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now fully out of the closet as a my little pony fan, long live the herd!

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or how twilight found out about her assistant's secret relationship

spike has very strange tastes in mares....specifically ones with bug wings and holes in their legs.

(A/N, sex tag for implied bug on dragon sex and innuendo.)

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Harmony Pie #1 · 1 week ago · · 42 ·

That’s disgusting. Spike is a child

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But seriously though, he’s only a few years younger than you princess

you didn't even read this did you?

Harmony Pie #3 · 1 week ago · · 31 ·

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No, I didn’t, duh. But Spike is both a child in the picture and in canon.

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but this isn't canon, this is fanfic.

BronyKat #6 · 1 week ago · · ·

Pony Parker: Sir do you have any feelings about spike and his relationship in this fic?

Me: I have nothing but respect for that man

(pretty gucci fic my dude)

I'd love to see more of this just to see how everything turns out.

Absolutely loved this!!

The changeling then returned to his tea, not bothered at all by the fact that his best friend was sleeping with what was essentially his biological mother.

... Honestly I skimmed through your fic since I was just curious but at the same time too weirded out by the concept to read it line by line, but that line made me laugh enough to give you a thumbs up lol

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thanks!

but personally this is my favorite line:

I SPENT MONTHS BUILDING UP SEXUAL TENSION BETWEEN SPIKE AND A BUNCH OF OTHER FEMALE CREATURES SO HE’D HAVE A NICE HAREM WHEN HE GETS OLDER AND HE THROWS IT ALL AWAY ON A BUG!” Cadence yelled

This is hilarious.

Hillbe #12 · 1 week ago · · 2 ·

:raritycry:RAID !
:twilightblush: I GOT A BUG ZAPPER FOR A HOUSE WARMING GIFT
:pinkiegasp: Where's 'DOOME'?
:flutterrage: DISCORD!
:rainbowlaugh: nothing bugs me
:ajbemused: really?
:moustache: She's every mare I ever dreamed of!
:derpyderp2: Honeymoon in the Roach Motel?

“GREAT! JUST PERFECT! FIVE YEARS OF SHIPPING WORK DOWN THE DRAIN! I SPENT MONTHS BUILDING UP SEXUAL TENSION BETWEEN SPIKE AND A BUNCH OF OTHER FEMALE CREATURES SO HE’D HAVE A NICE HAREM WHEN HE GETS OLDER AND HE THROWS IT ALL AWAY ON A BUG!” Cadence yelled before taking in a few deep breaths “alright Cadence, get ahold of yourself, you’re the princess of love, you are single handedly responsible for over two-hundred loving marriages, you can salvage this, Chrysalis is probably open minded, the plan hasn’t failed yet. I’d better get to the drawing board while there’s still time though, PRINCESS OF LOVE AWAY!”

Greatest. Paragraph. Ever. Leave to Cadance to do this.

When I first read orange horns, I thought of Smolder first. Surprised Discord didn't tell Ember.

On an unrelated note, how awkward is it going to be when Celestia and Thorax learn that Spike calls Chrysalis "Mommy."

I would love a continuation of this.

This was a fun story for sure a nice silly way to start the morning for me.

I eagerly hope that a sequel is in the works... If not, this is a very entertaining one shot.

I would love to see a sequel to this. It was nice seeing a spike and chrissy story. Not a common one.

I love this story💚
SpikeXChrysalis is easily one of my favorite Spike ships

This story works surprisingly well. I love it :heart:

i hope for a sequel this story is too good to stop

I would love to see Spike 'hanging out' with Zecora in another story.

Surprisingly, Cadence's part didn't surprise me in the least though I'm curious on who these ladies she had intended to set up as Spike's harem. Betting more than a few are some very eager crystal ponies.

Thorax...I wanted a spit take but his reaction was actually funnier that way.:rainbowlaugh:

or how twilight found out about her assistant's secret relationship.
spike has very strange tastes in mares...._specifically ones with bug wings and holes in their legs.

why did I write this?

It blows my mind that this is what the first impression looks like on a story that hit the feature box. I would understand if it was meant to intentionally be a crack-fic. But the story itself is written really well!

Okaaaaaaay...I mean, I knew what I was getting myself into when I decided to read this, but still... :derpytongue2:

Not entirely sold on Spike and Chryssie being a thing for a lot of the usual and obvious reasons, but setting that aside for a moment, it's a decent tale. Sort of wish we saw the full aftermath of whatever it was Celestia planned to do in response to this, but, you know, beggers can't be choosers.

Thorax was perfect in this, though, I'll admit that. :rainbowlaugh:

This was actually a good story. Could use more editing, and you would probably get better feedback if you stop calling Spike a baby dragon! He's not a baby dragon, he's just short. So a young dragon would be more accurate.

:moustache:8/10!

8/10 this cant be more unless there is more

Very funny chapter, love it. But what about ember?

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Meh. I still ship it. :moustache::heart:

So, uh, sequel maybe. You don’t have to or anything but I kinda want to see thorax gain an understanding of mom jokes. :rainbowlaugh:

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Technically he still is a baby dragon. Smolder is what you would call a young dragon.

After i read the letetrs from discord i just couldnt stop laughing for a while :)

I half expected Discord to send a letter to Ember as well

Couldn't read this, needs a serious proof reading. And if it has been proof read, needs a better proof reader.

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Cut me some slack, I wrote this in less than a day.

We don't have enough Spike and Chrysalis stories, thank you.

all intensive purposes

All intents and purposes.

I'm not sorry.

This is a masterpiece of storytelling

Sorry is the last thing you should feel

I will never quite understand how this particular ship sprung up into existence and why I find it so funny

good story.

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Probably could have spent a few more hours looking for a proof reader then :ajsmug:

You badly need an editor. If you can get a concept like this off the ground and features, you're good enough for an editor to pick you up.

Apart from that, great job!

Never know my life need a fiction like this so bad, hehe, funny but cute! And from all of all letter receivers. I think Princess Cadence one is the unexpected one. XD

IMN

Am I the only one who finds the cover art anatomically weird?

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No, the anatomy does feel a little funky and off...not sure where the fault precisely lies though.

i tought you where going to add ember in the ones who received the letter

I'm not sorry.

Good. Everything is as it should be, then. :)

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