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Ambushed. Defeated. Broken. Banished from his world, he expected his story to end, his revenge unfulfilled. Instead, he found himself in a new world - a world of peace, tranquility, and harmony.

May God help them.

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Comments ( 1026 )

Just how powerful is heller at the moment, Due to the fact he used Whipfist and other abilities, so I think he is quite powerful. In that case:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:. Plus in order to heal in battle you have to be very powerful.

Nice set up. I will be watching this. :moustache:

This takes place soon after he gained his Whipfist ability, so he has all his powers and devastators.

Then things are going to get interesting, becuase around the time you get the Whipfist, most people have Evolved quite a few levels.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Very nice job! I also have a Prototype story crossing over with MLP, but with Cole McGrath! You should check it out! :scootangel:

Interesting. I will track this! :pinkiecrazy:

:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:good so far.

I can't wait for them to freak when he shape-shifts.:pinkiehappy:

This is going to be AWESOME.:pinkiehappy:

I share your thought, Heller. I share your thought. I would be like that too if I ended up in Ponyville. Not that I'd be disappointed of course! :pinkiehappy:

Awsome so when's the next chapter coming?

Either tonight or tomorrow morning. I'm on summer vacation, so expect this story to be updated frequently.:pinkiehappy:

You know, actually; I think it should be an antagonist there as well. It will quickly become boring if there's only Heller and the ponies. For example, a vengeful Chrysalis with an army of Changelings (Let's be honest; Discord will be too cliché...) Seeing Rainbow Dash charging at Heller only to be owned will prove for some entertainment though. That and someone (or somepony) barely being able to stop him from killing her.

I've already been thinking of some possible antagonists for him to fight. Heller, while powerful, has never fought against magic before and is probably vulnerable to it. He won't be getting curbstomped by Twilight Sparkle any time soon, but there are opponents in MLP who could prove a match for him.
Oh, and there WILL be a Rainbow Dash vs Heller in the upcoming chapters, trust me on that.:raritywink:

Oh cool. Just don't have Heller go all "Fuck everything!" and have him kill everyone. Plus Heller killing an innocent (and a pony at that) for no apparent reason would kind of be out of his character. Alex Mercer is more the "I've gone fucking crazy!" and 'kill everyone' type of character.

Some enemies in Equestria would cause Heller trouble... unless of course he tries consuming a magical being.:pinkiecrazy:

I wonder. How will heller appear? i mean. Will somepony find him or will he notice somepony is being attacked and he rushes to defend the cute little ponies?
However! i cant wait until the next chapter comes out! :pinkiehappy:

An interesting concept to be sure. I won't read it.....yet. I would like to play the game first, get a feeling of his character, then see how well you do at emulating him.

please continue. I mean MOAR!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

'What the fuck' is now officially Heller's new catchphrase. :rainbowlaugh:

Yeowch though, I feel bad for Rainbow Dash. Just goes to show you don't mess with Heller when he wants to kill something. :rainbowderp:

even if the kid knicked heller, he still absorbed him. Does that mean heller got a new toy/power :rainbowkiss: ill be watching/faving this

I have gone through the game and feel like you got Heller's character spot on. You solidified my favorite with “I miss the trees.”
I can truly see him saying that when confronted by something like that. Good job and keep it up.

Thank you for not making the ponies OP, I mean I like them and all, but Heller can take obscene amounts of damage and deal it right back.

if thats how their reacting t his appearance now just wait and see what heller can actually do. anyway it was i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj54/templea2/Fantastic.gif

My reading this in a brittish accent made this all the more hilarious. It was like those old shows where the old brittish grandpa recalled a story. And then told it to the kids.

I'll answer that question for you Twilight, your worst nightmare times infinity if you even look at him the wrong way. Just be lucky that Heller was in a good mood.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

807280 in france that hand motion means zero... but i agree with the message you are trying to send

This is a interesting story. I will continue to read it and I will hopefully not kill myself because of all the waiting :pinkiecrazy:

Damn you and your cliffhangers I would rather be tortured!

Time for the ponies to see a few of his :pinkiehappy:powers.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Please don't let the STARE work on him.

Somehow I can fully imagine this is exactly what would've happened if Heller came walking into Ponyville. I'm surprised he didn't kill Dash though. Seeing as he's in obliterate-mode to everything that dares hit him in the game.

I wonder how heller would react to fluttershy's stare :rainbowhuh:

809976 He would be pretty pissed off at it.

809976 i just hope if she does that it wont be another "wh-whats happening to me" thing and the badass we all know is brought down to his knees by a tiny horse

If Fluttershy uses her stare to subdue Heller I will find you and kill you. That is so overdone I do not even understand why people do that.

Doubt it would really have any effect. 'The Stare' has just been heavily glorified by the brony fandom as something irresistible.

My guess? The Blacklight virus quickly negates the effects of the stare.

We would have one very angry Heller. Plus she would have to be very adorable to even make him think twice about killing her.

809818 How could it? Heller has seen horrors that the stare can't match. Of course it won't work on him!

809557 good idea to tell the author or authoress to strain itself just don't tell to take it slow.

805751 maybe the Alex Mercer in Prototype 2 would be like that but the Alex Mercer from Prototype 1 hell no.

He's not gonna eat you



809976 It would probably be something along the lines of: Da'fuck you staring at?


yeah thats what I thought too:rainbowlaugh:

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