Sunset Shimmer and Wallflower Blush just started dating. Everything's been going well so far, except for one thing. One nagging suspicion that Sunset can't seem to shake. It doesn't help that Wallflower keeps giving her ample opportunities to worry.
Collab with my girlfriend Scampy during our gay adventure to Gadotville
Coverart by Sandy
Oh god
...the yeet meme is starting
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Starting?
This train has been going for a while now...
oh no
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Oh yes
As someone who grew up in a rabbit farm, I can confirm that you get used to it.
This is the dumbest thing I've ever been a part of creating.
I've never been more proud 🙏
Sunset Brain-cell 1: What do we do?!
Sunset Brain-cell 2: I know! This always works! *smashes button*
Sunset: "I'M GAY!"
Hah! That cover pic!
"NIGERUNDAYOOOOOO!!!"
LET US YEET!
Sunset's channeling her inner Scampy
Until it's done.
I woke up to a late night Illinois Tornado Warning some 15 minutes before this was posted. Now that I've read it, I don't know weather I'll survive.
...but ok, that Pez Gun. Right?? Right????
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As you should be, my dear
Wally, I think you've been around Pinkie too much.
Ahhh how is she so cute?!
Badly
Inner Scampy again.
I'm sensing a pattern here.
Running gags
Sometimes they drag on but this one was great.
Reminds me of this other story, written by Dawnbreez:
- Equestria Girls
- Dark
- Comedy
- Thriller
Sunset woke up this morning with bruises on her neck. She's getting more than a little tired of it.Oh my god Sunset, you're marrying a child! A green adorable child!
I love that these incidents are what makes the relationship move forward
I wonder if *sees author's notes* okay, did you know this before hand or did you research it?
And it's featured!
still gonna read it Wallflower promiseThose lyrics are perfect for almost any situation.
I never knew I wanted to read something so bad.
Yep, Sunset's definitely marrying a child.
So this is what you two have been working on. It was fucking hilarious and I hope Sunset gets better
BUT WHO COULD HAVE PREDICTED
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SUCH A TRAGEDY
This is comedy GOLD. I have not laughed that much since—well, actually, a lot of fictions on this site are great at comedy. STILL. I’m normally not one for dark comedy but this is just hilarious every step of the way. The fact that there’s so many stories where Wallflower does suffer from mental health issues makes this convoluted premise even funnier, because I’m totally with Sunset here that something’s wrong, but I wouldn’t be surprised if this was all just wacky hijinks. I’ll have to keep reading and see!
I appreciate the continuity. Much funnier this way than if Sunset didn’t start each chapter half-traumatized by the events of the previous ones.
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I drew that Wally! :D
ngl I kinda want a pez gun
I very much appreciate that read. I now must take a mandated 3-5 minute break before reading any more FiMFiction lest I pop a vessel from laughing too hard. Definitely reading the rest of your stories; this was delightful.
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mein gott
Im officially convinced that sunset has an overactive mind, and Wallflower’s a complete airhead. Good lord, i can’t believe wallflower hasn’t caught on lol.
This was delightfully silly, poking humor at the horrible themes so often associated with these characters. Like a good britcom, the formula is obvious, repetitious, and (quasi-darkly) humorous throughout! A fun change of pace.
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Sometimes, you just have to collab on a roaring preposterous romp.
The comedy was amazing, but I'm going to say what I love about the story is how you stuck the landing. You didn't shy away from the seriousness, but you made it hilarious, which made it a funny, but touching story at the same time. Niiiice
Everyone needs a therapist in this world
Jesus Christ, Wallflower. How many times can you make it look like you’re trying to commit suicide?
On the flip side, I had fun reading this! I usually don’t read this kind of content, but I’m glad I didn’t skip over it.
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I swear to god, if this story was made just for that joke alone.
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Can someone tell me who invited the kool aid man? Because he just broke down Sunset's wall
WHY WOULD ANYONE SELL THAT?!
Son of a bitch, this subverted the hell out of my expectations.
Not that bad, we had 35°C for the last few days here. Apparently that's 95 in 'Murica.
Also, at some point Sunset will have to explain Wallflower that she adopted a black jaguar...
Well, in this case, Wallflower actually might have drowned, lol. I suppose it's good for their relationship that she has no clue what CPR is.
Silly Sunset, modern toasters are more likely to fry the circuit breakers than the person taking a bath with them. Wally probably knows that.
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It's from 1960s. Everyone was on drugs.
Does this girl have no self preservation instinct?
Sunset thinks Wallflower is suicidal.
No. Wallflower is driving Sunset suicidal. I mean, we're already at least Twilighting levels of mental malfunction, it can only get worse.
... I thought it was a chocolate gun.
This can only end in Wallflower dragging Sunset into a love-hate relationship with her and delicious rainbow-flavored candy.
As it has. And it is good.
Mr. Snuggles is the best demon ever!
omg me too???
Why doesn't Sunset like hospital food? These are some of the tastiest morsels they have there. For a girl with bacon hair, she has literally no taste when it comes to the culinary arts.
Sunset you are literally a horse girl. Nuzzle her back. She is your girlfriend for fuck's sake.
Holy mother of fucker, I want a Pez gun! đź‘€