• Member Since 22nd Jan, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 24th, 2016

Kozak


T

The mission was to eliminate the final members of Raven's Rock that survived the purge in Russia. When they were heading to the evac point from a mountain range in Northern India where the final member of the Ultranationalist was eliminated they had to go through a strange cave that was supposed to open into a clearing where a helicopter could easily land, but there was a portal to a strange land where sentient equines roamed how will Kozak and Hunter squad react to this new enviroment? Eventhough they are a Ghost Recon team what will they do in a land that was thought to be a fairy tale world?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 57 )

It just needs more time and your rrelease needs to be fixed it is at the end THANKS for the good read!

I'd go over this chapter again. There are quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes.

He slowed his heart rate down so any of the minute movement made by his heartbeat.
This sentence, for example, doesn't really make sense.

Could one of y'all be my editor if so just give me your email address and I will email the chapters to you.

JESUS!!! WHAT IS UP WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!


Good story, keep writing

You could pace yourself a bit, but otherwise it's good.

Looking good, tracked. Don't dissapoint me.:rainbowkiss:

965448 I shall try my hardest good sir.

965448 Also have you watched the abriged series None Piece because your pic made me think of a part in the 4 video where Luffy says " I killed a lion."

awesome cliffhangers
gotta love these cliffhangers

Fuck Yeah, awesome action, and no boring explaining shit. You sir, are a good writer.

978856 Thanks I have been getting better. My first story didn't start as well as this one.

This is... the very first video game cross over in which the author killed trixie.... you... you.... ARE MY HERO!!!:raritywink:

Teilight was spelt rong sorry to say BUT the STORY IS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it is in the seventh paragraph BTW

BOOM HEADSHOT This chapter really, REALLY made me crack up. :rainbowlaugh: Props to you, good sir.:moustache:

987033 NO PROB!!!! :pinkiesmile: What do you think about the new PIC!!

987035 I don't see one could you post it on my page. Sorry :applejackunsure:

:trixieshiftleft: trixie do not approve.
But I do.

Wow. That summary of yours had a mother of all run-on sentences going through it.

Oh man, Rainbow must have pissed herself when she saw Kozak point the gun at her:rainbowlaugh:

I think Kozak reacted that way because he cares about his squad more than they realize.

29 killstreak... nice.

The only way to describe Kozak is a cross between these::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy:

1105777 I was just telling him that in the early version of the story it had a misspeling and that was what he put not me actualy trying to spell it the right way HA :pinkiehappy:

A/N: High School has just started for me so any updates will be few and far between Sorry.:fluttercry:

Ouch, that cliffhanger really hurt.

1172742 THEN I WILL DESTROY THE WORLD WITH A DEATH STAR

Goddam cliffhangers...

1173153 Hear, hear! But it's already done, though.

Why cliffhangers !? Why high school !? WHY!?:raritydespair:

ClifferHanger, Fuck.:ajbemused:

1171866

when it sayed at the end pulled a device and it was a gun and he pulled the trigger of celistya face HELL YEAH :yay:

I like it but I think celestia was a bit forward with the invitation, you know just a bit

1248925 Think about it would you want a group of spec ops soldiers with basically limitless supplies and weapons and combat training that allows the soldiers to basically defeat the most violent inhabitants of the ponies world. So wouldn't you want them on your side as soon as possible and not risk unnecessary lives.

1248925

I have to agree with this. Your pacing is getting a little too fast for my taste, and Kozak losing his cool THAT EASILY isn't exactly characteristic of him.....

And you don't taze Celestia unless you want to get teleported to the moon....

Other than that, the story is going pretty well. I hope to see more in the future!

1249451 I know Kozak can keep his cool in normal circumstances, but think is this normal circumstances and they are way out of their comfort zone and Kozak is finally succumbing to the stress of his work when he was sent to a different world all together.

Nice one. Kozak is best. Also, I wrote a fanfic where good ole Celly nearly buys the farm.

I feel like I've been :trollestia:'D.

I was wrong. :trollestia: Strikes Out!

Well... That was interesting... I am quite curious to see how this ends up working out. I shall keep an eye on this story and see how things end up. Keep up the good work, I look forward to whatever happens next.

I LIKE IT! also those who don't know what reference the skull fucking was from, the movie is from Full Metal Jacket.

Login or register to comment