• Member Since 28th Jul, 2012
  • offline last seen Tuesday

GeodesicDragon


I'm just an ordinary Scotsman who writes ordinary stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety.

Sequels1

T

This story is a sequel to Geoverse Part Two: To Love Is Human


Geo has finally made it back to Equestria and married Twilight Sparkle. But as they prepare to enjoy their new life together, he learns something that makes him question his friendships. When a threat arrives in Equestria, he soon realises that even though someone doesn't act like a friend, it doesn't mean that they're not.

AUTHOR'S NOTES

Now available in printed form!

Cover Art by Anoymousperson123.

Part Three of the Geoverse.

Comments contain spoilers.

Rated Teen for sexual references, swearing and violence.

It is recommended that you read To Observe Is Science! by Crimson Star, as things happen there that will be referenced to in this story, and you might not get them.

Chapters (10)
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!
Comments ( 233 )
Tim

:rainbowhuh:
That's what you call a break? :rainbowlaugh:
Anyway, nice to see that the adventures of Geo continue. Though I did see the military coming since the beginning of your last story :twilightsheepish:



Oh and before I go: Schnauzer?:moustache:

AWesome trilogy, but a 2 day break!! Way to long.:trollestia:
BUt it looks like the fun has just been doubled.

you have a stray 'enter' in the url link to the first part, so we get to see your code. Also, using blah blah [ /site_url] is faster, as long as you aren't just copypasta'ing from the browser page.

1258795

I don't have a stray 'Enter'. I don't know what causes it. But thanks for the advice regarding the shorter link.

Dr. Sorou: They found my portal, huh? I guess you can say...

*Puts on shades*

...The British are coming.

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!

1259445

YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Also, everyone read Crimson's story! DO IT. DO IT NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Dear sweet Celestia please tell this isn't going where I think this is going cause war would kinda ruin the whole thing.

The U.S military aren't total dicks? IMPOSSIBRU!

I use my magical powers to make sure you write 24/7. Or I ask you politely (if you don't mind that is):fluttershysad:

1264518

No, it's not going to end up like that. And yes, it is the British army. Since I'm British. :twilightsmile:

1264590 Really so am I. Also I had sneaking suspiscion during To Friend Is Human that you were but couldn't be sure

Tim

Yaaay, Humans are not bastards :pinkiehappy:

Hi

Seriously twilights going to kill him? More like them

oh snap
i wonder who that last voice belonged to...:trixieshiftleft:

The United Kingdom! Heck yes, has the greatest monarchy in the motherfischin world yes!

Calling it now. Princess Celestia just ported in at the end of Chapter 4.

Hi

Youve been sharing ideas and linking stories with cromson right? Well his is a week after and yours is like a year so not exactly linked unless they keep repeating themselves

1287354

Cromson? CROMSON? GET MY NAME RIGHT!

punchbrand.com/images/detailed/0/PIN-RAGEFACE.jpg

In all seriousness, you'd better re-read the story. Geo (Author Geo, not Character Geo) never said this took place a year after Ace created the portal. There are some temporal discrepancies between my story and his, but I blame Prosdkr.

1287354
1290932

No, he's right. Twilight did say "We've known each other for a year now..." - but I changed it to "We've known each other for a long time..." :twilightsmile:

Hi

1290932 srry SRRY!!!! *hides in corner* 1290938 i was right without looking back yay!!! also *peeks out from corner, sees crimson, rruns straight through 20 buildings to get away not realizing i smashed thought peoples dinner (im not entire brony not enough to say "pony" and dont say join the herd because then ill just get my picture and turn it into reality and blast you guys to pieces)*

Hi

1290950 hes prosdkr?

Hi

1292689 whos* srry

:scootangel:Cant wait untill THE NeXT chapter:scootangel:

Part of me wants a twisted human pony hybrid that will grow at an ungodly rate and rampage through town. The other part just says 'D'awwwwwwww.'

Nomeno story ui shasva. :pinkiehappy:

1293080 Oh sorry, I was speaking in Draconic. I said that This story is awesome.

1293086
What Draconic? I can think of at least 6-7 things with a draconic language.

1296380
Ah, nice. Gonna look that up.

Shit's about to get real. :rainbowdetermined2:

Dr. Sorou: Oh, no. No one's messing with Ponyville on MY watch.

The way I picture Sorou is the exact same as Doc from Back to the Future. Also, yeah! Shit just got real!

WTF how is that asshole in Equestria again or did he never leave?

No. I refuse to believe it's him. I do like this story, I think it's heartwarming, but not him, there better be a good explanation! Otherwise, d'awwww. :heart:

1302683
1302687

All will be revealed! I'm writing Chapter Nine now. AND IT HAS ANOTHER TWIST! :rainbowlaugh:

So tempted to make some kind of M. Knight Shyamalan joke... also, £10 says AJ followed John and then bucks Derek in the knackers.

1302699 I hope your explanation for Derek is good or else * withdraws chainsword and waves about angrily* also I noticed in the last chapter during the scan you avoided mentioning whether the child was pony at all you said it wasn't a Hybrid but not that it was definately a pony.

1302716

Yes, it's not a hybrid. Which implies it is a pony. But what kind of pony is yet to be revealed.

Ohhh, it's getting interesting. When will the next chapter come out? :pinkiehappy:

1302740

Either later today (making today a triple update), or tomorrow.

I really hope you release it today, but tomorrow is nice to. :twilightsmile:

I honestly believe today would be best:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I hope my explanation regarding Derek's presence was good enough.

And I hope my little twist was good as well. :twilightsmile:

By the way, Est Ultio Humanum is Latin for Revenge is Human.

Well done AGAIN, but you're writing too fast. MY schoolwork hates it.:raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Login or register to comment
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!