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now fully out of the closet as a my little pony fan, long live the herd!

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Spike Sparkle was just your average teenage kid. He went to school, hung out with his best friends Thorax and Ember, and kept up on his art hobby. Just because he wound up in Crystal Prep Academy's 'gifted and talented program' which included a full scholarship to cover all tuition expenses didn't mean he was anymore special than anyone else.

But after getting bitten by a rather strange spider, the entire trajectory of his life abruptly changes forever and the average Spike becomes nothing short of amazing. But is he up to the new responsibilities he now bears on his shoulders? Only time will tell.

For now? He's got a criminal kingpin to take down with the help of some new friends who have come from some pretty strange places.

(cover art by Carousel Unique! Go check out their stuff, it's amazing!)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 27 )

Flash Sentry had better turn out to be a supervillain. Or hey, you know, it has the same syllable count and cadence as Gwen Stacey, you could always snap his neck.

Dreamweaver might be the best not Spider-man Spider-man name I've ever seen.

That's Sunset in the cover art though. I think it's better to make it of Spike.

Please don't just make this a novelization of Spiderverse.

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Yeah I know. I'm getting art for Spike's spider-sona commissioned.

Once it's finished I'll swap out the cover art.

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Yeah I know but I couldn't come up with a better title.

The Amazing Eight:

  1. Spike Sparkle
  2. Sunset S. Shimmer
  3. Spider-Man
  4. Spider-Woman
  5. Spider-Man
  6. Spider-Girl
  7. Spider-Boy
  8. Spider-Woman

VS.
The Ultimate Six:

  1. Tirek
  2. Octavia Ottoman/Professor Cuttlefish
  3. Stalker
  4. Graveyard
  5. Vinegaroon
  6. Cinch/Goblin Queen

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and there! got Spike on the cover!

All right, I saw your request for someone to take a look at this, and I'm glad I did.

Yes, you're basing it off of a popular movie, but you do a good job of it. Brief descriptions with enough detail without being too clunky, and great character interactions.

You also have very clean grammar and punctuation, the sentences and paragraphs flow very well.

I'm looking forward to Spike getting some superpowers!

Managed to catch up fully after seeing this.


Looking forward to see what happens next.
Seeing Spike as a webslinging hero would be awesome.

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How about adding Flameweaver at the title front and call it: Flameweaver: Into the Equestria-Verse?
Or Calling it Spider-Weaver: Into the Equestria-Verse.

Wonder how Smolder looks?

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Unfortunately she won't be making an appearance here.

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Hmm. Is there a love square brewing?

Awesome story, I just read the first chapter and sorry this is overstepping my bounds but are you sure killing this version of sunset is the best idea imagine the drama that would come from her talking to another version of myself

This. is. Awesome!
Loved the first two Spider-Verse Films and can't wait for what this version of the story has to offer!
And to show my love for both the original film and this rendition, I did my own version of the opening credits and hope you don't mind!


Opening Credits

(cough) 
 

 


 

 

0:00-0:17 

[⚡️COLUMBIA PICTURES AND ALLSPARK PICTURES *️⃣PRESENTS]

[IN ASSOCIATION WITH 🕷️MARVEL AND HASBRO🦄

[✨AN AVI ARAD/ LORD MILLER/ PASCAL PICTURES/ FIMFICTION PRODUCTION🔥
 
[✍️A SONY PICTURES ANIMATION FILM🎥]

 
(Pause Music at 0:17)


 
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THE TRUE LIFE TALES OF

“WHO IS...
DAWNWEAVER?”

{WE BEGIN ON A COMIC BOOK OF DAWN WEAVER.}

Narrator: Alright, Let’s do this one a little differently this time,…. 
 
[Beginning of Chapter] 
(Resume at 0:18)

And so, we have now officially meet Spike Sparkle, his family and his new life starting at Crystal Prep Academy!
But for some reason, I feel like there's something off about Rachel. But i can't quite put my finger on it....Oh well, I'm sure its nothing...


Soundtrack in my head that I heard:

Spike is already feeling the pressure and stress of CPA and feeling like he won't achieve great expectations. But luckily, Spike has two friends who have the perfect remedy for over worked students. Also, I'm definitely interested in this universe's versions of Thorax and Ember!.....But now i think i know where this little surprise is going and what it might be....


Soundtrack in my head that I heard:

Spike and his two friends’ surprise is a new hangout hideout and to celebrate Ember’s find, the gang help Spike by making a mural honoring his pet bird. And while it was a night of fun, it seems that it was also a night of life changing events that raises questions like, will Ember profess her love to Spike despite swooning at Rachel the New Girl? What did Ember and Throax mean by what did they know about the New Girl Rachel? How did Ember find the abandoned hideout?
But for now, It would seem that Spike just got bitten by a spider?....How will this play out? Well I guess we’ll have to wait and see….


Soundtrack in my head that I heard:

Before the Graffiti:

During Graffiti Scene:

Comment posted by Hungry Hero deleted January 6th

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...okay, that rarity thing was a massive blunder on my part. I meant to put Rachel there.

I apologize.

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Just found your fanfic, really cool idea and I was wondering will the other Spidey Main 6 by Carousel Unique also appear?

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Cool, can’t wait to see it

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