Discord feels a sudden change with his chaos magic after entering through the portal, the chaos magic that made him stronger reverts to normal. He should be catching up with the others at Twilight's castle. Discord does hope that Spike can visit Equestria in the future. If not, it's good to know that Spike is happy with the friends he has.
"Fairy Law. I wonder if I can recreate it in Equestria? It didn't look too hard to pull off." Discord talks to himself while his body changes back into his Draqonecuus self.
Discord arrives at Twilight's castle. He looks around to see his friends stupefied. He comes closer to them as to why and what is going on.
"Can somepony tell me what is going on?"
Princess Celestia walks up to Discord. Her horn and left wing are still torn and broken. "We have a situation, Discord. First, can you fix my horn and wing?"
"Of course," Discord snaps his paw, restoring Celestia's horn and wing.
"I don't want to feel the wrath of that Scarlet girl ever again. I never felt immense strength and precision from a swordswoman like that. I'll have nightmares for sure."
"What's the situation?"
"It's TWILIGHT!" Pinkie explodes, her body is in pieces.
"What about Twilight?" Discord watches Pinkie Pie reassemble herself.
"She fooled us!" Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity step aside, revealing a mannequin version of Twilight Sparkle still in her human form."
Discord's jaw drops, hitting the floor; He couldn't believe that Twilight deceived them.
"My sister has gone too far on this ridiculous quest; to forcibly bring Spike back to Equestria!" Shining Armor is livid with the stunt Twilight pulled. He kicks his helmet in frustration.
"Discord, we need to go back!" Rainbow Dash looks at Discord with a worried expression on her face.
"Oooh, um.., you all are going to be pretty mad with me. In hindsight, it was a good idea. Now, it already backfired."
"What do you mean, Discord? What did you do?" Celestia asks.
Discord sighs. "I erased my memory on finding Earth Land where Spike resides. Also, I made sure that my chaos magic is forbidden from traveling there by any means. Not even time magic would be able to penetrate it."
"Oh no..," Shining Armor is fearing for the worst.
"So, we have no means of getting there?" Applejack asks Discord.
"That is correct. I've done it in case Twilight crosses the line even further. She'd already attempted to wipe Spike's mind, and we all saw the consequences of that. However, we shouldn't be worried. If memory is correct, we didn't pose a threat to the Fairy Tail guild. Let alone to the other magic users of that world."
"That is correct," Princess Celestia nods. "I sensed a few wizards while they fought. They outclassed and outmatched us."
"There's one wizard of that world with the power of slayings Gods. The one they called Sherria is a Sky God Slayer. I witnessed her battle against Spike's girlfriend. They're wicked powerful. "
"Sherria can kill you?" Pinkie asks.
"Yes. I did felt my chaos magic stronger but, it's not strong enough. I'm not too worried about the situation with Twilight being left behind."
"Why is that, Discord?" Shining Armor asks.
"Twilight is weak in Earth land. Who is she going to partner with? She doesn't know anyone. Also, there is a possibility of seeing Spike in the future."
"How?" Everyone says in unison. They feel happy at the moment.
"I gave Spike my last gift to him. A magic card. All Spike gotta do is breathe on the card, and the portal will open, allowing him to travel to Equestria and Earth Land anytime he wants. And, if he runs into Twilight or Twilight tries to do something stupid, Spike can easily use the portal and bring Twilight back to Equestria. Spike has proven to be a powerhouse."
"That's wonderful that Spike has some way to come back to Equestria for a visit," Pinkie happily says.
"I'll say. I wonder, is Twilight going to die? And if so, who's going to take her place as Princess?" Applejack asks.
Shining hated the idea of his sister getting killed but, considering the boundaries Twilight is willing to cross on her relentless path, it's a possibility he has to accept. His brotherly instincts are getting the better of him, and wanting to protect his younger sister but, that would mean betraying Equestria if Twilight succeeds in her conquest in retrieving Spike, regardless of the consequences.
"When Twilight returns Discord, you have the authority to strip Twilight of her wings. She is not deserving to be a Princess of Equestria," Princess Celestia formally decrees.
"How is that fair when Luna tried to enslaved everypony and ensuring all of Equestria into an endless night?" Shining Armor questions Celestia's authority.
