1567299 Great characters, fun story. The characters seem to have mostly realistic reactions to most stuff, although i will mention I think the romance sprung a tad fast, but aside from that everything seems to be rolling at a good pace. *I'm just after the point where discord makes an obvservation about NMM to TS*, Blaze seems like a character you can play with a bit since she's technically new territory, along with the history as well. Grammar and punctuation appear to be fine except maybe like one typo I've seen. I also have an appreciation for when the romance isnt the main hub of the story right off the bat and eventually gets there.
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1567299 Great characters, fun story. The characters seem to have mostly realistic reactions to most stuff, although i will mention I think the romance sprung a tad fast, but aside from that everything seems to be rolling at a good pace. *I'm just after the point where discord makes an obvservation about NMM to TS*, Blaze seems like a character you can play with a bit since she's technically new territory, along with the history as well. Grammar and punctuation appear to be fine except maybe like one typo I've seen. I also have an appreciation for when the romance isnt the main hub of the story right off the bat and eventually gets there.