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DJSkywalker


Just a fan who likes to share his ideas through stories that people seem to like.

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How long have I been here? I don't know and am not sure I want to. All I know is that my old "friend" Discord is free and he is saying that I can be free too. Why would he want that? Doesn't he remember what I promised I would do if I got free? He causes chaos for fun. Me... I cause chaos to destroy. Celestia and Luna will pay for what they did, or so help me I will cause this entire planet to pay!

Meet Allison, a young girl transported to another world over one thousand years ago. Armed with incredible powers, she attempted to be a hero of this new world, but was shunned and feared by its leaders. After a particular incident, she was sealed in stone by the Elements of Harmony. Now that she has been freed, will revenge be her goal or will she focus on returning to a home that may no longer exist?

Rated teen for use of strong language, intense violence, and death. You have been warned.

Based of the PlayStation Vita exclusive: Gravity Rush.
Holy Crap my first featured story! Woohoo! Featured on May 8, 2014
Featured again on June 16, 2014!
And again on August 5! I'm gonna stop here, but man it's great to have such amazing fans!

Chapters (27)
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Comments ( 1012 )

An acceptable start, but far too short to make an opinion on whether this will be good, bad, or yet another attempt to leap onto the bandwagon. Only time will tell.

wow.oh, DJSkywalker, im typing up my next story even though the first is not finished.
PM me for the viewing password.

What series is this from?

so you gotten into this bandwagon huh?
good luck.

Welcome aboard i must say excellent start.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I like it!

Wow we went from burning rage and anticipation for battle to mourning and extremely lax towards potential enemies really, really fast. I can understand her sorrow but I would think she'd be a little more defensive and angry towards their approach than that. Oh well, guess it's time for a flash back

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:trixieshiftright: This amuses us greatly. Please proceed.

You have my attention, please continue.

I barely know anything about the character but I already like her.
WHAT SICK, TWISTED THINGS ARE YOU DOING TO MY MIND?!?!?!?!?! :fluttershbad:

4354228 Remember it's the Princesses she is angry with, not ponies in general

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I'm aware of that and I'm impressed she managed to focus it when she first got out so she didn't go on a rampage. But still, these are the Elements of Harmony that where used to put her in stone and they were right there with Tia when she busted in. I would've thought there would be some caution or suspicion.

4355929 How would she know? The Elements were different back then and she comes from a world where MLP does not exist. All she knows is that these ponies are friends with Celestia, but she also knows that she has enough power to take them on if necessary. Why there is no caution will be explained in the next chapter as it has to do with her psyche.

What is the game that this is based on?
I remember it and have been searching for it for a while now, but I still haven't found the game's name!

4356412 Like I said in the author's notes, it's called Gravity Rush, exclusive to the PlayStation Vita.

wow. very intriguing. I can't wait for more

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Consider dropping a {Crossover} tag on this story so readers know it's based on an existing non-pony work.

Welcome to the bandwagon.

You had my interest, but now you have my attention.

good start, I shall see where this goes

4356412 I think its still free if you have a playstation plus membership

2D

Can't say I enjoyed it too much.

Congratulations on the feature, regardless.

Gravity Rush!? I freaking love that game, definitely faving this!!!:heart:

I have only one thing to say about this story my good sir.....
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:flutterrage:MOAR:flutterrage:

AND TO READ LATER, SHALL WE GO.

Honestly, this looks fucking awesome, can't wait to sink my hungry teeth in it. I just hope the updates are frequent enough for me to enjoy it regularly.

I'm going to be honest here, I don't think I would kept as calm as she did
I put myself in Kats shoes and this is what I though "ok, so I'm immortal now (all the freinds I make die before me) BUT I still have dusty who is my only real companion and I tr- CELESTIA AND LUNA KILLED DUSTY. "
I'd be completely consumed by rage and would try to kill everyone, especially the princesses. And being trapped in stone, having time to think, I would realize that I shouldn't take out my anger on everyone. The diffrence between me and kat? I would still try to kill the princesses :pinkiecrazy:

Hell to the yes SUN ASS DESERVES PUNISHMENT! You would not believe how much I despise Celestia.

... Your meta notification will give you all you need to know about what I think of this story. Faves are a meta notification right?

Was Dusty the stuffed cat she bought, or was he a real cat?

4369641 It all is explained in the next chapter. There is a reason she is not going all murderous right now.

4369831 It was a stuffed cat

4369903
...a stuffed cat?
I thought it was a real cat. Then again I actually started talking to the companion cube in portal so... You know...
Hi pot! My name is kettle!

4369966 No, started as a stuffed cat, became real through the portal. More detail, next chapter.

4369976
Ah, ok I'll patiently wait for the next chapter then :pinkiehappy:
Also, forgot that comment about the companion cube earlier :twilightblush:

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Was she insane when she went to equestria?

4354228 Mood swings. It's a human psychology thing. Plus, she was supposedly immediately stoned after they killed Dusty. Of course she would have a lot to think about now that she'd returned to the world of the living.

I like! MAKE MORE! NOW! :pinkiecrazy: Or Pinkamena will beat yo ass!

4381045 KEEP THAT MARE AWAY FROM ME!! I'm working! I'm Working!!

4381056 YOU BETTER! I have the phone in my hand! Good story btw.

4381069 Why thank you, I'm putting a lot of thought into this story. Also, KEEP THAT PYSCHO AWAY!!! It's coming, it's coming. Maybe tonight or tomorrow.

4381119 Yay! chapters! You may not be payed a visit by Pinkamena... Just maybe...

..I'm just waiting for a mind-fucking, reality-view-shattering revelation of what happened in the past.

still liking this:pinkiehappy: more please:fluttercry:

huh... according to the view-counter, I'm the first one to read this chapter... now how many commented before me despite of that?

“I think it’s time to see the results of your training cat,”

I think you mean Kat.

Also, why did Dusty back up Kat on this? Wasn't he saying just a moment ago how they shouldn't rush into situations? He doesn't seem like the type of character to get irritable or aggressive easily.

Also, why is Twilight Sparkle taking this so easily and allowing Kat into their town? Discord said that Kat was another force of chaos that he unleashed, and considering this all takes place very shortly after Discord's reconcealment, the ponies should be on edge, not accepting... Especially since Kat specifically stated that she wants to fight Celestia and Luna after gathering enough energy. Twilight is smart. She knows what Kat's abilities are (even moreso after Kat told them her story). Where does she think that Kat is going to practice these powers? Even more importantly, why are they harboring someone who clearly wants to hurt the princesses? Leaving Kat out in the cold isn't a viable excuse for this, especially putting into consideration how they felt towards Discord's reformation later into the series. Kat burst down a wall and attempted to attack Celestia before fleeing; they should clearly feel the same things talking to Kat now that they would've in that situation.

tl;dr There's this really big plot hole. Fix it or come up with a feasible explanation, please.

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