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Flynt Coal


Cool guy extraordinaire. Writer. Storyteller. Shockingly Canadian.


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It's Twilight Sparkle's first week at Canterlot High School after the Friendship Games—after she unleashed the magic and turned into a monster. Sure, Twilight has Sunset Shimmer and her friends, but the rest of the school has not forgotten, and many have not forgiven.

Half a state away in Los Santos, the once powerful criminal organization known only as the Fake AH Crew is near the end of its rope. Geoff the Boss is in prison, and his gang is losing territory. But the Fake AH Crew have one last play to make: If they can spring their boss, they may have a chance to reclaim everything they lost.

But when fate brings the Fake AH Crew to the small town of Canterlot, everything begins to unravel. A web of plots ensnares the little community, turning it into a powder keg waiting to explode. At the center of it all is Twilight, hoping to prove to her friends and to herself that she's not a monster... even if it means facing very real ones.

Edited by BradtheBrony

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 71 )

ITS FINALLY HERE! Now to pick a song to listen to while I read....
Meh I think I'll go with this for now.

Hey! Anyone got any suggestions?
BTW, AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!
(Wow, I'm FIRST?!?!? Thats new...)

So the Fake AH Crew's in Canterlot? Well, someone better get ready with the body bags, fire trucks and all that jazz.

P.S. Oh god, I just realized that it is possible for the crew to get magic powers. Celestia help anyone who comes out against a magical Ryan, the Mad King.

Oh god, its gonna take a while for me to read 'Jack' and think of a woman. Other than that, this is a great start to the story.

7600755 You are right, I completely forgot about that.

And now Canterlot is fucked. Sweet opening chapter, I'm looking forward to see what you incorporate into the story from the let's plays. Hope to see more soon, keep goin and stay golden^^

I just notice that the author of the cover art is Flynt Coal.

<Shaxx> This is amazing! </Shaxx>

I never would have thought of putting Achievement Hunter in the Equestria Girls universe. Brilliant idea, can't wait for chapter two.

7600755 I more or less based all the character designs on AH's avatars in GTA Online, and Jack does play as a woman in that (and just about every game where he can).

7600843 Yup. Same as the author of the story!

Gem

Reading Jack's lines as Jack's voice coming out of his GTA girl is hilarious.

7601348 amazing so far and can't wait for more. But can that more be longer than 9 chapters? It's not enough.:fluttercry:

We ALL know whats up with the missing animals right? Especially if you remember what happened to Edgar.

From the looks of it Twilight could use the confidence boost shed get from running with AH.
Also love how you incorporated one of their heists flawlessly.

And a bit of a redoing of their appearances is an interesting touch to make them fit the world.

Call I can say is Canterlot has no idea the insanity that is heading its way.:pinkiecrazy:
Definitely going to track this as I can't wait to see more.

7601605 Right? The GTA Let's Plays are so much more fun in general when you imagine their voices are actually coming from their characters!

7601801 I don't want to make any promises, but having had a chance to really go over my outline, I can't help but think it might be a little longer than originally planned after all...

7602136 I will say, the animals disappearing has been going on well before the Fake AH Crew got to Canterlot. Nevertheless, that's one of the many details in this chapter I recommend you remember for later....:raritywink:

Here come the Fake AH Crew! Looks likes trouble in Canterlot is about to brew! :rainbowdetermined2:

Poor Takedown. Never knew him well. Never got to go out with and bang the pretty Pepper Spray before she died after he just asked her out and he himself died a virgin.

7602310 I see... well...
The plot thickens, thanks I will try and keep it in mind.
And by the way, you are an awesome writer and
just keep being awesome!

A solid start to what looks to be a great story! The Heists GTA 5 Lets Plays are probably some of the best ones AH has done. Cannot wait to see what kind of mayhem they'll unleash in Canterlot.

I myself have just gained some more inspiration from both this story and the upcoming Legend of the Everfree to brainstorm and write a crossover superhero-comedy fic between Equestria Girls and X-Ray and Vav. Thanks!

Oh, you're giving me goosebumps. Your RvB crossover was incredible. I can't wait to see how this plays out!

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7620691 Who's to say Dusky Darneil isn't just an OC?

I admit as an avid hater of Equestria Girls, I was skeptical. But after reading I can't stop imagining of all the hilarious havoc to come.
Fake AH Crew is gonna wreck Canterlot like Geoff and Michael at an open bar. I got $20.00 on Shining getting run over, bipped or glowed by Ryan or Michael and $10.00 on Gav accidentally killing him. Also I can only imagine Jack as a tranny like Dr. Girlfriend is theorized to be.

