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Fire Gazer the Alchemist

The pen is mightier than the sword, but the nuclear bomb's got them both beat.


While visiting Canterlot with Limestone, Marble runs into an energetic pony who could match her twin in cheerfulness. And she's cute. And wants to talk to her. And cute.

Naturally, Marble explodes from shyness.

Pre-read by: Timaeus
Ch. 1 Audio Reading by TheCaptainSand - Scarlett Blade

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 567 )



Great story my friend! Marblette tho...Eh, I'll support it :rainbowlaugh:

Can't wait for more.

Well now, if that's not cute I don't know what is. I like it. I now ship it. You should write more of the things I now ship due to this story

I do hope to do more of this ship in the future, so be on the look out for it.

Ironically I just got back from the dentist to learn that I have a cavity forming. Guess that's what I get for writing this.

This sip is really random and obscure. But i think you are making it work!

Holy shit, does Colgate have a pudge. I mean, I showed up, saw the cover art and was like, DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN, THE ASS WAS FAT.

This is a really cute story! And I think you just started another ship, by the way.

I can kinda just picture Limestone sorta, blinking for an hour trying to parse what Marble just told her.

Upvoting solely for the cover art. I lauww'ed (Laughed and daww'ed)

Pretty good, can you doa limestone (Someone pairing) cause that would be good!

6805025 Exactly - I was expecting the last line to be Limestone staring at her sister before delivering a flat 'what'.

I can picture Minuette saying, "Hi! I have just met you, and I love you!"

Seriously though, this was great.


i need moar :rainbowkiss:

I'd like to see Limestone's reaction to that statement.

6805425 Heh. So would I. I have a feeling it would be like, "You what"

1. This story is absolutely adorable and fantastic.

2. New ship accepted. :heart:

6803642 oh well. Thats what you get when you write things sweet enough to rival Pinkie's baked goods.

Okay this is really sweet, I like this story. And accept this ship. :twilightsmile: As with everyone else, I'd love to see more. Especially Limestone's reaction. :rainbowlaugh:

I need to stop reading cute things...my heart can't take it...and it's only 5:30 in the morning...:raritydespair:

I ship this pairing now. Thanks for contributing to My headcanon.

“Yep. So, what happened with you?” Limestone asked.
“I’m not sure,” Marble admitted. A tiny smile and matching blush formed on her face. “But… I think I have a marefriend now.”

D'aaaaawwww! :raritystarry:
This was adorable! Great work! :pinkiehappy:

In a separate note: I really should stop reading these stories before I start needing insulin shots... :pinkiecrazy:

Good lord! I need more of this. I've got a fever, and the only prescription is more cowbell Minuette x Marble. :rainbowkiss::heart:

The cuteness is over 9000!!!!

Aww I was hoping to see more of them talking to each other. Sweet piece.

Well, now I must ask thee for a sequel. This is quite a fun story and I wonder if indeed Minuette is going to reciprocate them.

So my shipping side is playing it out like this.

"You totally think of me as your marefriend?"
Marble of course responded with a nod and blushing mmhmm.
"You are really cute when you do that. Well, I think we need to go on a full date for that! I'll pick you up at 7 on Friday, so prepare for full out picture sessions!"
Of course Marble was melting over the fact that Minuette was very much reciprocating.

Bleh, I know, I am terrible, but that's just a little of what I see could happen. Minutte being the photo bomber, I quite imagine she'll want lots of pictures to enjoy Marble when they can't be together, and pictures Marble can have whenever they're not around each other.

Of course, the stone of shipping will be, interesting to say the least if it were ever involved.

So Rambling but, I DO love how you've characterized them both and brought Marble 'out of her shell.' so to speak. It was also a good rendition of someone being shy being given an outlet. Shyness isn't easy, but it can bring out beautiful things.

What a cute story. I really enjoyed it!

dawn. please, may I have another?

Will Limestone react confusedly or angry? Or both?

Soooooo, not that I don't like this ship, I really do like it, but what about Big Mac?

Limestone scare him off?

I like this. You gave Marble a personality, characterized everyone very well, and the dialogue was never stilted or boring or cliche'd. The character's personalities, Minuette especially, shone through. It's far more interesting than the usual crop of "A meets B, falls in love" stories.

A very cute story. :pinkiesmile: Thank you for sharing.

The Cuteness levels are too high!

Clutches heart as blood is replaced by sugar.


Good ship. This is good ship.

This story was admittedly better than rock soup.

All my d'awww and then some. :heart:

Now I really want to know how did Limestone outta all ponies manage to not break a pony's neck in the presentation... :rainbowhuh:

You know, even though I find the "canon" Marblemac ship utterly adorable...

This one is so much cuter! :pinkiehappy: The characterizations where spot on, especially for Marble and Minuette. It was like watching the show itself.

Youve earned a well-deserved like, darling. :raritywink:

Oh, that's simple. The girl lives, sleeps, and breathes her farm. She'd never throw a wrench into a presentation to help ot.

A fanfic?

With Marble?

That isn't a cheap cliche unoriginal clopfic pandering to the hormone driven internet users?

Also features quite possibly the best character named after a brand of toothpaste ever?

And is quite charming and cutesy that even a manly manly man like me self enjoys it?

This gets a bright shiny star!

I haven't got any right now I'll come back to the comment section when I find some...

Hey guess what?

I found that shiny star I promised to give this fanfic!

Just found this in some weird floating box with a question mark on it. How coincidental can you get, huh?

Anyway, take the star, kiddo. Your fanfic has earned it! I don't think anyone else will be needing this, and it also makes you feel tingly and energetic when you hold it! Is awesome!


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