Author's Note: Gnarl here. This author, this...PonyManne fellow, is weak and cowardly. He has a knack and love for scribbling and writing his putrid filth that he calls stories down and showcasing it. This chapter was meant to have tons and tons of killing, but he has faltered from his girlish behaviour. He had...refused to kill off the ponies you call the Mane 6. But do not fret, as we made sure to have a torturi- I mean "convincing" session to have someone killed. Sadly, there is no mass killing in this chapter..But do not worry, Minions, for we have accomplished in having some in the next, although it is a small amount. We'll be sure to do some more "convincing" with PonyManne the next chance we get.
“Hey! Let me go!” Rainbow Dash screamed.
“Get offa me, ya varmints!” Applejack followed.
“Ahh! You’re all so dirty! And you’re touching my stunningly clean coat!” Rarity whined
“Shut up!” Ten commanded.
Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rarity, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and finally Twilight Sparkle walked closely against each other, each step making their coats rub up against each other. Rarity found it all the while disgusting as she was not only being pelted with the sweat of her friends, but the touch of the imps surrounding them. They did, however, remain silent as a mouse whenever the Overlord turned his head back towards them, staring at them with the two malicious red eyes. They remembered what had happened earlier.
“-And that’s when I used the Banish Spell. Then, when all of the small thingies started to go wild, I used a teleportation spell to throw a bucket of water on you. We have to warn Princess Celestia. These creatures are definitely hostile, seeing as how that big one picked you up and almost killed you!”
“Ya got that right!” Applejack added.
“So what now?” Pinkie Pie inquired.
Twilight began. “Right now we-”
“Found them, Master! What do we do to them?” A voice from behind Twilight asked.
Twilight felt a huge chill travel up her body. It was even worse than the feeling from before. She looked to all of her friends who sat across from her. All of them had their eyes wide open, too scared and shocked to even speak, staring right at something tall that was behind her. The fillies were cowering and whimpering yet again.
With every single part of her, Twilight tried to fight the temptation to turn around and look at the things, closely inspecting them for future research. Yet again her will was overcome, as Twilight couldn’t defeat her bookish and studious ways and she turned around hastily and found one giant metal finger pointed at her, two red glowing eyes right behind. No noise but the single word that followed filled the air. It was deathly silent.
“KILL.”
The girls behind Twilight were just as scared as the former was. Who wouldn’t be terrified of a gigantic metal beast that had two piercing red eyes? Not to mention the fact that it’s attire was giving off a rather evil aura. Being the leader of the smaller monsters were no help either. His voice itself was something. It wasn’t shrilly or annoying, but it was attention grabbing. The Overlord’s voice, although only heard from that one word, was deep, resounding, and downright horrifying. Just hearing him speak seemed to put more fear in the fillies, shake the land itself, and darken the clouds.
That was another peculiar thing too. Right at that particular moment in time, while the events were unfolding, the Everfree Forest decided to have a dark downpour occur. The tiny drops of water blended with the already present drops that were being emitted from the nervous ponies themselves. The water just oozed off of their bodies, also amplifying the tears that were dwelling in their corneas.
The rain had an impacting effect on the other beings as well. For the smaller things, the water made their armor seem to shine and gave their weapons a frightening clang or clonk every time a drop hit against them. The creatures stood there, their small barely audible breaths causing a bust of steam to brew from the mouths. Their little yellow eyeballs stared right at the targets in front of them, examining each and every single movement from the peaceful equines.
Then, there was the Overlord. The water seemed to make a shield of some sorts around him. It did touch his armor, but it didn’t shine it, or dampen it. No, it was as if the water enhanced his strength or presence. When the rain poured onto his steel armor, each little tap sounded like a thunderbolt crashing through. His hand that was wrapped around tightly around his mace kept its luster, holding the weapon ever so tightly. The other free hand was lazily slung to his side. It hanged about, still brewing a spell.
Accounting all of these factors into the equation, the Cutie Mark Crusaders and the befuddled mares could do the only thing that they could possibly think of. Let it be known, that this particular moment in history would go down in Equestrian knowledge. The actions of these girls would forever decide the fate that would ensure their actions. Their actions would be so life-changing, that calling it a simple mix-up would be controversial. What they were about to do was perhaps the most irrational thing one could do.
“AAAAAAHHHHH!” Every single mare and filly present screamed their heads off.
Twilight, panicking from the sudden break of silence, tried to teleport themselves away from the horrid atrocities. She closed her eyes with as much power as she could muster, having the image of Ponyville burned into her mind. She just needed to focus a little more and she could get there in no time. Just a little more…
*Spark*
Some small bursts of purple magic came out from her horn. Her magical aura was building up. She just needed a few more seconds. Just a little more….
