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Having lost the Overlord some time ago, the long-lived advisor imp, Gnarl, and the all of the other minions toil over their loss. This Overlord, was perhaps the best of all compared to the past ones. During this time though, they have found a spell in a tome that may re-unite them with their master. But smally printed in the dusty and aged book, a message states that the spell comes with mixed results. Will they bring back their master? Will they fail? Or, will they re-unite in a mysterious new land ripe for plundering?


This is a satirical comedy of regular stories of heroes against villains. This story, instead of regular ones, features the villain as the protagonist and the heroes as antagonists. If you enjoy a story in which the Mane 6 are finally shown as vunerable instead of invunerable whenever dangers appear, feel free to take a gander yonder.

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I love you for this.

And I haven't even read the story yet.

good good you have my attention:trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright:

You sir, are awesome. I loved both overlord games and the expansion. So far,the characters and dialogue are very well-written. Keep up the good work.

Man, I already like this + thumbs, I haven't seen this game in years.

Excuse me while I change pants.....

YOU CHEATING FREAK!

THIS WAS MY IDEA! MINE! I WAS THE GUY WRITING AN OVERLORD CROSSOVER! ME!

YOUR STORY IS A LOAD OF- hey it's actually better than mine.

Gee, thanks a lot dude, now you reminded me that we aren't getting Overlord 3 anytime soon. Or ever. Good story though.

I logged out.

Saw this.

Sighed.

Logged in AGAIN.

And tracked it.

Fuck you and your awesomeness.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png

This. Words. I have none. :raritystarry: :twilightsmile: :yay: :pinkiehappy:

Definitely keeping an eye on this. Sooooo much potential that it makes my heart ache. :pinkiecrazy:

Have i died and gone to heven

omg such a good game.
reading now

YES FUCKING YEAS!!!!!!

FUCKING YEAH

LISTENED TO THE SOUNDTRACK WHILE READ THIS>
IM SHACKING AS FUCK AND I LOVE IT!!!!!
MERMORES OF THE CRUSADE OF THE OVERLORD HAS ONCE AGAIN COME BACK< YEAH>
IF YOU NEED A PRE-READER FOR THIS IM WHILLING TO DO IT AS OVERLORD WAS MY FAVORIT GAME.
LITTLE OVERLORD NEED TO STAND BY HIS DADDY FOR MAXIMUM EVIL!!!
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LIKE FATHER LIKE SON
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read it.
OMG SO GOOD
moar. for the Overlord's sake. MOAR

*comes back home after preparations are made*

*goes on fimficiton*

*finally reads this*

..............................


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The TRUE overlord plus millons of imps vs discord vs princess Celestia and the elements of harmony. Kind of one sided don't you think?

764122
I never said they were all trained.. Most of them happen to be the ones that you literally just receive, so they die pretty easily.

Oh, by all that is good (or well, evil.) in the world!!! Yes! An Overlord crossover!:pinkiehappy:

I loved the whole premise of the Overlord games (Played em all). Though I was disappointed whole the 2 360 games went (sorry just happens and I sent quite a bit of ideas [Though they used em partially in the sequels]). Well whatever this story has a lot of promise don't disappoint me!
One thing I noticed that you missed out on is that the Jester Minion in the first game was actually possessed by the Old Overlord (Who possessed the Mage Leader you fight at the end of the game). Just that premise you would think oh he make an appearance in the sequel but he doesn't what the fuck.
Two are you going to follow the Honorable Evil Path (Which would be more entertaining then slaughtering everything anyway)? Conquer some Diamond Dog Territories and the Everfree Forest (There is more then Equestria to conquer [You got the Diamond Dog Territories, Changeling Kingdom, The 13 Griffon City-States, and Much more since it is considered as big as our world]).
Three your going to need a castle I suggest take the old one in the Everfree and Remake it (Shifting the portal from the meadow to the old keep would be must after taking it over).
Four because your in the MLP Universe who is to say 1 or 2 new breeds of minion can't be acquired (Each realm has got to have some new hive or something.
And finally Five you still have access to the minions of the Abyss which grants you at least in total now a whopping 6 Minion Types (4 original ones and the 2 Abyss Minion Types [Sorry kinda of forgot how many Abyss Minions you encounter]). Even if you just let them run wild they could possibly conquer half of Equestria without difficulty but that would be boring and decimating to your subject numbers (Homicidal minions need leash).

764140
Still remember one of the best tactics for imps, spamming.

i dont get it i played overLord and in my adventures playing it i dident seem to be that evil infact i went around killing BAD GUYS!!! so i just dont understand :facehoof:

I don't see why anyone would dislike this... The Imps are as funny as they are in the game. You have my attention, good sir.
EDIT: I'm literally shaking with anxiety. This is gonna be good, I can feel it.
Who knows? This may redeem you of the fact that you made a MLD sequel.