Princess Celestia turns to Shining Armor, looking at him eye-to-eye. "The lengths that my sister had gone through were rough; she allowed the darkness to consume her, thus turning into Nightmare Moon. She was upset that ponies in Equestria would praise me for the light of day while they were asleep during her night. Luna felt it was unfair during the time, and I failed her as a sister. I failed Luna. For 1000 years, she was imprisoned on the moon due to my failure. May I add that she was in solitary confinement? Twilight, she's not driven into darkness like how my sister was. Twilight is driving into insanity. We lost Twilight the moment Spike was out of her life for the mistreatment she gave him. IF Spike accepted the fate of how he was treated, Twilight would be the same while we're oblivious to see Spike's pain, abandonment, and enslavement. We would still be oblivious to this day. Our main attention and focus would be on Twilight and her friends. Not Spike. I'm learning this as I'm seeing the direction we're walking through right now. Twilight is not fit to run Equestria as a future Princess. It was obvious that I made the wrong choice. She had so much potential in ruling Equestria someday. With her stunt and still having the motive to strip Spike's life away, she's proving to be another villain in the books of Equestria's history. I'll admit, I'm in the wrong on going to Earth Land to bring Spike back. I'm in the wrong on hiding the information from the Bar of Alliance that regards Spike. I admit I made mistakes that led to this moment. I'm not perfect. All I can do now is pray that Twilight doesn't do anything foolish that could bring disaster on us. There's nothing I can do to stop Twilight, and once she set her mind on something, she's going to see it through to the end. Tell me, is Twilight deserving of being a Princess of Equestria knowing she's willing to cross the lines and boundaries, disregarding everything around her except for her objective?"
Everyone is silent after Celestia made her statement. Shining Armor is suppressing his anger. Yes, Twilight has the tendencies to overlook at times when completing her goals. Shining witnessed Twilight trying to erase Spike's mind. Twilight even disregarded Spike as a creature. Twilight did a lot of good for Equestria's sake.
Shining brotherly's instinct to protect Twilight kicks in. "So, are we supposed to forget the good Twilight has done for Equestria? Is all that forgotten due to the wrongs she's done and doing?"
"If Twilight wasn't your sister, how would you feel?"
"I would feel-" Shining Armor stops himself from answering the question.
"Go on," Princess Celestia said. She has him now.
Shining now put himself in a heap of trouble for nearly admitting his true thought of the certain. He turns away from Celestia, feeling a bit of shame.
"If it were somepony else..," Shining Armor sighs deeply. "If it were somepony else, that pony isn't deserving since they took extreme measures on getting what they want..."
"Darkness and insanity are two different roads to walk on. You may recover better by coming out of the darkness. Insanity, there is no point of return. Twilight made sure she wasn't coming back with us. I have an unfortunate feeling. When Twilight returns, the outcome will not be pretty."
"You think so, Celestia?" Discord asks.
"Every villain comes back to bring suffering. You should know that Discord," Celestia states. Discord took that to heart as he did bring suffering to Ponyville and the ponies around.
"Ouch, I felt like I've been shot," Discord checks his chest and sees a bullet wound. "Yep, I've been shot."
"I'll ask again, do you think Twilight is deserving to be a Princess of Equestria?"
Shining turns to face Celestia in the eyes. "No," Shining answers seriously. It pains Shining Armor to answer that but, it was the truth. A painful truth.
"Discord, take some time off. One week from today, we're having a meeting with the Bar of Alliance. It's time to stop hiding the truths and start speaking them."
"Understood, Princess. Where to?" Discord asks.
"The Crystal Empire. As for everypony here, return to your daily lives until further notice. Alarm Starlight to resume her duties as Headmare at the School of Friendship in two weeks."
"Yes, Princess," Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity nod. They go looking for Starlight Glimmer.
Discord returns home while Celestia flies to Canterlot to inform Luna of everything that transpired. When Discord enters his home, he sees Sunset Shimmer bonding with the Dazzlings, watching a horror movie. Discord doesn't say a word and joins in on watching a horror movie with them.
Discord Feeling when entering his home to join his buddy watching a movie without saying a word. "the music plays his mind."
well, Twilight just went to an Insanity, a point of no return. Damn Anyway that's a shot to the heart chapter to discord heart, that's rough. great job on that chapter, I'll be waiting for the next chapter of Spike the fairy.👆 Take care. Like discord said.
Twilight already lost and she doesn't even realize it yet. She's going to get beaten by a much stronger Spike next they fight and if she were to go back to Equestria (if being if she survives) she'll have her wings removed, locked up, and learn that no one wants anything to do with her
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Whoa. I'm starting to feel sorry for Shining Armor here, having to choose between his sister or his country.