*Spark* *Spark*
Even more magic bursts this time. She could feel her soul tapping into the back-up reserve well of magic that she would save up for dire situations. Almost there…
*Spark* *Spark* *Spark* *Spark*
One more second!....
*Snap*
It took Twilight a few minutes to fully register what had just happened. She could smell it; the carrots from Carrot Top’s stall, the apples that Big Macintosh was selling, the fruit juices that Berry Punch was giving away at half price, everything. She could smell the flowers that were planted all around Ponyville. She could hear the idle chatter of its citizens as they walked by. She could feel the sweet warm rays of Celestia’s sun shining down on her. And she opened her eyes to see it all.
And there in front of her was the Overlord with her horn in his free hand.
Real Author's Note: Sorry for the short chapter guys but whilst writing the final part, I just got lazy. For some reason in my mind, I decided that ending it here was the best thing I have ever accomplished in my sad life. No just kidding, but I did think it was a great line to end with. Don't get mad or annoyed though, because a longer chapter is coming tommorow. :D
Overlord infinity, Ponies negative infinity. The Overlord does NOT like Unicorns, espicialy the ones that try to Banish him.
damn....
Nice Chapter i wonder what the Overlord is going too do now he's at Ponyville *Imagines what might happen*
Sweet. Unicorn horn weapon upgrade for rookie minion #328.
Wouldn't get pissed even if ya weren't posting again soon. Your story, your times.
Honestly, I'm genuinely relieved about the M6 surviving for now. Here's hoping they survive the whole thing and it's someone relatively unimportant who snuffs it. Of course, in my mind everyone in the FIM universe is unimportant compared to the six.
... Was only the Overlord transported with them or did she make a mistake and bring the ten along too? Or did she fail to teleport the others and only ended up with her and the Overlord in Ponyville? So many questions! Makes things interesting, so don't answer!
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That means that the ponies haved moved a lot closer to impossibly screwed.
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........oh.......... OW! THAT WOULD FRIGGIN HURT! *Imagines how Twilight will react* poor Twilight
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We'll see tommorow...
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The suspense is KILLING me...
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Something I have noticed in reading these crossover fics. No matter how aggressive the creature brought to the MLP:FIM universe there is a balancer affect that reduces the evil (Not by much maybe by 1/3 or so [what is removed is filled in with a calming loving affect {Though in the Overlords case would probably be more affective because he is human}]). How the minions are affected will most likely vary from minion to minion.
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I know what you're saying. It wouldn't be a good fic if people were all evil, were they? This Overlord is not the very definition of Evil, because he had Rose and had some good in him. I've actually seen fics with HiE where the humans are inherrantly evil and the fics themselves don't turn out so good. Like a wise mare once said: You gotta share, you gotta care.
Goddamn it, I'm lurking on the site when I should be working on the new chapter. Damn me for being feautured!
FOR THE OVERLORD!
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wow a new chapter already? PRAISE THE OVERLORD OF FANFICS!
*reads short chapter* damb tease....
p.s. twilight got pwned :P
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Your choice for the Overlord is a bit off but everything else is spot on!
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I'm sexy and I know it...but the next one is going to be more than 4k, I promise. If I manage to stop lurking, I can make it 7k
"And there in front of her was the Overlord with her horn in his free hand."
Buck my life.
Atleast the Overlord is a complete badflank.
oh I love this series gotta check this fic out
Before reading this story I was like 'I wont read it..but why the hell not? its not like I have anything better to do sonicrainboom.com.br/images/dev/emoticons/mlp-pshrug.png '
Then I was like
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should've linked to the trailer for the second game in the description, mon. It's way cooler.
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But this is about the Overlord in the first one...
808408 You know you should have the Overlord look at this realm as a possible paradise and security for Rose and his child so double reason to get to her and secure this place (Though it will take time to realize that without a history lesson and such). Knowing how many of the minions could easily kill baby seals I am surprised you didn't place a reaction to the ponies and the CMC (They are way cuter then baby seals [Gnarl probably due to his intelligence {He just isn't blissfully ignorant like the newborns} and maybe a few of the other older minions]). Though I am seeing a possible horn collecting concept playing out (TRIXIE RUUNNNNN!!!).
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This is going to be with canon as much as possible, so having Rose and the baby won't work. Some have already figured out what is going to happen to Gnarl at the end. In my stories, I like to stick to canon and not insert my own creations, i.e. custom character. As for the reactions, Pegasi, horses, and unicorns already exist on their realm. I will, however, clarify it in the next chapter.
