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Summer Dancer


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This one made me laugh, good story! It sure brightened up my day. :scootangel::derpytongue2:

This is just perfect. There needs to be a sequel involving Rainbow Dash fleeing from the cops. :rainbowlaugh:

Awesome story as usual. :pinkiehappy:

5392003
I can't wait to see your story next XD.

She turned to Rarity and made all sorts of odd gestures with her hands.
Rarity frowned and mimicked Pinkie’s hand movements. “I. Don’t. Know. What. That. Means!” Pinkie repeated the gestures. “Just tell me what you’re doing! I’m right next to you!”

Is it just me being crazy and hoping for it, or is this a TMNT reference? :pinkiehappy:

5392120 Lol YES! I was hoping someone would catch that! :rainbowlaugh:

Also, Mikey is my fav :derpytongue2:

5392122 He's my 2nd favorite! :pinkiehappy: I love Leo! :derpytongue2:

5392128 Yes, he's so cute when watching space heroes!!!

5392139 I know! :rainbowkiss: Cuteness overload!

I demand a sequel with the sleepover (and the Dazzlings meeting Maud :pinkiehappy:)

5392107
YEAH! is right bulk biceps XD. Well we all can't wait. :scootangel:

They have bras upfront.

Where else would they be? :pinkiecrazy:

I laughed myself crazy reading this. Really good story! Couple of things, though:

My biggest problem with this story is treating the Equestria Girls world like it's our Earth when it isn't, but that's a pet peeve of mine in EG fanfics.

Also, there ARE some errors that need to be picked out. Run a flea comb through this for stray capital letters and the like.

That was insane. Rainbow deserves to be arrested for dissing Frozen

One more thing occurred to me a while after I read this:

That bit at the end with Sonata framing Rainbow and Pinkie barely putting up any protest...in hindsight, it...has issues. Issues which could be resolved by having it be Trixie instead of Rainbow.

This was absolutely ridiculous. I love it. A+/10

When I'm so tired, I thought the blurb said not Sonata, but Sombra... it's time to go to bed.

Oh god, that was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:
Especially the escalator part XD

I am totally holding out for that possible sequel! :derpytongue2:

Tomorrow will come and, with it, Rainbow Dash's revenge, I think.

Offence, you sound like a dying cat.

This line took me a while. It seemed like Aria (I'm pretty sure it's Aria) was calling Adagio by a nickname. Then I realized that Aria meant it as the opposite of "No offense."

Adagio groaned. “Where is she now? I swear, she needs a cowbell!”

And then they team up with Derpy's band. No? Darn.

The reason for Sonata needing a bra is fascinating. Without her magic, she's no longer a timeless, unchanging creature. Indeed she seems to be growing, aging, and all that that implies. She may be 100,317, but she may not live to see another century. The story doesn't explore this for obvious reasons, but it's there in the background.

Sonata's reaction to the carousel is interesting. She didn't seem that invested in the sanctity of equine life during the pre-banishment reign of terror. On the other hand, that reign was largely psychological... assuming the sirens never ate any of the ponies. But even if they did, they didn't make morbid objets d'art out of them. Or so I assume.
That the other sirens share this reaction is downright bizarre. Remember, they weren't ever ponies. Equinoids, yes, but not ponies. Unless there's a seahorse or two on the carousel, I'm not sure why they react as they do, especially since they've probably seen a carousel before. (Sonata would've either forgotten, repressed the memory, or both.) I figured Aria would find it morbidly amusing.

I really think you should've Bland-Named the various stores. The contrast of disempowered sirens, friendship-powered magical musicians, and real-world brand names is rather disorienting. Likewise the use of Frozen and Five Night's at Freddy's. This isn't our world. Close to it, but not quite. "Burt" the mall cop underscores this issue. The naming conventions in this world are the same as in Equestria.

“Why, it’s dumb and dummer!”

Heh. Irony. (We would've also accepted dumb and drummer.)

The escalator scene was... Look, Pinkie Pie isn't actually stupid. Her brain may work in mysterious ways, but it still works. I could see her going along with the joke if time weren't of the essence, but in this specific situation, the joke falls flat.

I'm going to assume Pinkie mentioned the Cake twins offscreen.

And as has been noted, framing Dash isn't exactly going to keep Sonata in Pinkie's good graces, especially considering the magnitude of her abetting. You could've picked Trixie, a background human like Mystery Mint, an OC, basically anyone who isn't one of Pinkie's best friends.

While the story isn't without it's flaws, it's a nice siren redemption story. The Avatar of Friendship set them on the path. A little kindness, laughter, and so forth has nudged them forward. Thank you for it.

God, that was hilarious.

5392459
How to Train Your Dragon 2 was way better.

Great story. Not going to use the brain bleach, this will be documented in by book on how to understand women. This evidence #633, but I cannot seem to make sense of any of it.

Dash deserved it. Like Rarity said, she'd probably have beat the snot out of Sonata without even waiting to hear out Pinkie and Rarity. 'Sides, it's really the manager's fault.

Lol.

-A male

*Lies down for 1,000 years*

Take that out of your description. It doesn't look good and may push readers away from your story.

5393302 Am I seriously seeing this same argument?

It’s Son—"

*Puts on sunglasses* It's Sonata-problem!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

A good laugh before I go to sleep. This was crazy.

5393916 it was good but then it turned shit because of that ONE FUCKING SONG

5393929 LET IT GOOOO LET IT GOOOO!!!! :trollestia:

She went back inside to find a bathroom, went she heard a faint pounding coming from one of the closets.

when?

edit: alright, done reading. oh boy, that was awesome!
loved every bit of it. and this:

Pinkie’s eyes darted from police car to police car. She scowled. “Pinkie Pie ain’t going back to prison!”

oh shit, my sides. :rainbowlaugh:

I really eenjoyed the silliness of this story! I feel like Pinkie and Sonata would fit together so well in terms of friendship, good job! :pinkiehappy:

that was amazing! I loved every second :)

The Sirens started filled their arms with bras. Adagio stuffed a few inside her hair.

Words cannot describe how I love this part. I love it. New favorite one-shot story of the Dazzlings so far. Keep up the good work!~

5392459 Arrested for dissing Frozen?! How old are you? Besides the point, she was right, it fucking sucked. But maybe that's just me, considering I watch too many Quentin Tarantino movies.

I won't lie; I was in a near-constant state of snickering and/or full out laughter while reading this. Fantastic job!

Pinkie’s eyes darted from police car to police car. She scowled. “Pinkie Pie ain’t going back to prison!”

YOU'LL NEVER CATCH ME ALIVE, COPPER!

Also, my sides. :rainbowlaugh:

5393954 Idina Menzel ain't got jack shit on Linkin Park! :rainbowdetermined2:

5394302 >implying Idina Menzel took a shit on linkin park

5394317
>Greentexting is fun.

5394369 >Dude, we should, like, take over the comment section with greentext.

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