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Oceansama


A writer and lover of Sci-fi

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  • 153 weeks
    The Legend of Mass Effect

    So the Mass Effect: Legendary Edition released today and I've been having a blast replaying through ME 1. These are game I haven't been able to play in over 7 years. Going to a Wiki to research information on ME is fine, but experiencing the game is so much better.

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  • 156 weeks
    Revisions are Finished

    So chapter 9 and 10 were the two I dreaded the most. After reading them again I realized that having Shepard, AJ, and Dash fight, the way I did, was rather out of character; especially for the latter two. So I removed the fight and added a new story plot point that I think will be a lot more fun to play with in the future. So anyway with 9 and 10 being combined into a singular chapter this

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  • 157 weeks
    Chapter 8 is done

    Chapter 8 has been renamed and the update posted. Only two more chapters to go.

    Changed include some revelations and lot of dialogue changes, please tell me how you feel about it.

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  • 158 weeks
    Getting Closer

    So Chapter 7 has finally been updated, only three more to go, and I'm making good progress. While I had announced that I'd hoped to have a new chapter up by the second week of April, sadly, that does not seem to be possible.

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  • 158 weeks
    Looking for Artwork Commissions

    I'm wondering, is there is anyone willing to contribute artwork to ME:C? Of course I'm not expecting you to work for free. If you, or someone you know, is willing then please DM me or you can reach my email at oceansama@gmail.com or Discord at username Oceansama#6016

    We can discuss details there.

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Apr
12th
2021

Still, Even More Updates · 3:54am Apr 12th, 2021

Chapter 6 'Broken' has been updated and thus I have officially caught up to the revisions I made over five years previous. This time, however, I am back better than ever.

It did get me to wonder how my story got as popular as it did, when every chapter I rewrite is super full of cringe. Seriously, what was it about ME:C that drew you all in? If someone else had posted a story like mine, all those years ago, I would have made a hard pass and swiped left.

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This story was posted, what, nearly 10 years ago? FIM was the first fandom I ever read fanfic from (that has since changed) so I was early in developing my judgements for what was good fanfic-wise. A crossover of MLP and ME sounded intriguing so I read, and despite the lack of experience on my part discerning and yours writing, I found many things draw me in. The presence of Anderson, the mystery of Shepard's teeth, the potential interactions with Applebloom given her initial reaction, etc. Even if none of those things panned out, they still kept me interested. And if you actually finish the story after being gone so long that will be most incredible.

Looking forward to it!

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No pressure, right? 😁

But in all seriousness, I should never have left this story to sit for so long. I know I wanted to post a new chapter in the 2nd week of April, but I will have to delay that a bit longer as my revisions are sucking up more time that I had anticipated.

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