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Foxy Kimchi


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[Featured on EqD and FiM Fiction] It is that time again, the dreaded flu season. Not even Princess Celestia, the ruler of the sun and day, is safe from it. When Celestia contracts the flu, what pony could possibly nurse Celestia back to health? Why none other than her dear, loving sister of course! Enter Nurse Luna!

Between crazed guards, a palace staff desperate to please their rulers, and a crazed unicorn running around, no pony is safe from this madness.

This is 100% Approved by Twilight's Library.

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LPN stands for licensed practical nurse. But in Luna's case, it could also stand for Lunar Princess of the Night. But she is a princess, and she can get whatever she wants. Poor Celestia. It seems the tables have be turned!

Oh Celestia, you are so screwed.

Also side note, I found this picture AFTER I thought of the idea for the story. When I saw it on EqD I was like "OMG THIS IS PERFECT! Now I have no excuses to write this story"

Poor, poor private. Your insecurity is well understood. Don't worry, you're not alone, they drive me to drink too. :pinkiecrazy:

Huh. Odd that it got featured with only seven likes, but what the hey! I'll give it a shot!

Nice story, Foxy. I'm really glad to see this up. :twilightsheepish: It's really funny, too! :pinkiehappy:

“I remember everything you did to take care of me, everything.”
This will be great.

Oooo you have another 2 chapters up! I'm going to have to read that!
Those poor guards...

Drunk guards are the best guards. :rainbowlaugh:
A storm is brewin' lads, get ready!

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WOOH Featured!

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Indeed it is. Funny thing, I thought of the idea and then found this picture on EqD. I was like "OMG this is PERFECT!"

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Thanks!

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Treatment is not limited to icky medicine, denial of sweets, and evil, green alfalfa.

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Oh poor Vigilant Shield, his suffering is not over yet.

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Nope it is not.

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Sweet! Tell ya friends!

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That may or may not come up in later chapters. :trollestia: No wait that doesnt work, Luna is trolling. Sorry I got no troll Luna :pinkiecrazy:

This is freakin' great stuff right here. This man right here, ladies and gentlemen! :twilightsmile:

ha ha, this is getting REAL good REAL fast! A++++++++, writer! :twilightsmile::rainbowlaugh::moustache:

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You have NO idea HOW BADLY I wanted to put that on. I love Game of Thrones and I HATE Joffery. But alast I felt not many people will know the reference. That and winter is ending.

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Why Thank You!

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Faster this gets to number one on the featured list, faster it comes out.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: (ok not really but it would be SUPER nice if I could.)

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Haha

Sorry. Was bored, and there were a lot of typos in the text. All in all, a good premise, but marred by a clumsy narration. I'll give it a C+. Have these fixed and on my desk by tomorrow. Now mush.

sighing loudly as SHE watched the brown liquor
Lieutenant or lieutenant? I recommend using the capital version. Same with Your Highness. (Also, a Princess should be addressed as Your Royal Highness, but that's just nitpicking)
Iron Hoof’s eyes widened. Her mane was sagging, her eyes were bloodshot, and her nose was puffy and red. “P-Princess, are you feeling alright?” he replied. - You're telling the story in 3rd person limited to Celestia. Right now she is seeing herself from another pony's point of view, which is confusing. Or are you actually? Next you go to the guards, which confuses the whole POV thing again. Might want to think about it in the future.
Celestia heard FROM behind her as a hoof touched her shoulder.
“Oh I am fine, really sister. -> missing a comma. “Oh I am fine, really, sister." (You have several other questionable choices of using a comma, but the rules for those are quite beyond me.)
Luna said sternly as SHE stared at Celestia.
Yes you did, just when I happenED to fallen ill with a similar illness
is it not dear[,] sister of mine?”
her eyes WENT wide with horror.
“Nothing[,] sir!”
Oh[,] that! Princess Luna got the memo
(I love this one) Celestia’s eyes darted back and forth, “Well, you see-” - When someone is interrupted, a normal dash JUST WON'T DO! You must use an EM-DASH! *dramatic chord, lightning, wolves howl, maniacal laughter* which looks like —. It's ALT-0151.
Both guards stared at each other, eyes wide AND with THEIR jaws hanging.
“Really[,] sister,
"Well[,] sister,"
I can do what I want too[,] you know
You are too easy[,] sister!
“I do not A have crush on my student
There was a flash of blue light[,] AND Luna now wore a nurse outfit with a matching hat

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Well holy shit, I thought I caught everything. I will go over and fix them as soon as possible. Thanks for the heads up.

