• Member Since 6th May, 2012
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Deadsteel


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JackRipper
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Thanks for reading "All That Remains." Don't forget to drop it a like if you haven't already. :scootangel:

Thank you for adding Baby Pictures to your favorites! Feedback is always appreciated!

Thanks for adding In the Dark of the Knight to your library. Much obliged!

Thanks for the Follow!

1567299 Great characters, fun story. The characters seem to have mostly realistic reactions to most stuff, although i will mention I think the romance sprung a tad fast, but aside from that everything seems to be rolling at a good pace. *I'm just after the point where discord makes an obvservation about NMM to TS*, Blaze seems like a character you can play with a bit since she's technically new territory, along with the history as well. Grammar and punctuation appear to be fine except maybe like one typo I've seen. I also have an appreciation for when the romance isnt the main hub of the story right off the bat and eventually gets there.

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