Considering what she has done so far, I would say it's high time Twilight deserved some karmic justice.
😁 Damn. Took the words right out of my mouth, Celly. Though Harvey Dent said it best: 'You either die a hero, or you live long enough to see yourself become the villain.'
Uh-oh. I think PJ is taking my words to heart.
I guess it's time to rip the band-aid off. Hope the other species will listen and be reasonable.
Well, Twilight has already lost all battles, even the one’s she has yet to fight. But again, Insanity can make anyone do crazy things like Joker. I wonder how far she’ll go.
If it were me....I would’ve just killed her on the spot. No need for the extra racket that comes with letting her live
Well at the very least the Equestria crew found out about Twilight's swap right away instead of oh I don't know.....7 months maybe?
Felt bad for Shinning as he had to choose between his sister & his duty to the country, but considering all of the things Twilight has done to Spike & still continues to do there's really no other choice. That speech she gave him was very on point, glad she's showing true leadership skills again instead of being order to by her own student (seriously her arrogance was Everest-height levels at the GMG )
As for the Bar of Alliance, here's hoping they don't go to extremes for all of this. At the very least Discord can now show them what the real Spike's doing & that he & his new family can take care of anything coming their way (including a unhinged alicorn)
so what's gonna happen to them now knowing what twilight did???
Nice chapter can't wait for the next one.
Maybe in the future we will see Discord using the Chaos Law
I kinda like the ending to this chapter…cause the horror movie is what Twilight is becoming. So I find it funny and ironic…and I have my obvious, and possible, but unlikely, theories for upcoming chapters. I won’t say them here, but I kinda hope we get what I think is coming…but onto the rest of the chapter itself… … AWESOME!!! I can’t wait till the next chapter! Celestia had brought up good-great points about Twilight, and I love how he had Shining have the internal brotherly crisis and how Celestia is going to tell Lina how badly things went…I kinda want to see that conversation in a chapter itself…it’d be deserved, and kinda funny in my opinion…and give Best Princess the chance to rub it in her sisters face about how right she was…I like Luna okay, so sue me…and another fun idea for a chapter I feel would be when the inevitable happens with the information Spike has, I can’t wait to see the reactions from all the other dragons when it happens…but until then…stay safe, and continue making amazing chapters.
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I think she’ll go to the lengths of Tartaros then Zerif to try and get Spike back, similar to what Minerva does, but to a bigger extent…but since I’m not the writer, all I can do is theorize.
What I want to ask is will that dam law Celestia made be revoked?
Sunset wanted to stay in the human world, and she greatly resents Twilight and the others Celestia most of all, i want Celestia to realize the law she passed is wrong.
Uh, Celestia? Question: Did you even ASK Twilight if she would like to take your place as future Princess of Equestria?
No? Wow, no wonder Equestria thrived under your rule for as long as it did.
The ponies residing on that land have become a mirror image of yourself that you and they are oblivious to the suffering you inflict on others, such as not asking what they would like to do in their future and not supporting them. You failed to realize that with Luna, you failed again with Sunset Shimmer, and it should be apparent by now that you completely failed for the third time with Twilight Sparkle. You better get yourself straightened out and soon, Celestia. Otherwise you will end up becoming the villain that you tried to protect Equestria from.
On a scale of 1 through 10 how strong is twilight gonna be in the next up coming chapters?
Twilight isn't a villian , because she lacks things that make a villian interesting.
Discord and Darksied have raw power, Xanatos( from gargoyles) and All for One have charisma in spades, she has no goal that anyone would willing join, not even the clown prince of crime, who either does anything for the hell of it or to pay the IRS. But most importantly she lacks.
Megamind: PRESENTATION!
She isn't a villian she's a deranged lunatic who can't see when she's beat. the best villians realize when a plan is hopeless. She on the other hand thinks she'll be able to erase the mind of all of Equestria when she returns.
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the numbers as i see it with the graph you put up i'd say 8.5.
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i do believe she will. the numbers say the chances are 76.45%. and that's the highest one i see. so that's the smart guess.
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I agree, no matter how much of a power boost Deceitful princess gets it won't compare to Spike's knowledge & experience in Earthland's magic though all the battles he has been though since his arrival.
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Ok also can you clear up the law that was made?
