep up the fantastic work.