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DJSkywalker


Just a fan who likes to share his ideas through stories that people seem to like.

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Chaotic Harmony, Book 1

Blue Frost is a pony, now. He remembers being a human, but with little else, he must make his way in the world of Equestria and find where he belongs. With the town of Ponyville opening its arms to this new pegasus, Blue forges forward into a life he never thought possible. Laughs, loves, and loss await.


Official remake of my first big series "I Left My World for Ponies?!". While there will be similar plot points, this will be a fresh take on the original story after my years of growing as a reader and a writer.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 31 )

I never did read the original, but I will say that this chapter was an AMAZING start. I sure am interested in Blue Frost's future journey in the land of Equestria. Keep it going mate. I'm truly hyped up for more! :pinkiehappy:

I loved the original, even saved it before it was taken down for later re-reads, I await this with baited breath

This is definitely interesting. I can't wait for all of the ... "creative" ways to use Pegasus' magic because even with plot-convenient amnesia, there is one thing that will never change about humans it's our very, very bloody and violent mind.

~Guess who's back, back again?~
~DJ's back, tell a friend~

Man, it is good to see you back. I read your original story when it first came out and was sad to see it go. Curious to see where you take this one.

Very interesting!

Could swear your oc is familar but cant remember from where

Interesting so far, I am looking forward to seeing more of this story, keep it up.

This is amazing! I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Can't wait for him to introduce himself along with your upcoming chapters, and remember:

Keep your dreams alive. Understand that achieving anything requires faith and belief in yourself, vision, hard work, determination, and dedication. Remember all things are possible for those who believe.

Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy!

https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU?si=hRzrTteAucUFuuNT

Nicely done! I noticed something odd

Woah, what is this It’s delicious!”

whats with the ? And ! Over each other? You got that a few times here

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It’s a personal choice. I just like the symbol more so I have it set automatically in my writing.

Well, far as I can tell, for the time being, I’m pretty much stranded in a place I know nothing about, in a body not my own. I guess at the moment, all I can do is at least find some stability while I try to see if I can get my memory back.

Holy hell, the HiEtP protagonist that wants to return to Earth, with a common sense?!
Okay, I'm sold.

Smart one, this one. Lets hope that checklist also has math on it.

Look like Blue is going to learn everything in Equestria and Twilight is going to tell him about Ponyville. Also, I'm looking forward to seeing Blue flying with Rainbow Dash I want to see him training with her on how to use his wings.

Here's a song that will make you natural. Enjoy!

https://youtu.be/V5M2WZiAy6k?si=Jok85tyoYjGxjBj9

I don't know about you, but I always have extra pasta, so I have to do it per serving, or the pasta will go bad sooner, so I will say blue is right.

Lovely idea! Though, is there something missing?

Blue couldn’t help a smile forming on his muzzle in return. “Sounds like a good plan. I’ll get the noodles and we can work on the sauce together while they cook.” The two shook hooves on it before Twilight led the way to her rather simple kitchen. The library housing itself was rather limited compared to the central business. The kitchen was barely more than ‘nette’, consisting of a large sink facing the back window, a built-in oven with a stove top, a pantry built into the far wall, and even a refrigerator, which Blue couldn’t help but comment on.

Twilight nodded. “It’s an older model, but works well. I did have to replace the crystal not long after I moved here, but that one has yet to run out, knock on wood.” She tapped her hoof on the log countertop with a soft giggle.

what does he comment to cause twilight's reply?

Blue with the hair-trigger on food presentation. Twilight with the family standard stubborn.

Neat addition with Nyx.

So far so good on this new chapter, can't wait see Blue on his flight training it's going to be so great to see him flying.

Here's a song that will make you a believer. Enjoy!

https://youtu.be/Ru7ffOoSN4U?si=YA61CV18zRXZW62k

I've had it both ways.

Sauce the noodles, it's better that way. Serving only you always end up with dry noodles.

I’m glad they found a compromise to The Great Saucy Dilemma. :twilightblush:

What will Blue do next? “You’re my boy, Blue!” -Frank the Tank. :rainbowlaugh:

Nicely done and i dont mind either but names are easier to remember, if you look for a certain chapter

Mystery deepens! :raritystarry:

Not sure if it was intentional, but there may have been a few missed pie jokes in there… :duck:

Well Ah'll be, you actually finally got the motivation to start the remake. Neat. I haven't been here in a while and just had a vibe I should check after having reread some old faves and to mah surprise you've recently started this up. Hmmm, this just makes me remember how long my stories have been sitting idle...maybe I should make an effort to correct that.

“Six ponies coming at me with the powers you’ve told me about? That may be some fella’s thing, but it certainly ain’t mine.”

Maybe it's just me, but Ah can't help but feel like despite this being a wholly different version of him, this is still maybe a little dig at mahself. :rainbowlaugh:

Haha, it's possible. I certainly interpreted it that way, Ry.

That aside, totally a sauce added per plate guy. Tomato sauce and Ah have a mixed relationship so gotta keep it measured, haha.

"You forgot these when you fell.", huh? Curious.
Either way, the iconic weapons make their debut.

Heh, I'm more excited to see how my bestest best buddy will make his debut in this refined version. I mean, he has to show up eventually, right? It just wouldn't be the same without good ol' Mallie-kun~

That was interesting and i will for sure

Lightsabers could be ominous. :duck:

What is next for our boy, Blue? :applejackunsure:

Just number the run of the mill chapters, but 100% name the important chapters. Start and end of arcs, battles, deaths, anything important should have their chapters named.

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