It suppose to make every race return to their origins?
Is the world or is the countries the came from?
If it from the world ok, still a terrible law, if it means every race to thier orginal lands....then does that mean... All the ponies as well?
I mean their ponies in different part of the world or so,
So Apple Losa sure spelled that wrong need to leave the lands and return and all towns or cites outside of Equestria need to pack up and return right?
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thank you. also i want to see Aria and Sonata move into Earthland so they can have a fresh start on a new life. but sadly the numbers say that's a 26.45% chance of happening.
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i think it jest the world they came from. tia would not be that crazy to do that. if she did then she would be looking at a BIG revolt and demand that she step down from the thrown so luna will take it up.
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Yeah that could be true, but let's face it.
The law was made in haste and for stupid reasons, it may not been hammer out..with how fast it was put up.
So hoping they screwed it up, Celestia needs to step down, she failed so many times.
Also wonder how long it take before they wonder how many times Twilight used the memory erasing spell.
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well we know of the 3.
#1 is on pinkie for who gave her the idea so she won't tell anyone.
#2 is on tia to get her focused on the task at hand.
#3 is on spike to get him back but it back fired on her for not knowing how strong spike is. (also someone give spike a Grammy for the acting he did in the games he even had me convinced)
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Damn!! That's a savage burn!!! But, I agree. She is NO Villain Professional, or "Villain/Bad Guy material". She is just a sad, sad, little pony that doesn't know when to quit, even though she already lost!
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Another savage burn!!!!!!
Question? Will she even get her own consequences/karma for sins, too? Just like Twilight?!
Maybe Ponyjoel will see our comments, and think about this?
Whether she decides to continue her pursuit of bringing Spike back by any means, Spike sending her back alive to face the consequences of her actions or either in a body bag/coffin upon her defeat, Twilight is SCREWED/done for either way at this point.
Good chapter. I look forward to seeing how this will turn out.
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oh, Twi is a villain, just not a SUPER villain...those r the ones that have presentation. regular villains can be remembered, at least, even if they dont make that big a splash in the pond. then theres the bog standard Bargan Bin Badguy type of villain, the ones that nobody really gives a fuck about because they r that forgettable...personally, id say that Twi belongs firmly in the last category...that being said, she is not yet completely beyond hope. while it is true that it is a dark path she now walks, in time, darkness must give way to light just as light turns to darkness. one cannot exist without the other, light is born of darkness and darkness is born of light, the two r forever intertwined...somewhere, deep, buried under the shadow, a spark of light still glows in Twilights heart. she is lost, and broken, but that which is lost may be found again...that which is broken may be mended. it will not be easy, nor swift to complete, but the Long Night will end with the coming of the New Dawn...
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At least Erza give her the greatest ass kicking she will never forget!!!!!
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LOL yeah, she's gonna need Luna's help in dealing with the upcoming nightmares!
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Can I hug Erza?
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We all do.
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indeed, we all do.
yeah I imagine Twilight's gonna start calling herself Midnight!
Obviously true that Celestia was very foolish to think that Twilight would be a great leader! She tried to erase Spike's memories and was more than willing to wipe out all of Earth Land, just so that she have her dragon slave back! By the way, I hate that Twilight became the new ruler of Equestria in the actual show after Celestia and Luna stepped down from power, Twilight is gonna end up being a tyrant that ruins lives by either enslaving and brainwashing them into believing the magic of friendship which is very false indeed, in both this story and in the show, denying their true potentials if they didn't want to believe in friendship and killing, imprisoning or petrifying those that rightfully refuses to listen to her and embrace the so-called magic of friendship! If Twilight (Midnight) was to takeover Equestria in this story, she'd wiped everyone's minds after either brainwashing Spike the Fairy by erasing his memories and killing the Fairy Tail crew, or capture Doggy Spike and killing her human counterpart. I'd rather have Chrysalis, Tirek, Cozy Glow, Sombra, Storm King, Sunset (if she have stayed bad) and/or the sirens (Dazzlings) rule Equestria than some self-proclaim alicorn bitch who is willing to ruin lives with 'friendship' and wipe out another universe or two hypocritical alicorn sisters that allows a chaos lord to get away with having others nearly destroy Equestria and punishing his victims by turning them into stone for eternity.
I was trying to come up with something of how I feel about this chapter, and I think this does a good job of what I feel
Edit:2/26/2023 to past self: What?