Pinkie Pie loves Nightmare Night. She loves dressing up, and she loves candy. Most of all, she loves pranking ponies. One year she goes too far.
Reading by CaptainBron3y: Pinkie Pie's Last Nightmare Night
Reading by Jennabun (PegasisterReacts): Pinkie Pie's Last Nightmare Night
Reading by AShadowOfCygnus: Pinkie Pie's Last Nightmare Night
I LOVE IT! This is really good!
Nice one. Thing is this should probably have a follow up chapter.
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Where Twilight finds out Luna and Pinkie pranked her, and complains bitterly about her new coltfriend and what they may or may not have done?
Delightful! Fully Spooky Pony approved.
It took me a moment to understand why Celestia was speaking in Old Equestrian, but then my sides split off from my body.
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Probably. Twilight really ought to be consider why Princess Celestia is speaking like Princess Luna though. Somepony will probably get a talking to should anything bad happen.
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You might want some Transglutamin for that. Or also known as "meat tape".
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Thanks!
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Admittedly, that was a rather major hint as to who the speaker was, but it was funnier to do it that way . . . and how often do you see 'swiving' in a fic?
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She's a smart pony. She'll figure it out before she does anything she'd truly regret.
5145171 By the Fausticorn's shapely flanks, I thought only I knew what swiving meant...
"bootsies."
Caramel-covered onions. Perfect for those truly nasty of trick-ers. I'd love to pull it off just once, but I suspect I'd get arrested for trying caramel-covered anything. Halloween is distressingly dangerous from those who would abuse everyone's sense of humor.
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I should have....
Hmm. DJ loves caramel apples....
I know, right?
I'm such a Pinkie Pie amateur that I stopped here to wonder about this
You'd think that I'd have learned by now
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It's an archaic term for plowing a field, or. . .
5145019 Perhaps she could get one the same shade of green as grass. That would explain a lot. Of course, I'm writing a romance fic between Pinkie Pie and a changeling, so maybe what comes around, goes around...
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Yeppers. I think it could be really funny.
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I might have to do that. We'll see.
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Thing is, Lesson Zero Twilight would scare off Stallion after Stallion.
She is quite the catch though. Being turned into an orange occasionally though...
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All relationships have their little ups and downs. She's attractive, powerful, presumably wealthy, and an alicorn princess. On the downside, she's the target of various monsters, she's very OCD, and sometimes accidentally turns animals into oranges or ponies into plants.
This was an enjoyable read! Well done.
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Thank you!
LOL!
^ Well-lit?
Brilliant!
I almost don't want to kill myself, so I can read whatever else you put out.
¡This is very funny!
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Funny, all those downs were decent plusses for me, and the ups just made things a little better.
Tee- Hee Wha ha ha ha ha !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ha! That ending! Nice one!
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Technically, either is correct. These days, 'well-lit' is the more common phrase, but that wasn't always so.
Some people use 'lit' only to describe things which are on fire, and 'lighted' to describe things that artificially illuminated.
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Thank you!
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Thanks!
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Excellent. Now my plan is revealed.
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Well, that's perfect then!
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Thanks!
i was giddy the whole story. good job!
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Thanks!
At first I was like
And then I was like
Short, sweet and funny. Nicely done. Now there needs to be a sequel where Pinkie comes back from her supposed banishment on the moon as Nightmare Pinkie.
Would have been better if Luna didn't use archaic speak. You do know she stopped doing that after Luna Eclipsed, right?
yes
You know, that picture finally offers the first semi-plausible explanation I've seen for that horrible Pinklestia toy they were selling awhile back.
You know the one.
Wow! Perfect prank ever!
"Huh..?"
Sweet Molestia...it was good.....
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Ooh, that would be good. She could even borrow Nightmarity's outfit.
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I liked the comic where Celly was pink because Luna painted her that color.
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Yes, I know, but I always liked writing her that way. From a technical standpoint in this story, it also serves to alert the reader that 'Celestia' is really Luna in disguise, which would have been harder if she'd been speaking modern English.
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Thanks!
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Doesn't that kinda spoil the twist, though? Luna's regular speech pattern is different enough from Celestia's that the average reader would be able to tell something is off. The fact that I realized pretty much instantly that it was Luna sorta ruined the "Aha!" moment.
Great. Really funny, made me laugh.
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Small addition:
"Twilight ran to her libraries balcony and looked into the heavens where Rainbowdash had left enough holes in the clouds to see the full moon. And sure enough, the charicature of a curly maned pony was emblazoned on the surface. Shrieking in horror, she ran to her desk and immediately began writing a letter.