Take a Look into this universe of Equestria,with similar but different worlds.
With a lone Spider lost in a world of possibilities end up in this new world and changed the course of it's future through a certain dragon with a shattered world view build into a beacon of hope and a source of inspiration. Watch how the world throws everything at him, Spike perseveres through it all as an all new man,
a Spider-Man
This stories is what happens if Spike ends up being bit by a Spider that gives birth to Spider-Man, and how this parallel with the world around him will effect the his choices and determine the person he wants to become. I also changed some of Spike's character to make him stand out from the comic relief image and the all-round never do wrong guy and write him more like a teenager or mostly an mature adolesncent but still has that hint of immature in him.
The story starts at Season 2 Episode 1.
Based on Spider-Man Comics/Video-Games/TV-Shows.
I don't own either Spider-Man, My Little Pony, or the Cover Image.
Unlisted Tag: Comedy
I'm interested to see where this heads, but the first issue is that it goes a little too fast. Slow the pacing a little more so the plot can breathe and give room for development, also have the words that happen after a comma be spaced.
Also, make chapters a little longer so that you provide enough content to satisfy readers.
Anyway, I hope this helped have a good day.
You've got a lot of run on sentences here. Some of these paragraphs go on way too long.
The amount of information and the way you are communicating it is very overwhelming and disconcerting.
I would suggest breaking up and or shorting your paragraphs if you want people to be able to make it through this.
This is a definite improvement over the first chapter. The pacing is nice and I felt engaged the whole way.
The usage of pictures is masterfully done as I can easily understand the emotions your getting at.
Some paragraphs like this one could still stand to be broken up.
And you need to work on adding spaces after coma's.
On the whole though it's a tremendous bit of improvement.
I can see the disjointed affect your going for and as long as you fix the previous chapter so that it better demonstrates the lead up in the author's note you should be good.
Anyways I greatly enjoy Spiderman and you have a interesting premise in regards to how Spike is feeling so I'm going to track this and see how it goes.
Came upon this Spidey Spike story & like what I read so far! So glad that Spike got his eyes open with all the crappy treatment that culminated with S1 finale & how he seems to come out on his own with these new powers!
Also I'm on a high after seeing the new Spiderverse movie so this story's most welcome, looking forward to the next chapter!
Loved it , i will be waiting for more
I mean has that ever happened before? They don't seem like the mother hen type.
I wonder how Spider Drake is going to hide his identity.
It's not like there are a whole lot of dragons in Ponyvile. I also can't help but wonder given the timing if Discord was involved somehow, or if he'll get blamed for it.
Liking this story so far, please continue this.
Wonder if Spike will be calling out the Mane 6 behavior toward him in regards to their *friendship* on future chapters?
Nice gauntlet of Spike testing out his powers (with Owlicious help) & nipping Twilighting in the butt in regards of *Lesson Zero* events!
Was a bit worried of Spike turning into a villain after seeing the resentment he now has against the Mane 6 & Celestia bit that last part of him mentioning the CMC put those fears to rest!
Wonder if the Mane 6 will finally catch on Spike behavior against them next chapter? Can't wait to see what else it's in store!
I’ve been looking for this concept for a long time and I finally found it. Pretty good so far
Which spider-man iteration are you baseing for spike? Toby maguire, Andrew Garfield, Tom holland, Miles Morales or one of the many comics, or are you creating a whole new original story for the spider-verse.😎
So says the Spectacular Spider Drake!
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Hey welcome back, with an action scene to boot!
For a sec I thought Mrs. Cake was gonna go into labor with that tense moment with the dogs, glad that wasn't the case! Spike still needs a new costume though that isn't Mare-Doo based if he's gonna keep taking down creeps!
Till the next chapter!
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Great to see you around the feed.
I honestly can’t wait to see how this unfolds, especially since things have just ramped up. I wonder how the dynamic between Spike and the Mane Six will play out from here, as he hides his identity as… Spider-Man… er Spider-Dragon.
Whatever name fits best, I can’t wait for what comes next.
If Spike becomes Spider-Dragon, who will be his Rogues’ Gallery?
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Some of Spider-Man's villains that I've incorporated in the MLP world, plus some interdimensional shenanigans should have Spike battle some other Spider-Counterparts villains.
The Sky is the limits.
Well, he got the Canon event of making the first superhero costume being a terrible fit and made out of scrap clothes. It's on his first steps of becoming a legend.
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Which ones?
We have to start somewhere minor, so smaller villains before the big guys, maybe like a shocker, just a regular guy using a device that shoots sound waves.
I have 2 questions:
1. Is Spike going to the wedding because he's not eager to go anywhere with the girls?
2. Is Spike going to notice something off with Cadence like his Spider-Sense going off when he gets close to her?
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For the first question, we don't know if he's attending the wedding. Well, for the second question, Spike won't notice that cadence isn't cadence if he's tired, got a huge fight and needs time to recover, or not paying attention, which will fail his Spidey-sense, but if he's none of that and he feels his spidey-senses going off then he might find out what something's going on with cadence.
Is this going to be just Season 2 or Season 2 and beyond?
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It is going to be through Season 2 and beyond.
When will the next chapter come out.
For the next chapter, hope is a little bit more longer, and we get to see the official Spider-Dragon or Spider-Drake costume before the actual wedding events happen.
I'm like where this story is going. Keep it up 💯.
Hey welcome back & great chapter! Hoping to see more of it soon!
How will Spike be able to keep his secret identity in this story? Isn’t he like, the only dragon living only in Equestria?
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Yes, that is true, but unless he makes a costume that can hide the fact that he's a dragon in the first place.
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The rules first: Spider-Man across the Multiverse has a ridiculous homemade suit. Second, make web-shooters that work. Lastly, design and make an official costume. Yeah, there's always time for jokes, but we already have that.
Diamond tiara: I want pictures of the spider. encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRixlMKVJzH1vlnl8gQo3mUVTwENjTtiF4eJQ&usqp=CAU
Also, another way they keep his secret is not to use his fire since he's the only dragon with green fire in Ponyville unless the spider bite can make him change his fire breath color. Or he gets another different type of ability he already has invisibility like Miles.
how about Meteor coming crawl climb up venom black symbiote suit combine DC multiverse open portal coming no where hit in the face spike purple beetle suit
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I know nothing about DC lore; I only know that the Blue Beetle is a superhero. So since they're multiple colors, it's just like the Green Lanterns but was Beatles and no, I didn't see the movie either.
Also, when Spike's trading, his abilities will be. We should see Spike going to a location to see if he can control spiders. The answer results are up to the interpretation of the writer...
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good Story I'm use imagination and I'm just guessing
When is the next chapter.
how about have love spike x penny Parker