• Member Since 12th Feb, 2012
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Lady Gunner


All badassery is completely intentional.


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Twilight decides that Rainbow Dash & Applejack are in love, and sets out to bring the happy couple together. The truth is, however, that a grudge match for Twilight's affections has begun between them, and as their actions drive their own friendship apart the cracks appear elsewhere. Who will come out the victor, who will be left in the dust, and why can't everypony get along?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 26 )

Definitely an interesting concept to work off of. Hope to see more of this. :yay:

:pinkiegasp: Holy snapowza! Who wrote this? *looks to see if it's some author he knows, see it's someone he's never heard of before, watches* :raritystarry:

You got me on the counterintuitive notion of a matchmaker trying to put together two friends she thinks are in love while said friends fight over the matchmaker. I bet anything somepony will comment on this and say it's really cliche, but I've never seen something like this before, sweet concept.

And then there's that thought-provoking introduction, that sucked me right in. Really, really nice job. This is a great start to this story, I can't wait to see another chapter! And everything after that! :pinkiehappy:

You've got a follower! Thanks for writing all of this, LadyGunner, keep on doing whatever you're doing so well! :twilightsmile:
Keep on rockin'! :raritywink:

This promises to be an entertaining read.

It's very rare for a chapter so short to have already gripped me so thoroughly.

Awesome job, and update soon!

You have peaked my interest :twilightsmile:
I will definitely be tracking this story.

There is no way this can go wrong!

Except for every way imaginable, of course...

Tracking.

You earned a track, let's see where this goes.

Hmm, miscommunication and TwiDash/Applelight shipping? Heavy risk... but the PRIIZE...

You're off to a good start here man, I am wondering how you're indenting is so... mismanaged but I'll look past it.

I'm going to see where this goes. No matter what.

And my comment sounds like a bunch of broken and fragmented sentences. Typical of me.

Okay, I'm interested. As much as I love TwiDash, I have yet to see any TwiJack shippings, so I'm torn on what I want more :/

Tracking!

ThIs Is InTeresTIng....
TrAckIng. WTf? TrAckIng gottA fIx my keyboArd.....

221472 It looked more normal on Google docs. Meh. :derpytongue2:

I already like were this is going

Hmmm, who should I go for? Twidash, one of the most popular shipping in MLP, or Applespark, a pretty good, but easily overlooked shipping?

I like this. Haven't seen any fics do this yet. And welcome to Fimfic.:pinkiehappy:

If you dare stop writing this, I will destroy you and turn you into cupcakes. :pinkiecrazy:

222115 Maybe because they're not me? :rainbowdetermined2:

267264 So cool! *swoons* Can't wait for the next chapter.

I can't wait for the next chappie! Rainbow vs. Applejack Who will be the victor?

I'm really hoping to see an update for this soon.

Please Update!:duck:

Ooh, very interesting concept, you haven't abandoned this story, right?

I've...never understood the what people think Twilight might see in Dash as a romantic partner, and it's a vastly overdone ship. That being said, TwiJack seems to be an often overlooked pairing, and I can really see it working given their personalities

Either way, I'll keep track of this one to see where it goes....if it ever does. Whichever pony wins, you're off to a good start :ajsmug:

Why oh why hasn't this been updated? Do you require a sacrifice? I have a couple of family members I wouldn't miss too terribly :p

Really interesting start, and I'm eager to see where this goes.

Oh, what an opening. :raritystarry:

Great potential, this story has. :yay: (Pardon the Yoda wording. :twilightsheepish:) Come on TwiJack! :twilightsmile:

It's been over a year.
This is most likely going to become the next Assumptions fairly quickly.

does this kill the man story?

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