Emily Anderson

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By now some of you may have noticed that I made a small update to "Mass Effect: Continuum" making a new prologue to separate it from the first chapter and editing both to fix various mistakes and improve story flow. I plan on re-editing the rest of the story as well and will be continuing with new chapters as I have grown unsatisfied with my previous work and to help familiarize myself with the plot since I lost my previous story notes.

When will a new chapter come?

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As the title says, Chapter Two: Priority Appleloosa, has now been revised and the update posted.

Ok, I've been working on fixing up the latest chapter (Back and Forth) I can't believe I posted what I did in the state it currently is. I do want to give a thank you to everyone who left a comment and didn't chew me out for the mess I gave you. Since you all have been waiting for an update for so long.

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The birth of a master, Magnolia can be the most complex and clearer film testimony about the so-called structure and characters, which are developed here under 9 subplots that despite having a subtle narrative union between them, keep an evolutionary link within the 3 essential acts of the approach, confrontation and resolution.

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So chapter 9 and 10 were the two I dreaded the most. After reading them again I realized that having Shepard, AJ, and Dash fight, the way I did, was rather out of character; especially for the latter two. So I removed the fight and added a new story plot point that I think will be a lot more fun to play with in the future. So anyway with 9 and 10 being combined into a singular chapter this brings me to the end of the revisions and new chapters will be coming up soon.

So Chapter 7 has finally been updated, only three more to go, and I'm making good progress. While I had announced that I'd hoped to have a new chapter up by the second week of April, sadly, that does not seem to be possible.

I'm not going to make excuses, nor can I discuss what has happened, but let's just say certain issues have demanded more of my attention than I'd anticipated. Thus, why my progress has been slowed.
Rest assured that a new chapter is coming.

Chapter 5 has been renamed 'The Shepard' and the update is posted. Overall the chapter became shorter by about 1.1K words. I had to trim a lot of the fat off of it and rewrite quite a bit to make it more consistent both in tone and flow (I.e. less needless exposition).

So the Mass Effect: Legendary Edition released today and I've been having a blast replaying through ME 1. These are game I haven't been able to play in over 7 years. Going to a Wiki to research information on ME is fine, but experiencing the game is so much better.

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AKA Emily Anderson. The story plans for Splintershard have her written as "Emily Anderson", but Splintershard, after the first few chapters, uses "Emily Ashton", thanks to me doing some early planning for Pony-Me's reboot at the time. The name just sorta stuck, I guess.

But anyway, let's do this! It's been a little over a month short of a full year since the last OC Spotlight from last December, and with Splintershard on hiatus, I suppose it's high time I talk a bit 'bout Emi.

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Chapter 6 'Broken' has been updated and thus I have officially caught up to the revisions I made over five years previous. This time, however, I am back better than ever.

It did get me to wonder how my story got as popular as it did, when every chapter I rewrite is super full of cringe. Seriously, what was it about ME:C that drew you all in? If someone else had posted a story like mine, all those years ago, I would have made a hard pass and swiped left.

The new version of chapter 4 is up and I changed the name from 'Post Traumatic' to 'Waking Nightmare' as I think its more fitting.

Chapter 8 has been renamed and the update posted. Only two more chapters to go.

Changed include some revelations and lot of dialogue changes, please tell me how you feel about it.

I don't know if these frequent posts will become tiresome, but I feel its necessary to keep you informed of my progress and prove that I'm not going to disappear again.

With that said, ME:C - Chapter 3. Medical Supplies has been updated.

*gasp* I actually have a character design for her? Impossible!

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More of an experience then a standard film, Paul Thomas Anderson’s sixth feature is a tightly wound, disturbing yet fascinating character study, while also providing one of the best examinations of the cult mentality put to film in recent memory.

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So, where have I been. I mean honestly this has been the first time I've submitted anything since July of last year. The truth is I've really been absolutely nowhere. I've weaved my way through the many days avoiding angry crowds of one stripe or another. I've paid my bills mostly on time if not for the laziness of the local parcel services I'd be on time. I've worked at my job and one foot on one leg hurts regularly while the other knee pops loudly. Various people that I've called

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The words 'cute' or 'endearing' aren't exactly words one uses to describe the filmography of Paul Thomas Anderson, a director whose filmography is known for its cynical and, at times, pessimistic look at human nature. These words are also not ones I'd use to describe Adam Sandler, a man whose 'films' generally consist of a vulgar sludge of lowest brow humor that would make a caveman want to destroy any and all traces of them.

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