:pinkiesad2: I gotta ask...Will Detective Burnie and Joel make an appearance by any chance?
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7656813 As great as that would be, my plan is to keep the crossover limited to AH and their GTA videos. Still, you never know... :raritywink:

Yay! I love all the references from old Achievement Hunter videos that you put in here. Fucking killing it with that comedy. :rainbowlaugh:

So Derpy is good with computers. Do you think she can find a way to increase the RAM on my PC?
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Don't worry. She knows what she's doing.

YAY! New chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!

Gav's got a point. Selfies are much more subtle than photos. And the tower of pimps strikes again. I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work:pinkiehappy:

God damn I love the references! Gav and Dan's conversation was fun to read through, and now we know that the lab data was with our OC. The question now is who he is and what he was doing with it. Anyway, the heist is coming and I can't wait to see what comes next. Keep goin and stay golden^^

7733055 It's Kerry, obviously. Did the red hair and freckles not give it away? Also, do recall Lil J's heist was all about busting Kerry for working with the cops. How else could he have gotten this data if he wasn't a traitor?

OK screw confidence boosting Twilight will be a hell of a lot safer with FAHC as theu can protect her.

Dude mixing in the official heists as well as the AH ones perfectly.

I cannot wait fr or more and it sucks I'm stuck waiting for an update.:raritydespair:

Keep up the good work looko g forward to seeing where this goes and what happens with Kerry.

As a dog owner, Spike cracked me up in this chapter.

Now onto an actual conversation me and Flynt had aka accidental innuendo time!

“Is Twi comin’?” Applejack asked hopefully.

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Not like that.:ajbemused:

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7734658 A love of dogs seems to be one of the things we share.

That and dirty minds :raritywink:

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7732902 There's always a method to Gavin's madness. Problem is he's terrible at explaining it to others!

Scorch215 pestered me to read this fic. And when I finally decided to give it a try, I first binge watched the AH heists series.
I have to say, I like the fic. The conflict of the AHs reckless abandon for human life and property that stems from the GTA5 game versus the peacefull ignorance of the EQG promises to keep the story interesting for quite a while. The plot that is already on its way also shows promise for long term entertainment.
You got me curious how the story is going to unfold and how our favorite girls are going to be effected by the methods used by Geoff and his crew. The idea of Shining Armor in the police force added a particularly juicy piece to the whole as well as hinted upon history of the Twilight household and AH.
Take my like, my tracking and keep up the good work. :twilightsheepish:
Also :yay: for Derpy. Sad that Trixie had to become the bully, but I guess someone had to be and it might as well be her.
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7738159 Glad you're enjoying it so far! :twilightsmile:

Hmm, a USB Drive containing knowledge of magic, a mysterious OC who was in possession of said drive, another heist going down during the concert, Twilight's family apparently having a history with the Crew, and animals going missing. They are all connected somehow. I won't make any assumptions, but you have my attention. Just please don't kill off Derpy like you did in the last story.

If I could convince Principal Cinch to bring you to Crystal Prep

STOP

It was stated several times that Cinch doesn't allow pets at all in CP. Specially Dogs. Because she's allergic to them. And she didn't know that Twilight owns a pet dog.
Although, I don't blame you for missing that, since it was an inconsecuential detail (i.e: lacked a proper punchline).

7750145 Admittedly it has been a while since I watched FG, so I don't remember all the little details. Fortunately, Twilight's comment is just as inconsequential here as that fact was in the movie so it's not like I need to replan the entire story around it or anything

Gavin's heist didn't go too well, as expected. But the part with RD insulting Ray was fucking priceless:rainbowlaugh:

Flynt Coal I blame you for me laughing like a maniac through most of this chapter.

I am glad Ii was home and not in public.

As always good chapter, and Twilight's insult me as painful, literally physical pain it was so bad. :rainbowlaugh:

Also Ryan is hands down best criminal. :rainbowderp:

What is this a crossover of?

7850925 Achievement Hunters... specifically their characters/playstyles when they are doing GTA V.

If I haven't said it before, I'll say it now:
You are a genius!
Seriously! Awesome work, can't wait for the next one!

please don't remove ray I know he doesn't work with they guys anymore but I loved the chemistry of when they did work together and you seem to be doing a good flow with it

7850925 These idiots are the Fake AH Crew:

All the rage is filling me from your cliff hangers.

God damn, why does every single chapter leave me wanting more. This was a great chapter, and I loved the fact that Dusky was Kerry. I had a feeling when they talked about Kerry disappearing, but I didn't think he was Kerry. Anyway great chapter as usual, keep goin and stay golden^^

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