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Oceansama


A writer and lover of Sci-fi

Apr
24th
2021

Revisions are Finished · 7:53am April 24th

So chapter 9 and 10 were the two I dreaded the most. After reading them again I realized that having Shepard, AJ, and Dash fight, the way I did, was rather out of character; especially for the latter two. So I removed the fight and added a new story plot point that I think will be a lot more fun to play with in the future. So anyway with 9 and 10 being combined into a singular chapter this brings me to the end of the revisions and new chapters will be coming up soon.

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Of course, awesome possum. You deserve a smile!
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Always here to spread the cheer. Always remember that.
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You're my friend-a-doodle now. Have a cookie! 🍪

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Thank you, this post is something I needed to hear.

Thanks for the favorite on "Pretty Laces for Good Little Fillies"!

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