When Truth Blossoms

A mysterious flower sets off a chain of events that brings Wallflower and Sunset closer together and gives Wallflower the courage to make her feelings known.

Written for the SunFlower Shipping Contest

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TasermonsPartner

TasermonsPartner #1 · Apr 10th, 2021 · 2 · ·

A nice story about a nice, normal couple (well, as normal as a pair of magically intertwined girls can be 😉). The plot is good, your grammar is excellent, and, best of all, I think you captured the personalities of Sunset and Wallflower very well and how they would react to this situation and if they had feelings for each other, You even did an excellent job at conveying why they feel the way they do for each other, without it seeming forced or contrived in any way. It's a normal, healthy relationship based on normal, healthy feelings (and also magical mishaps, but that's par for the course 😉).

Kudos to you for a good story!

Marezinger Z

Marezinger Z #2 · Apr 10th, 2021 · · ·

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Thank you. When I do stories like this I think making everything feel natural for the characters is one of the most important things. We're free to write whatever and however, but I approach it in a way that says "if this was really going to happen in canon, how would it realistically play out in universe"; I think that makes the relationship feel more genuine to the reader.

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #3 · Apr 17th, 2021 · · ·

Hello there! One of the judges for Scampy's SunFlower Shipping Contest checking in for your donation choice for this submission. Which of the three charities would you like $20 donated to on your behalf?

Marezinger Z