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Between Lines

A purveyor of intelligent literary commentary some of the time, and whatever I feel like the rest of the time.

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Yeah, I want to see this crazy universe continued.

What did i just read?

That... actually made a frightening degree of sense. I think. That, or I twisted it in my mind until I made it make sense.

Hmm. Am I Twilight?

I want to see more of this.

If it's that easy, then I declare myself Chuck Norris.

*a rumble in the fabric of spacetime*

Um . . . maybe that wasn't the greatest idea. :twilightoops:

Uhhhhhhhhhh..... What did I just read?

Well, this was... different. Both in a good and bad way.

6096430 maybe we're all Twilight at heart.

"And they have been sworn To Tell The Truth!"...or not.

:rainbowhuh: first I was like this.
:rainbowkiss: then, I was like this.
Now I have officially died laughing. XD:rainbowlaugh:

My parents said he was just acting out his feelings of inferiority since I got to be Celestia’s student.

That's not helping us be less sympathetic toward Twilight, Twilight.

This was small but rather humorous, if I had to guess shining switched bodies with twilight and that's how he knew who the better kisser was. Did all that stuff to his own body in order to make him look crazy. Oh almost forgot to say thank you, and apologize if I'm worn.

Please, can we have some more?

Wait, so, Twilight was Twilight? :pinkiegasp:

You can't end this here. It's criminal.

Please more? I want to see this resolved, who is the real twi!

What. The. BUCK. Just. Happened?:rainbowhuh:

So I'm guessing the real Twilight has some really interesting stories to tell, including "this one time, with my foalsitter" and "this one time, when the Changeling Queen kidnapped me".

I'm gonna file this right in here or maybe here and call it a day.

Silly Shining Armor. Everybody knows that Derpy is the real Twilight!

6098922 Concured
I think this could be the best random comedy I ever read, if it carried on. It has so much potential for silly shenanigans, it seems almost impossible to not make something out of this

This needs to go on!

I think I'm going to have to agree with Rarity here... what just happen?


I'd planned for this to be a oneshot, but by popular demand, you shall get a sequel.

Fortunately I know just what to do.:trollestia:

Oh shit.

Well.... Oh, Twi, you didnt have an affair with the pony who took your sister in law's place at your brothers wedding, did you?:trollestia:

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Oh my Luna, that was the funniest sh*t I've heard all day! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Loved it:heart:!

Also -

Twilight was silent a moment. “Polished tiger’s eye!

You forgot the quotation mark at the end.

Hilarious, I loved it! :rainbowlaugh:

I laughed heartily.

So Twilight turned into Shining and Twilight was a changeling? Still not quite sure how Twilight became her brother but... :rainbowlaugh:

Wait so was Twilight actually Twilight, or was Twilight Chrysalis and "Shining" is actually Twilight, or ..... nevermind all possibilities I am thinking of is funny as hell and let's just roll with it:trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

I don't even know, but I need more.

Twilight Sparkle × Queen Chrysalis romance plsz :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

“The Great and Appropriately Self-confident Trixie refuses to let such a show proceed with an amature host!”

Amateur is misspelled here.

My sides. What have you done.

6098738 Shining Armor in the cardboard wings is the real Twilight. The final question and its following reaction made it clear that Shining Armor used a body swap spell on Twilight and then sat on her throne before Twilight in his body burst in.

My reaction to Twilight saying... Chryssi's name.

Thanks for the catches. Fixed!

That was the most appropriate use of jontron ever.

I'll be waiting for Shining Armor's coronation as the new Princess of Friendship. :trollestia:

Congratulations! You have now caused me to create a WTF?! Folder, and have yours be the very first entry!

I giggled for an appropriate amount of time at select moments of my reading of this short farce. I'd give you a cookie, but that hasn't been a thing for years. Have this content face instead: :twilightsmile:

Hail Chrylight though.

Uhhhhhhhh... Well then. Glad i gave this a shot. Good awkward humor that knows how to work with its audiance is a rare gem.

YAY! All of my "YAY!!"

Dat ending line. Welcome to my favorites folder.




What? I don't even... what

10/10 Liked and favorited

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