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Yeah, I do that sometimes. I just wish I could make a better description because I feel that some people didn't get drawn in by the descrition alone. I just want people to enjoy my hard work because I enjoy doing stories like these. Also, thanks for liking it. Like a lot of the writers on here, I don't care about the faves or the likes, but the comments. Seeing people write they enjoy my story makes me feel giddy.
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Break off the horn!
Overlord in the middle of Ponyville? Let the Chaos Ensue! *evil laugh*
808547 I know horses and unicorns (of a sort) existed in his realm but I didn't know Pegasus existed in it. Wonder what his reaction would be to this realms versions of monsters (Hydras would probably the worst to face but the rest should be easily taken in stride) not to mention what ever Discord feels from their mind he could just pop em in for the extra chaos. My favorite weapon in the first Overlord game was the blood blade (Could heal when hitting enemies [Believe it is from the abyss expansion pack]). Probably make the story interesting that while he is in ponyville a raid was set up and being commenced by another race (I.E. Changelings, Diamond Dogs, and/or Ect...) and just stopping it/venting his rage makes him appear the hero instead of the villain (Ponies can just be way to forgiving then they should be).
Here is a question did any of the Abyss minions follow him out and are appearing invisible or were they just duuuhhhh master vanish?
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Well, I did the Pegasi take on my own thing, to explain their presence and all. (I mean the entire world is populated by mystical beings, who's to say that Pegasi didn't exist there?) Hydras already existed, so he should be able to take them down quick. I will have him fight something. His weapons are the steel mace and sword, nothing special really. Nice idea about the raid, I think I'll use that. The Abyss Minions were haulking around, following him a good distance from behind. They never got to the portal by the time it closed, so it's just the Overlord and the Minions..and ponies..and Discord...and eveything else.
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Maybe you shouldn't have had the Overlord already give the 'kill' command. Whenever I misclick some random peasant as I tried to go full goodie-goodie campaign, I'd regret it for the next few hours as I trace back my steps from the last save point. Needless ti say, they were supposed to be horse meat right then and there.
But no, you just had to go and end the last chapter with a whole "holy shit, they're gonna die" cliffhanger. Good job, you ruined it.
780822 Don't you ever try to fake yourself as a Machine God.
Signing Out,
-The Machine God
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a meatbag just bested you again
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Why is he only using steel equipment, surely as supreme Overlord, he has access to the Arcanium or Duranium Smelters?
Here is a thought. The glowing eyes could be caused from the magic in his bloodstream and the affects of the enchanted helmet. That said you could get quite artistic in how he looks without his armor at some point. Also fear the wild Molestia she is lurking nearby (Probably in your closet or under your bed).
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Tis shall be explained. We're only in the starting point of the journey.
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....You want me to give a face for the Overlord? That's like asking George Lucas to star me as Darth Vader, sorry but I perfer to keep him that badass who never takes his armor off. In fact, when making love to Rose, he probably kept the thing on.
Twilight got her horn snapped off? Meh... Really not too interesting if the main characters start dying... You still have my attention though, if only briefly.
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Don't jump to conclusions, bro. If there is one thing that people know about me, it's that I tend to act like I go one way and end up travelling another. I'm glad you understood that her horn was snapped off (many people think that she went to Ponyville) but still, don't think they started dying yet. Hang around and you'll find this to be rather enjoyable.
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Hey, I'm not saying that people shouldn't start to drop dead. Let's see some blood in the near future!
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Well, I will say one thing. It's a small glimpse into the chapter I'm working on. Let's just say....Pinkie meet Mr. Mace. Mr. Mace meet Pinkie. And then there was a tree. The end.
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Oh this will be fun!
809881 Good point though he has to reek after a certain extent (Though it would be funny that without all the armor he is a midget or something but that dramatically drops the badassery).
Yes yes so much yes!
I always love it when the heroes of Equestria aren't treated as some sort of deities that can never be harmed. Having a character sustain horrible injuries in great to add to the suspense, and remind the readers that the main characters aren't invincible and that they COULD die.
It's one of the many reasons I love Game of Thrones
Interesting. Continue please
Faved
“Get offa me, ya varmints!” Applejack followed.
“Ahh! You’re all so dirty! And you’re touching my stunningly clean coat!” Rarity whined
Why are they so... stereotypical?
812021 Because it's a cartoon and cartoons were never made to be realistic.
Did The Overlord just snap off her horn, or did he just grab on?
814108 An excellent point, actually! But I think that it was snapped off. You never know, though!
You know I've been waiting for something like this, a story where a evil 'Overlord' just demolishes Equestria not don't get me wrong I love the mane 6 but sometimes I get really REALLY violent.
Need some badass villain music. Because that was just downright awsome
812207 Not to mention satire.
.....WHY DID YOU NOT KILL THEM!?!?!?!