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A new adventure in the lands of Equestria. However, it won't be by the hooves of six ponies. It'll be by the claws of a brave dragon known as Spike. Now, he'll get a taste of heroism, he thinks.
My story got featured. 11/29/22 - 11/30/22
The story takes place during Season 8.
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Ok, my opinion is still not 100% formed about your story. But even what I think is that your story has a future, your writing and you are very descriptive, I also liked the fact that you didn't make Spike a fearful person, since these Season 8 Spike went through a lot and he lives in a magical world , he was not going to be afraid at most to be surprised that this is what happened here. But like I said, I need to read more to say if it's really good or if it's just average. Now I wonder what villains he will face besides Vilgax, are you going to pony some of the classic Ben 10 villains or are you going to make new ones? Of course I know we have Tirek, Chirsalys, Sombra and Cozy Glow, I didn't forget I'm just asking. The same way I ask if there will be any romance in this fic? But if not, no problem.
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I have interesting villains in mind going forward. I am aware of the current villains Equestria has. However, I rather not spoil the story but let you find out for yourself. Thank you for your comment.
Sweet we don't get a lot of Ben 10 stuff. Hope you stick with it.
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I will. You enjoyed this chapter?
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More is coming.
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Yes. The storyline is good so far and the writing itself is easy on the eyes.
This caught my eye good.
Sweet
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Awesome
The omnitrix would be really strange in equestria. Omnitrix would end up scanning almost everything. Pegasus, unicorn, earth pony, alicorn, changeling, kirin, griffin, etc. As it would consider each a different "genetic" alien. Then grouping like groups. Even if it didn't scan an alicorn... it would likely "create" an alicorn after scanning earth, unicorn, and pegasis... and then doing a megaevolution form for them.
the omnitrix is always "learning".
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So true.
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Perfect
I always appreciate a good Spike story where he's the main character for once. Is he going to be more mature than Ben when he was 10?
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You will have to wait and see. I can't spoil the story.
The only things I can immediately find to dislike about this is using the same first 10 aliens, as usual, which seems rather cliche in my opinion. The other thing is how quickly Spike's forgiven Twilight.
Other than that, looks good.
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Thanks.
An interesting idea. I sometimes watched Ben as a child, but unfortunately I couldn’t watch it on a regular basis, so I’ll limit myself to reading a crossover story
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Will we see more of Twilight sparkle end her friends end princesses or was that it
I may have some critical opinion on Luna becoming Nightmare Moon being nothing but bullshit on her end thus making the threat which brought the Mane 6 together seem nothing but a lie(and out of all the things Rarity says besides goodbye she all she did was beg a crystal shard from DiamondHead, Bitch Seriously?! Some friend you are), I’ll at least say that the rest seems ok for a Ben 10 vibe and starting a new adventure.
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I can send you a link to watch the original if you want?
Also, thanks for the compliment.
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More is coming later
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You'll have to wait and see
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Princess Luna knew what she was doing. Yea, it's a charade but it had purposes. For Luna, it's a win-win as long as any info about the plumbers stay in secret.
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Thank you, I would appreciate it if you would do this
Pretty good so far
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Thanks
Seeing Blueblood in this and not a jerk is refreshing. I can't wait for more. I also fully expect Twilight to be hostile at some point
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Thank you. I'm adding ponies and creatures no one would think be a plumber.
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It's great to see.. Why do I have a feeling that Zephyr Breeze will be one lol
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You'll never know who's part of it hehe.
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Hahahahaha Oh this will be amazing
Ooooo! Interesting. I hope Twilight does not do anything dumb.
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And now we're going to accompany our three main protagonists on their journey around the world, going through all of Equestria until they reach the lands of dragons, going to help all other races against powerful enemies. I loved how you inserted the theme of travel like in classic Ben 10 where they were always traveling across the United States while having their adventures.
Are you going to just use the aliens from the classic? Or are you going to implement any of the other seasons?
I know its not possible but it would be cool to see Spike become an Anodite. It would be cool to see how he would react to having magic considered he was raised by a pony whos practically dedicated her life to studying it.
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We will have to wait and see
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It would be hilarious. Twilight would be dumbfounded and pissed off that Spike can use magic exceedingly well.
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You're going have to wait and see for what I have in stored
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Lol Spike would literally be magic at that point.
Why do I feel like Trixie is going to follow our group either in secret or just attach her wagon behind the RV.
It's good for Spike to take the watch seriously, but also have fun with it.
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I guess you'll have to find out what happens with Trixie.
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Okay, Trixe is a plumber! I was surprised. Will Twilight be kind of like that wizard who is Ben and Guew's enemy?
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What do you like so far?
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You'll have to wait and see.
I have just finished reading all 4 of your current chapters and I have to say I love this idea also I'm a ben 10 fan myself, I look forward to seeing more.🤩
I can't believe Starlight destroyed Sugarcube corner!
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Sounds good. Thanks
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It's a desperate move before Spike gets exposed when the timer goes out.