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Crimson Star

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Ace and Pinkie are happily settling into their new lives, but sinister forces are conspiring against Equestria. As Ace struggles to maintain the trust of the ponies he's sworn to protect, he finds that he'll soon have to make some very difficult choices...

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Woooo! Off to a good start already!

Can't wait to see the rest! :twilightsmile:

what *sniff* what a beautiful wedding. Oh and applejack is next yay!


Lol the comments are always teh best! Or so it seemed...

Oh boy, that seems like sone really good fun. Also, I just saw the ad close to the comment section, and saw Pinkie eating at the last supper, ya know, with Jesus and stuff. Thought it was funny and a bit relevant.

Aww how cute!!!!:rainbowkiss:

Who are these new guys, and what do they want?!

Also, where did they come from?

Also, bondage. :rainbowhuh:


Uhh, they're guys with guns, They want to know about other humans in Equestria, and they come from a place where they speak Portuguese?

Also, bondage. :pinkiehappy:


I actually meant to ask how they got there, but I'm sure all will be explained in time.

Pinkie you kinky little bitch.......:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

As a side note, you may want to change this to "mature", I think things
might of progressed past "teen" by now!!!


Actually, there isn't any real "action" described, but there's tons of sexual humor in that one chapter alone. So chances are, I'm just barely in the clear.

Celestia, please tell those mercenaries to GTFO. :twilightangry2:

Wait wait wait is Sylvester Stallone one of the mercenaries that would be funny expendables style


So now mercs and goobots are here to "protect"... i think war with bots and mercs coming soon not involving a third party to it... well i think the royal guard might help like 50-50 on both sides... but this troubles me... i say docbots can shoot 125% accurate pyrobot is super tough and can incenerate lots of things instantly slendybot can make enemies disappear and now goobots can knock out anyone while the nanybots could probably EMBARRASE any enemy (act like they are babies*wink*) and the rest i think are just miners or mobile headquarters

No, the Pee-Pee-Nine-Thousand-One will be roaring out dubtrot, the perfect party music!

Vegeta, what does the scouter say about his Pee Pee level?

C'mon, you knew someone was going to do it. :trixieshiftright: :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:

What the fuck is Celestia think letting Nazis into Equestria? whats her next trick reviving Nightmare Moon maybe or Freeing Discord perhaps this is a Darwin award if I ever saw one.

1678693 No, things just got a LOT MORE interesting!!!

What's going to happen when they bring this to the attention of Celestia??

I'm surprised John, being a ex-pongo, didn't get up and kill him there and then!!!

Loved the one-sided rap battle.

But seriously? Nazis? :flutterrage: ... As long as they get what's coming to them. :twilightangry2:


Nazis... a German "political" party... Germans... star of world war I and world war II... start of war of the worlds... nazis get the shit beat out of them by the Russians... America comes in late and kicks the nazis in the balls... celestia makes a check point with royal gaurd at checkpoint for humans... that's my theory...

Damn, that Nazi ballbag actually makes some good points. From what I remember, and understood at the time, from history lessons, is that the Nazi party actually had some good ideas. They just went about them in the wrong way.

But he's a damn Nazi!!!! I know Celestia has to hear both sides, but how can she think of even siding with him, especially because of his grandfather??? And really, trying to deny the Holocaust?? Just dong that proves he won't listen to reason!!

And he is obviously quite clever, so I'm sure he could've created a weapon without any of the usual traces of human made explosives!!!

I think Slendy-bot needs to get active again!!!


I think there base my get some boom... i meant the nazis base gets hit by explosives also from unknowns earth substances... So i believe there is a third human hating party trying to get them to kill eachother and steal weapon's and attack while the sides are weak... but denying the Holocaust?!?!?!?!? There is actual proof it happened! The camps with thousands of bodies with number going into the millions stamped on the bodies all died laying around, the people who went into hiding and survived, the people who went into camps and were freed, even Anne Franks diary proves it exists!


I see the general consensus is the same as mine, at least.

Also, Nice dubs, Lucky.

1685026 Just so you know, it wasn't the Germans that started The Great War.

It was the assassination of Arch Duke Franz Ferdinand, heir to the Austro-Hungarian throne in Sarajevo by a Serbian Nationalist sect, The Black Hand. It happened after a earlier assassination attempt. The Austrian-Hungarian royalty then declared war on Serbia on the 28th July 1914. So yeah, it was because of this The Great War started, thus it was the Serbians, not the Germans who started it!!

Wow I can't believe the only thing I had to double check was the date!! I've forgotten most of the stuff from school!!

1707278 Nice dubs?? I guess you're referring to my new apparel?? Well, I just been to the shop on camp wearing the Luna one, and ended up in a
argument about who the best pony was!!!


Actually, when I was quoting you, the number of the post was 1694944.

The last two numbers were dubs. So, nice dubs. :pinkiesmile:

The doctor wagged his finger, tsking with his tongue.

Did he wag it like Manfred von Karma?

Also, Pinkie is a gypsy... is that supposed to be a Friendship is Witchcraft reference?

I can hear GLaDOS saying this title:derpytongue2:

Celestia is practically giving them cake
Here's what I think


1791882 Hate to say it, dude. But I don't see your pic.

That's very sneaky of Celestia!!! A shame she couldn't get rid of him, but at least Ace is still allowed to find some sort of evidence!!!

And what the hell is he up to?? Seriously, growing rats to the size of ponies?? Is he trying to artificially infuse magic in to
non magical beings??

I have to admit... I laughed my ass off when Ace called Celestia a 'dumb bitch'. :rainbowlaugh:

Also, I'm really glad you updated. Though now I am eagerly awaiting more. :twilightsmile:

"History is written by the victors" - Sheperd

With another splash, Pinkie got wet for the second time today.

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE! :rainbowlaugh:

Well. That was a bit harsh. But........I'd probably do the same if I was in that position!

That ending. What else can be said but...

Roleplaying "Cupcakes" in the bedroom? Kinky... :pinkiesmile:

Nazis? I knew Mercs working for a Mad Scientist would be trouble somehow! - And these "fine, upstanding proponents of racial purity" find other humans making foals with ponies? Ohhh this is gonna be nasty!

My Great-uncle was 82nd Airborne, he had seen camps that had been liberated and had nightmares for the rest of his life, more than any combat he did...

Yay, an update! :pinkiehappy:

... oh dear. This doesn't look good. :pinkiegasp:

If these bastards want a fight, then they shall have one!

Interesting. Not as sure that I like Ace as much as I used to, though.

this story is getting very interesting!:pinkiehappy:

Damn. Spend some time away and things have now gone to shit...John, you have a neck to snap.

I really, really...REALLY hate Nazi's!!!!!! Kick the bastards out!:flutterrage: *loads shotgun*

It's a good thing we know that there is Nazi ponies out there already otherwise we'd be speculating what the tests would come back as.

Bravo sir! you really did your homework. :pinkiehappy:


Oh, things haven't gone to shit yet...

You're gonna have to wait for the next chapter.

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