764221
Okay, I know that the Overlord (Old one) possessed the Mage but I thought and looked up that the Jester actually liked the original Overlord better, not possessed by him. That's why he did the whole thing. In fact, he was actually rooting for the original one when there was the whole Minion revolt. And the Jester didn't show up at all during the mourning service of the Overlord, or Overlord II because he was either killed in a horrible way (which I described) or he fled. The only other thing I can tell you is that other minion types are a no-go so far. If I renige on that, then consider your suggestion taken.


764398
For everyone who wants to know on his morals, he isn't a bad to the bone kind of guy, he's more of an opprotunist with some good intentions. Albeit he would have to rule before being a somewhat nice guy.

764451
:applejackunsure: , people are just jelly or something.I don't care though, as long as people like this then it's going to keep on going untl the end. :rainbowkiss:

You get my thumb on the first chapter, that does not happen often. Good job.

764487
Look I wasn't saying anything bad about your story. I was saying stuff that happened in the game that was never fully explained (I am actually really happy you did something to rectify that). I wonder what kind of monsters you will be encountering (The Everfree is only given so many and few are talked about [Though avoiding Stellar Bears at the beginning would be a must]). Minions riding Manticores or Timberwolves could be humorous in a way. If you need any OCs to pop up and assist you can use mine. Not so good at stories but great at coming up with unique characters. Yes I know I can be a bet of a rambler when it comes to game crossovers. I can be pretty straight to the point but I am not like some people that are complete Hard asses about facts and such (Thanks for replying to the previous message).

764653
No prob. Oh, and thanks for reminding me about that. I will probably need some OCs because..well. I'll explain it in the chapter after the one coming up. Yeah, send me a PM of an OC you'd like to be in the story. I'm going to ask some people for OCs in the next chapter.

Hell Fucking Yes! :rainbowwild:
MOAR! GIVE ME MOAR! :pinkiehappy:

766706
You have no idea...I actually have more than 4 other stories started. I'm going to publish each as I finish one. After I'm done my other story, I think I'm doing Spiderman...I don't know though, I just get ideas while I wait for a Heavy to turn his back so I can backstab and steal his identity.

I swear to God if you let the ponies win, I will shove a broom so far up your ass you taste dust for eternity! The Overlord always wins!

GIBLET! I see you pretending to lift that thing with one finger!

Perfectly done, my friend. Let's see what chaos you can whip up with this.

ALL HAIL THE OVERLORD!
I fucking love the game, its one of my all time favorites.
Therefore, you have piqued my interest and earned a fav.

764451
Just saw your edits. My MLD wasn't that bad, was it? I looked at it compared to the other works (not including the three before it) that were by others and found that it was more popular and well received. Anyway, those were my first days as a writer..boy
makes you think doesn't it? But regardless, I still had some one shots that I am proud of and my other two main works, Carmine and EQ Noire turned out to be good, the latter being featured. So I don't think I was really damned for redemption....hope you enjoy the rest of this story!

771398
Oh, it's nothing personal. I just despise MLD sequels written by anyone but the author of the original story. I still read them if they are well-written and/or has an interesting plot though. Nevertheless, I look upon all MLD sequels as really unnecessary since the original story ended where it was supposed to. The worst I've seen has got to be the one where Brian (I think is the name of the Guy given to him by the MLD fanbase) turns to alcohol despite the fact that he said he was going to live his life the best way he can. Not only that; but he winds up in Equestria too!
Plot hooole...

772524
Oh so it wasn't something I did specifically but just the story in general..makes me feel a whole lot better actually. Well, let's get off tht topic and go back to imps and the big steel guy himself, eh?

The Overlord seems somewhat nice, so I doubt he would kill the Crusaders, well maybe Sweetie Belle. But if he wants to, their sisters better arive quick because the Overlord is very tactical and cunning, he knows how to be a mastermind with even a pair of twigs. And Discord, good luck tricking the overlord, your gonna need it.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Yes I am pleased .

I am looking forward to see the crusaders die.:pinkiecrazy:

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Normally I would say that's f-ed up but I am considering it a possibility in the story..so I guess I can't really say much. I just hope to God that five people actually send me a PM because I doubt a lot of people hate the CMC. But still, I will do it if the quota is not met. This is based entirely on the readers.

I'm afraid to give my OC in fear of her dying, but if not enough people do then I'll submit her.

EDIT: Decided: to heck with it I'll do it.

772905
Bah who cares if an oc dies I mean who cares if anything dies I want my fun and the Overlord his meal.:coolphoto:

this is so good it needs a new word for how good it is, here goes

Superamazinggoodbrilliantholyfuckingchristthisisgoodjesusmonkeytiststhisigoodsuperagain

i think that sums it up. :twilightsmile:

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