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Crimson Star


Like my stories? Don't worry, more's coming. Don't like my stories? Eh, who needs ya?

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I woke up in the middle of a clearing in a forest. I don't know where I am, or how I got here. Tartaros, I don't even know who the hay I am. But I do know that I was doing something important when I lost my memory. I need to retrace my steps, and finish what I started. No matter who gets in my way, I'm gonna do my job.

Because if I don't, everypony ends up like me.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )
Comment posted by Bill Clinton deleted May 26th, 2013

A couple of errors as well as the story feeling a tad rushed, but other than that it's looking good.

2631637 Can you please tell me where the errors are?

2631646

Whoa balls, that was a fast response, I mean daaang....
Any how, I re-read the chapter so that I could mark the errors that I saw, but when I did I coulden't find any. Which is weird, could have sworn I saw some but what the hay? Sorry, guess I made a mistake. Hope you're not upset bout that. So yeah... I'll be checking up on this from time to time. Good luck

2631699 Everyone makes mistakes. I'm not angry.

Anyway, this was only the prologue. The actual chapters are gonna be longer.

Thanks.

2631708
No problem! Looking forward to them.
G'night.

Interesting. Watching with... well, interest. :twilightsheepish:

<Insert Back To The Future joke here.>

Good work, keep it up!

I'm definitely going to be watching out for this story, keep up the good work!:moustache:

This is very interesting.

Good chapters can you do more and did you copy it from a game called ghost trick

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