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SebasMarolo


:duck: What can I say? :yay: I do enjoy a good read. :pinkiehappy: A bit too much, I'll admit.

Cool quotes. If it stuck to my mind, it goes here.

I figure, the only way to learn is to throw yourself to the wolfs and hope one at least lets you know how you taste.

-Thunderhalk89

Jan
19th
2015

my first ever blog post. · 10:42pm Jan 19th, 2015

I really wish I could say I finally got over all my irrational fears and posted a story. or say I won a nobel prize, or any kind of prize. Or that I found five bucks on the street.

But I can't. yet. I'm pretty sure I'll write something one day. I would really much like for my first ever fic to be a collaboration with someone else.
Not sure how a collaboration works, but I could figurate it out.

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Thank you for the fave on Scar Tissue!

I'm glad you enjoyed my story Yaks Not Ponies. :twilightsmile:

Hey when you get the chance I'd like if you could check out my new story; http://www.fimfiction.net/story/260570/the-tiny-dazzlings :pinkiesmile:

I did my best writing and I'm hoping to don't find any mistakes :scootangel:

1675727
you earned it with the "siren's shorts" blogpost.
That, and I want to get a notification whenever you update "Taco Quest".

Thanks for the follow! :pinkiehappy:

1642244
If I reach the end of a story with a smile on my face, I fav it. pretty much everthing you write has that effect on me.

Thank you very much for favoriting 'Sweetest Day Ever'! :scootangel::heart:

Thanks for the fave! :twilightsmile:

EDIT: Make that faves, plural! :pinkiehappy:

1618374
thank you for writing such a lovely and sweet fic!

Thank you very much for granting 'An Apple for Ya Trouble' with a favorite! :raritystarry::heart:

Thank you very, very much for the follow! :pinkiehappy:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

Thanks for the watch!

I appreciate it!

1579715 I'm certainly glad you kept reading, so thank you! :twilightsmile:

1579689
i can understand where Aria's coming from.
i would go on a long explanation about how suddenly being free and having somepony to which she could be grateful for that can trigger a zeal so strong tha... man, i'm rambling.

in short, i get where she's coming from, but dunno if others will. i mean, i almost flipped a table and was done with the story at that point. but then i had like five minutes of pure hand-to-chin thought and... well, i kept reading.

1577898 Hey, no fence and no wall as far as I'm concerned! I'm just grateful for the feedback and conversation, but most of all, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.

Frankly, the Aria "instant conversion" is a tradeoff I accepted because I felt overwhelmed by the number of characters and subplots I had going on simultaneously. Since, I have had to shift from "intuitive writing" to "planned writing" - if that makes any sense - because without slowing down and thinking about things more, I'd have characters reacting inappropriately and counter to canon more than I should. Aria's instant change, well, I just stuck with. I hope at this point, the dream sequence was enough to show how solid her conversion was and hope that others can suspend disbelief to accept it at face value.

Thank you for the compliment on Sunset Shimmer's scrying. Along with the magic compact, Sunset's skills as an artificer and prodigal jeweler was the other twist I added to close an Equestria Girls 1 plot hole. Have a great night!

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yeah, i was kind of going to reply to your first reply with something along the lines of:
"first, that was a fast response, second, i'm pretty much enjoying your story. also, correcting small typos or errors is something i do when i like a story"...

but i was really tired (and therefore not thinking coherently) and ended up writing a wall of text.
i will stop myself here lest i make another wall.
in short, i'm enjoying the story. you're really good. although, to be honest...

the part where Aria asks Sunset for a weapon felt a little... far fetched, forced even... it flowed way to nicely... i mean, someone ask you for a weapon. add to it the fact that you're not sure you can trust them. then add the fact that an used-to-be-ally-but-you're-not-sure-if-still-is of that someone broke into your house and stole compromising stuff from you...

maybe i'm just overthinking things.
edit: look at that. not a wall, but maybe a fence. yep, overthinking much.

5427087 I hope you had a Merry Christmas if you celebrate it and that you'll have a wonderful New Year's in just a few days! :yay:

I appreciate the close look at Sunset Shimmer: Element Bearer and hope that you are enjoying the story. I know that some errors will slip through the cracks despite the addition of pre-readers and an editor. I'm still relatively new to this whole "writing for fun" thing and still make more mistakes than I'd like to. :twilightoops: Your constructive feedback helps me clean up remaining errors in the short term and improve my writing in the long term.

I'll admit that I was worried that you didn't like what I had written, but the fact that you've read so much of the story today combined with the comment you made about the "caught with her hand in the apple barrel" kept me from getting too concerned. Thanks again and have a great day! :pinkiehappy:

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thank you for writting it. i'll chech more of your stuff later.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

Thanks for faving Twilight Turns Into A Red And Black Alicorn!

Thank you for the favouriting my story Teeny Tiny Twilight!

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If you enjoyed that, then chances are you'll also enjoy my stories Not Exactly a Shining Moment and The Night is Young!

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Also, don't forget to like the stories, watch me so you know when new work is posted, and remember that comments are always appreciated and replied to!

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