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Both Carmines have died painful deaths in Gears of Wars. Many thought that they were gone for good. Well, what happens if they're both in Equestria, fully armed to the teeth?

Edit: Wrote this when I was starting to get the hang of writing. Once I release my sequel to this story, I plan on revising this story so that it is completely readable.

A Gears of War Crossover.

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Comments ( 291 )

Great so far.

Needs polishing though, it would be truly great then. I love Gears of War, you know.

Moar! :flutterrage:

Just uh, don't have them kill anypony... if you wouldn't mind... Unless they find evil pony-locust things... :pinkiecrazy:

I FREAKING LOVE GEARS OF WAR but omg please dont kill a pony i'd die inside if you did:fluttercry:

Pfft, bahaha. :rainbowlaugh: What a ridiculous premise.
I love it.

Don't worry everypony, two rookies with guns in Equestria aren't going to do anything...:trixieshiftright:

Interesting, I look forward to more.:pinkiehappy:

My god... the description. lol. This looks awesoem and I can't wait to read it.

I see what you mean. I am fixing any spelling or grammer I can find now.
I hope not. I had an idea in the back of my mind to add Carmines to your story, but I wanted to do my own thang. (yes thang was in purpose) :pinkiehappy:

Human entusaticis Lyra? Yea this will end well *cough*

This looks pretty cool. I'll be sure to come back to this whenever you update it. I can't wait to see how they react to the other mane characters. The thought of it just makes me laugh.

This is good pls continue :pinkiesmile:

I approve of this mission.

I enjoi. plz keep going:rainbowkiss:

I feel like I'm spoiling you guys. The next chapter so far has more than 3000 words and it's not even done. :fluttershbad:

Okay, I'm just going to state the obvious, Anthony Carmine is going to be the comedic relief for almost the whole story. :rainbowlaugh: He's like the Steve-O of Gears. Benjamin will be the more refined and mature one. :trixieshiftright: Though, they'll both have funny lines. I'm not sure when I'll introduce the bad guy. (Yes there will be one or two, or a million) :twilightoops: Oh and this new chapter has the most words I have ever written so far for a chapter. My hand has butt cramps now. :raritycry:

i have a premonition of shit goin down

Maybe she's already there?..........

How dare they give up on their quest for Bacon so quickly.

I am gonna laugh when

They fnd our what happens in the war

this is a fine story you have here good sir:moustache:

Now Question how scootaloo gonna have her own helmet like the carmines?:twilightblush:

i WANTS A SCOOTALOO!!:fluttercry:

Great chapter, just one thing... Rarity is not BLOODY BRITISH, SHE DOES NOT HAVE A BRITISH ACCENT FFFFFUUUUUUU, her accent is Mid Atalntic. I am British. Sorry about that, another great chapter, I love this story.:pinkiehappy:

I know her accent isn't British, but that was the closest thing I could describe her voice as that everyone is familiar with. Trans Atlantic is a mix of British and American, which like you said, is what Rarity has. The next thing I could have went with is posh but again, I need to speak in the people's vernacular. :pinkiehappy:

611529 Understandable, it just annoys me is all, like when people can't tell the difference my accent and an Australian accent.:pinkiehappy:

That doesn't make sense. There is a pretty good distinction between the two. The British are seemingly more formal in speech while the Austrailians are informal. Also, there are many things that vary. Such as; Oi! or Oy! crikey! That's a bugger! And so on...

611593 That's why I hate it when it happens, our accents sound nothing alike. I think the confusion comes from the fact that a lot of sayings used by us British folks are also used by Australians. I do love Australian accents though, they sound really cool.

Holy shit?! Ben had legs!! oh my god quick!!! CUT THEM OFF! CUT THEM OFF!!!!!

Lol thank god this chapter wasn't any longer. I swear; any more scootaloo and I woulda died from cuteness.

Lololll can we get someone to draw a picture of Ant walking through town with Scootaloo on his head like a hat? That scene was cute and funny at the same time. HNNNG Scootaloo is awesome.
Loved this chapter too; also glad that you didn't have Fluttershy freak out at the fact they ate meat. It's funny when people have her do that in their stories even though she feeds bears in the show and knows that some creatures eat meat.

I know. I never understood that because she treats bears and manticores like cats. And yeah, I laughed myself when writing that part. I can't even imagine Carmine running at a pack of Locusts with a Lancer, only except Scootaloo is on his head. :yay:

it's going quite well, hope the ponies don't get nightmare about the world of Gears of war.

Oh..that's for the next chapter my friend. We shall see. :trixieshiftright:

617692 Actually I think Imma draw something on MS Paint for that. I'll have it done in about 10 minutes. ...or never... idk.

This is all the effort that I will put into this picture lol. Btw I didn't draw that scootaloo in this pic...
Damn... I really need to get photoshop. I was a pro at PS in highschool...

“Yeah, we have a shit-ton to tell you guys.”

Understatement of the century.

Do I hear a new TF2 Hat?

Thought of the same thing

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