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I am a Scotsman who writes stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety.



This story is a sequel to Geoverse Part Five: Prisoner of Love

Twilight Sparkle and Geo have been together for a while now, and they think they've been through everything. But it would seem that, once again, Fate has other ideas. Now everything from evil kings to lords of chaos (as well as everything else in between) will require their attention.

Just another day at the office, then.


Part Six of the Geoverse.

Rated Teen for bad language, violence and suggestive sexual elements.

Each chapter will be set during or after a Season Three episode, with our three human protagonists thrown in.

Once again, the wonderful Crimson Star is my co-author.

All Bonus Chapters are canon except for the first one, and any with (NC) in the title.

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 500 )

Good start!!!

Just one thing...

Element of Generosity

Isn't AJ the element of Honesty??

1707369 It's okay we all make mistakes. Mine was going to work last night!!!

So, just to clarify, is this during or after Crimson's To Test Is Science?


I don't think it's canonical to his story at all, since we're doing different things. This story is set during Season Three of MLP, and each chapter is set during an episode.

Crimson's story... well, you've been reading it, so you know how good it is. :twilightsmile:


It's up to Geo whether or not it's Canon, but if it is, it would be set after To Test is Science. And the story after that is set after this.

Uh, is that spoilers? Sorry. :pinkiesad2:

the Crusaders were snoozing underneath the buffet table, a pile of uneaten sweets around them.

Great job friend you managed to break my adorable meter. :rainbowlaugh:

Because what's the worst that can happen?
I Learned that the Very Hard way...

Hmmm.... ya know I've seen a lot of the diffrent to x is human series yet I've never given it a try >w> I think its time for me to start my adventure!

Onwards to story 1 xDD

Let the epic adventure start:pinkiehappy:

Let me gess... Crystal Empire:pinkiehappy:

1708754 is this right after he gets out of his house arrest or did i miss the story where he gets out because i havent seen aces wedding or did you not write their wedding


Crimson Star wrote their wedding. Read this and you'll get it.

I should point out that if you haven't read this story, then To Test Is Science! might not make any sense.

I am loving this series. Keep it up.:pinkiehappy:

"Looks to me like the selection of books..." he took a pair of sunglasses from his pocket and put them on. "... is dizzying."

And then John said:
:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

One thing though:

Ace and John shook their heads as Pinkie began singing, holding her strange new instrument with her forehooves.

Who sang this line? And does it even fit the meter of the song? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png

John's face when Ace gives him the particle rifle
John's face when Ace asks for it back

And Geo, I think your fate is now to be constantly cock-blocked. By books!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I know this is a romance story, but the whole MI6 part a few stories ago is still bothering me...
I mean "Hey, we have foun a parrallel universe with intelligent life forms, ask if they are dangerous, if not we do nothing and forget about it." feels like a plot-hole...
Or do you have something in mind already? :pinkiecrazy:


That's already been covered. The UK government went to Equestria and realised it didn't pose a threat. Then they fucked off. :rainbowwild:

This is SO AWSOME:rainbowkiss: continue good sir u are rockin this story

1801079 where did you get that? I've been looking everywhere...

Comment posted by The Last Renegade deleted Dec 15th, 2012

John, keep talking like that, AJ said she'll buck you if you do!! I don't she knows the other meaning of the word!!!

Lol, Sombra's stairs!!!!

This just deserves all the yes :pinkiehappy: u sir are just too good at this:ajsmug:

Really Ace??? All those Pinkies and that didn't even cross your mind??


I accidentally read this in Gentleman Cho'Gath's Voice. :facehoof:
Too much League of Legends.

1880509 I'm pretty sure that thought DID cross his mind, which is why he was in such a rush to get all the Pinkies out of Ponyville ASAP. He wouldn't last past the first estrus cycle.

Edit: Death by Dominatrix Pinkie Clone Gangrape.

Aww.. Ace didn't send our universe a Pinkie

That's gotta be more fun than raising a barn which will probably be destroyed again anyway. Right, Pinks?


:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:


Hurrah, someone got one of the references! :twilightsmile:

"We'll think of something." I said. "We're the smart party, after all!"

The townsponies looked at me as Twilight groaned. Given how hard he laughed, only John seemed to understand what I was referring to, which was hardly surprising.

I guess John and Geo are the only ones in that crowd who have seen Red Dwarf... :rainbowlaugh:


Huzzah! Someone spotted the other reference!

Here, you've earned this: :moustache:

wow man that's awesome for him to do that instead of sending them back to the pond. awesome:ajsmug:

John made my day! I loved this chapter!

I hope when the barn falls down, it's on their heads!!! The rest of the family, not AJ and John!!

My god, I can't believe that the Apple family including the Oranges doesn't trust John and him married to Applejack! Why can't they just accept him?!

Is this world not sacred enough?! This song will prove me in someway.

Then it wouldn't be a story, now would it?:trollestia:

Loving this story like always :rainbowkiss:

you should never say this line

Because what's the worst that can happen?

Pinkie not wanting to do anyting fun SHE'S A CLONE!

So......why didn't John try to snap her neck when she was using him as a seat?


That's too easy. John likes a challenge.

1970211 Still, he could've stopped her then, or at least knocked her unconscious.


What, and cut the chapter length by at least half?

... SHIT! That would have made writing it a hell of a lot easier! FUCK YOU, HINDSIGHT!

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