Are there times you've ever wondered, "Jee, why did the girls at Canterlot High forgive Sunset Shimmer for her evil succubus meddling so easily?"

The answer's simple: "Because, deep down, she's a pretty pretty pony, you stupid melon fudges!"

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"APPLES! Squee!" And Sunset headbutted Applejack's tray.

Quite simply the best mental image of Sunset I've ever seen.

"Bummer. Well..." Sunset winked. "Remember to be polite! Keep your tails down at all times, except for when they pass by. Then give it a little flick just to get their attention." She leaned back with a smug smile. "Works every time."

Oh, you tease! :moustache::scootangel:

Very sweet and silly fun. Nicely done Skirts.

I'm glad Csquared has demonstrated how great Sunset Shimmer is. Now I can fully appreciate this piece.

I was waiting for Pinkie to join in, you had to know that she was going to.

"Girls, I do believe I have made an observation," Rarity whispered, continuing to brush the teenager's red and yellow hair. "I think Sunset Shimmer might be adorable."

Ding, ding, ding, we have a winner.


I can't help but think seeing a grown woman/teenager acting like that would be weird, permanently, though.

I think I speak for everyone when I sum up this story as such:



I have no idea what I just read.

All I know is that it was adorable.



"And, all things considered, she's mostly harmless nowadays."

Was she blown up by Vogon bureaucrats to make room for a hyperspace bypass? No, she was not.


Is this the second time I've seen this from SS&E. Is it going to be a reoccurring thing? Because it should be.

I enjoyed this, and I adore Sunset, but it was still sooooooooooo weird...

...Well done.

Seriously. My current mental state is a mix of "I can't even", uproarious laughter, and squeeing (DEM HOOFIE-KICKS!!!:rainbowkiss:).

I love it.

Man that was so adorable, I can't even.

This demands to become headcanon and establish its own ShimmerPonyPerson universe. (though they could stand to nudge her towards using human terms and not headbutting food. Happiness is one thing, insane asylum is another)

Though her horsey rides seem like the most adorable thing that ever needed to be illustrated. Yes even more adorable than the Rarity couch scene. :heart:

5232827 One word: DDDAAAAAAWWWWWWWW!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::heart::heart:

"Guysss!" Pinkie hissed and crab-walked up the steps. "Wait for meeee!" Fluttershy held the door open for her. "Thankie-Thankies! By the way, nice flower print, Fluttershy. Very pretty!"
"Uhhhhhh..." Fluttershy blushed red as a beet. "Uhhhhhh!"


For I Have No Mouth and I Must Wat

What in God's good name am I reading and why am I reading it? Brain cells are precious, you know.
*Clicks to the next chapter*

"So, what you're saying is..." Rainbow raised an eyebrow. "If I pranced around like an idiot on all fours and started eating fruit without using my hands made silly horse noises, then I would be adorable?"
"Don't be ridiculous." Applejack winked. "Yer already adorable."


Uhm... Okay then.

That was too cute... Yeah.

"The Onyx Eclipse!"

Oh you :ajsmug:

What the oblong balls of Oaty Oaterson is...

You know...nevermind. Don't even wanna know.

That was one of the weirdest things I've read in a while. Even the cute was a "weird" kind of cute. But thankfully it was a good kind of "weird", which, if you think about it, is a weird kind of "good". But any good is better than no good, so it all works out for the best.

"Girls, I do believe I have made an observation," Rarity whispered, continuing to brush the teenager's red and yellow hair. "I think Sunset Shimmer might be adorable."

I was surprised, too, when I found out.

It sounds like Sunset is getting homesick.

Hmm. Seems that there were some unusual psychological side effects to Sunset growing horse ears. Well, as long as she's happy (and her friends can remind her that this is the universe with sapient primates every now and again,) then I'm happy for her. Though I do wonder if she's going to start thinking her horn's gone missing...

In any case, a very cute read. Thank you for it, Skirts. :twilightsmile:

(Hmm. That would actually be interesting. One of the other girls borrowing the journal and writing, "Dear Twilight, Sunset exhibiting equine behavior. Please advise.")

"Is everything alright?" Rarity asked. "You seem rather... th-that is to say, your voice sounds—"


Only a little hoarse. :trollestia:

"Sunset Shimmer! What are you doing! You can't eat all those fucking carrots!"

"FUCK YOU I can't eat all these carrots!"

What the hay did I just read?!? My mind is just spinning from it all, and the crazy part is I understood it all. Oy vey

I'm torn between "Yes!" and "Wat?"

5234001 that's almost exactly what I was thinking. :rainbowlaugh:

5234085 Well if anything, it helped me bust out some more episode ideas for my Power Rangers Megaligo series that I'm attempting to start filming soon.

This entire chapter raises so many shipping possibilities.

"Of course not, Rainbow. She knows better than that." She smiled and leaned in, "nuzzling" the teenager.

Aaawww. :rainbowkiss:

Cute as it may be, how does one nuzzle without a muzzle? Where on earth would one nuzzle a human? But hey I'm not gonna question it too hard. If I had an adorable mound of bacon curled up in my lap, I'd akwardly smush my face into it too.

Acne fo'days, but worth it.

P.S. Have you ever tried nuzzling something resting in your lap? It's akine to trying to suck your own dick. You kinda need to remove your rib cage and a couple vertebrae...or be a pornstar.

Then again, their heads are GIGANTIC. So perhaps Rarity could brush her nose agaunst Sunset's ear or something.

all I can think is Sunset has suppressed all her natural pony tendencies for so long that they've built up too much and she can't help but act as ponyish as possible. Not trying to kill thew comedy, but Sunset does seem to be having a mental breakdown, as funny as it is there should be a reason.

This story is sooo sweet! :heart:

One typo: The phrase "Principle Celestia" in chapter one should be "Principal Celestia"

This is adorable and I love it!:twilightsmile:
More please!

Rick Ross reference in an mlp fic?....kudos

Not sure what this is, but it's adorable for sure!


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