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When Captain Price and the remnants of Task Force 141 get transported through space and time while looking for Makarov, they end up in a strange land called 'Equestria.' While they all just want to go home to finish their own war, will a new war in this mystical place keep them from going?

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by the way your prologue isnt published, not sure if that's intentional or not

feel free to delete this comment if you want to

wheres the first chapter

I'm going to read this as soon as I see the first chapter. I can barely wait to. There's nothing like the testosterone infused, adrenaline releasing, action in the COD Modern Warfare series, and to see in MLP is going to be a real treat.

This is the second CoD/MLP crossover I've read. I like this one better, mainly because, as far as I can tell, Task Force 141 hasn't shot anypony, and have been oddly accepting of what happened to them. In the other story, it's Delta Force, and the first thing sandman did was shoot Rainbow. Anyways, keep up the good work, can't wait for the next one!

this has me intrigued i'ma watch this :pinkiesmile:

ohhhhhhhhh dear

This I gotta read.

513202 yeah, if you read further they killed lyra and crippled bon bon... i stopped reading too..... i just want to see them try to act.. normal.. :rainbowlaugh:

I was looking for a mw fic to read and this one seems pretty good. I'll keep a look out on this one:twilightsmile:

Clever name, and a funny concept. I'll definitely be reading this later. :twilightsmile:

For once we landed in a place full of things not trying to kill us :eeyup:weknowmemes.com/2011/12/true-story-meme/

513202
Wait he shot her? Did she die? (I don't plan on reading that one).

i saw the description and i was like WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!?!?!?:rainbowhuh:

514533

Good, then I'm doing this correctly.:twilightsmile:

Good Call of Duty fic, in which more than 700 words? Wow, tracking

513722

That is the best line in fanfiction ever!

I have a question

are soap the rest of the humans going to be poniezed?

and is makarov going to make an apperance?

This is so captivating! Can't wait for an update on this story (if there will be one)

513202 What crossover was that?

You have captured my attention. Due to the fact that I liked MW2, it has more of my attention.

517986

I was extremely disappointed when Ghost and Roach died. I was originally going to write this with Black Ops characters, but then I realized that I have more to work with with Modern Warfare characters. So I thought, "Screw it, I'm going to break the cardinal rule of FanFiction writing and say that they didn't die, only got injured," mostly for the fact that I wanted six characters from the MW universe instead of our.

515773

Perhaps, perhaps not, you'll all find out eventually.

Although I will tell you one thing:

No earth villains will come into Equestria. I never liked that concept and probably never will.

All in all, this was a really great start. The other comments already say it, but I'll repeat it as well. That line from Nikolai was really well placed. It sounded exactly like something he would say. On that note though, that idea is my only qualm with the story. I haven't studied the Modern Warfare characters like I would a book's characters, but I've played and replayed them enough to know that they're pretty terse and aren't very descriptive in their speech. Your Price as an example explains his orders in the process of issuing them as opposed to the MW Price, who is a little more vague. It doesn't hurt the story a lot, but when I don't hear the characters talking like they would in the game, it's a little anti-immersive.

Other than that, this looks really great and if you're up to the job I'd love to read more.

519789

Thank you for your comments and critiques, that line from Nikolai was partially inspired by one of his lines in MW2, during the escape from the favela: "My friend, from up here, it looks like the whole village is trying to kill you!" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZiETgsSXuQg&t=5m19s

As for the characters, their speech, and how they give orders, I will admit I'm taking a few liberties as to how it's portrayed in the games.

One thing is that they talk very sparsely throughout the game, save for a few short conversations that ends with Price either executing someone or yelling into his headset on how their heli/car/exfil should have been there 20 minutes ago.

Another thing is just me being a bit fussy, I didn't like how vague Price's orders were, I just never felt that they were complete enough.

And finally, I must warn you, as if how they talked here was anti-immersive, then the next few chapters are going to be really, really, weird, as it's just them interacting with the ponies in every day situations, just to get them settled. Fighting will happen eventually, but not for a bit.

It's really nice to finally get someone actually critiquing my work, thanks.:twilightsmile:

514695 The Ultimate Sacrifice... Sandman, Grinch, and Truck

so when is this gonna be updated?
I MUST HAVE MOAR:pinkiehappy:

520977

Relax, it's coming along fine, good to see you're excited about it.:ajsmug:

I'm supposed to be sleeping, but then I found this. I can't currently express how awesome this is, other than I'm really awake now.

And Captain Price, poetic as always.

521698

I think his two monologues ("We Will Kill Him" and "For The Record") were one of the greatest parts of MW2.

Are we going to here someone yell RPG!!! in here at some point?:moustache:

521779 I liked the ending level in MW3.:moustache:

522622 I meant 3..... nothing beats the ending to that one..... especially after all the stuff the characters in the game have to go through up to that point.:moustache:

How come Roach isn't as durable as a roach? Yet Price is?

525523
I find 3 as a disappointment and disgrace. 2 was a much better story. But to each their own.

540348

I have no clue how to respond to this.

542562

Ok, that one I understand.

:yay:

Nice story! It's probably one of the few Modern Warfare crossovers that are actually awesome and stuff! :pinkiehappy:

I hope they all stay badass while trying to not daww at the ponies, but since they are all highly trained soldiers with butloads of experience I just hope they don't get headaches from all the bright colors in Equestria atleast. :scootangel:

^^^^^^ That Btw Good Choice Of Characters, But At This Point Cod Crossovers Seems...Cliche

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