Actual, my previous editors used em dashes a lot, and I wanted to use them honest. However, I don't know the code for it to enter it.

2251637 I just wrote it up for you, doofus. :twilightblush:
Oh and those weren't all. Just the ones I was 100% on. I recommend another proofing pass anyways.

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Yes but I did not know it during the time I was writing. That and I need to find editors again. One of had to leave sadly.

You had my curiosity, sir, but now you have my attention. Please continue.

"Hmm. Nurse Luna. This is either going to be a really bad clopfic, or hilarious."

*Sees tags*

"YES!"

This is hilarious! You my friend have earned yourself a like and a fav.:yay:

I hope that because you are online at the time of this comment, you are working on the new chapter, NOT bumming around and reading comments to pass the time. If you are reading this, GET, TO BUCKING, WORK!:flutterrage:

Skipped all the comments, so it might be in here. Did you get the photo from askprincessmolestia?

Owned :trollestia: We need a Trolluna icon...

Damn it Luna, why are you always so adorkable?

“Royal Decree number one thousand, three hundred, and thirty seven."

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Since no one else did this yet :twilightsheepish:

Laughed the whole way through. Type more words, please! :raritywink:

I saw that picture on DeviantArt when it was posted. Great use for this story.

NO! PRINCESS CELESTIA'S SPOKEN FOR?! I LOVED HER TOO:raritydespair:!

Now that that's out of the way, it seems things are going to get a little...crazy:pinkiecrazy:!

(Damn my naivety of picture memes...this is the perfect time for that "Dis gon be good!" gif, but I have no idea where it is! Also, I do like Twilestia, really:twilightsmile:, how much is that going to figure into this story?)

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Sweet!

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I was aiming for the later

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Sweet!

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Ehhhhhhh
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Ok I was reading comments passing time. To be fair, I was at work and not near my comp. I was one my phone. Yes I want to work on the next chapters, as I have already made an outline. But as I wrote in my blog, I have hit a snag. I have recently lost me editor right now and looking for more. Apparently, I need to find a hard ass grammar nazi.

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I know the artist who drew this pic does that, but no I did not get it from there. Interesting fact, I had this idea in my head before I saw this picture. But when I saw this on EqD, I was like "Holy crap that picture is perfect and great now I have no excuse to not write this." No technically no I did not get it from that tumblr, but I got from his DA page.

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I do too, I really do.

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Yes we do.

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DAM RIGHT! BUT I NEED MOAR! THIS MUST BE IN THE #1 SPOT!! ARRRGGG I have gone mad with POWER!!!

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Why, because she is a LPN, Lunar Princess of the Night!

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I was wondering when someone was going to comment on that.

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I AM trying! But I need to find another editor again.

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Yeah it is truly a great picture. It captures everything I like. Luna having fun at the expense of her sister, while adding that small Twiliestia.
Twiliestia is bestia!

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Yes, we all must sit and cry in a corner, knowing that Twilight Sparkle will always be better than us. :fluttercry:

Royal Decree number one thousand, three hundred, and thirty seven.

Couldn't resist, could you?

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No I could not resist that. I was able to resist not using "Winter is coming" from Game of Thrones as I am a HUGE fan of it. But this, I simply could not.

Comment posted by cipher100 deleted Mar 12th, 2013

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LPN stands for licensed nurse practitioner.

Minor correction: it stands for Licensed Practical Nurse.

(Nifty story, btw. Congrats on being featured.)

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Don't you mean "Now I have no excuses to not write this story"?

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Ahh, I was wondering because I remember when PM;s horn broke off so Luna had to take care of her. And I saw she was holding a Twilight doll.

Great picture, great picture

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