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I am a Scotsman who writes stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety.



This story is a sequel to Geoverse Part Four: The Farmer And The Spy

Geo was facing a jail term for killing a man in self-defence. So the last thing he expected was for Princess Celestia to save him from the slammer. All she wants in return is for him to share a conversation with her and her sister.

It is this conversation that makes Geo, and the Princesses, realise that love is there for everypony to enjoy - regardless of who they are.

Meanwhile, it would appear that love is springing up all over Ponyville...


Part Five of the Geoverse, so I suggest you read the stories about it, starting with To Friend Is Human. This whole thing is basically a load of one-shot romance fics put together.

I switch between first and third person in order to provide narrative from another characters point of view.

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Comments ( 202 )

Continuation of Geo story...........:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

proceed.....can the princesses really be mad



... though I'm sure that honour went to Lord Sabre, as he got to see this story nearly a week ago.

Ah, the perks of winning a contest.


ye be So right bout that. views pretty good from up here eh?

Why do I have the feeling that he's royally doomed?

PS: How long have you waited for the story to be approved? I am waiting nearly 24 hrs now; my first story was aproved in 15 min...


Usually takes between 12 and 36 hours. There are loads of stories being submitted, and there aren't enough mods to go through them.

What'd he do now? :(

I hope Geo isn't in TOO much trouble...

Whoop whoop! OC shipping for the WIN!

...i love my influence on this story. :yay:

Aww, everypony's getting somepony. :pinkiehappy:


I'm glad you like it.


Shipping. Shipping everywhere.

dawww spark plug is exactly like me, its awsome

I remember reading a sad story on here that was a Lunar Guard giving his last words saying he loved Luna. I can't find it, and the name is somewhere around "I love you Princess Luna." If anyone can find it, I'd be glad to know it's still here.

D'awwwww! That's so sweet! :heart:

diabeetus....... i haz it now:derpytongue2:

"Good morning, your Highness." he said.
"Good morning to you as well, Dusk Shine." she replied.

I thought his name was Dusk Wind? :rainbowhuh:


There are two sequels to that story.


Apologies, I misread what you wrote. :facehoof:

Very nice work, very nice indeed... I started reading the "to friend a human" earlier today, and now I'm here. But 1 thing I wanna check, the princesses argument is that since they are immortal, they would rather not love... Is cadence not immortal and married to shining?

P.S. thank you for not making the terrible cliche of the military attacking equestria in the end of the trilogy. And I love your happy endings the most! I hate having my feels torn to shreds by the author.



In my opinion, dragons mature faster than ponies. So let's just assume that although Spike is a baby dragon, he is still mature enough to know about these things.

If it makes you feel better, I won't be using any sexual innuendo when referring to the Sparity ship.

Also Twilight hatched spike when she was a LITTLE filly, so I am assuming she was about 7. She looks to be about 21 now, so that would put spike at 14. I feel that is old enough.


But wouldn't Rarity be roughly the same as as Twilight?

Ya, but my parents married, yet they are 13 years apart from each other. I dont find age difference too much of a problem unless it is over 15 years.:moustache:

Fireworks exploded in his ears...that's got to hurt. :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowkiss: dawwwwww this is a cute chapter, and if when spike born, twillight was still a little filly, that would mean they have only like 6 year of difference

1469715 The only one I can think of is this one, Luna's Story: Rise Of The Luna Stallions?

Sorry if it's not the one your looking for, but it's worth a read if your interested.

Hmm, let's see if I can start a flame war!!!
Luna IS best pony!!!

"leaving her sister's bedroom, doing his best to act as nonchalantly as he possibly could, save for the swagger in his step."
So is that swagger because he's feeling pretty damn awesome, or because it went on for a while and was quite intense,
due to the fact, I'm guessing as the Princesses refused lovers, that Luna was in fact, a virgin??

Spike, you sly dog....er, dragon!!!:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Wait, I've caught up with another story? :raritydespair::raritycry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::fluttershysad:

That makes about 4 different sets of stories that I have read up to their current points in the last week!!

1579894 It's okay. I only remember it being in the feature box and sad. They probably deleted it. Also, Fluttershy, Luna, and Derpy tie for my favorite

Uh, question. Would the last few chapters here take place after the last chapter of TOiS? Because that would make a lot more sense if they did.


It would make sense, yes.

Chapter Ten is Ace and Pinkie's chapter, so I'll try and come up with something.

Yay another wedding next thing it will rainbow and sparks, then fluttershy and haywick, then rarity and spike oh this is so much fun I never want it to end.


Unfortunately, it has to, and it will. There are only three chapters left. :fluttershysad:

Spike saw what you did there! :moustache:

That's three stories so far where spike sees the characters making out that I've read

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