Bellona Abel, Abbaddon Bor, Rowan Surena, Veliomoure Ravenclaw, and Solarius. Four siblings and an animal friend stuck together, as OverPowered as they can be.
In a story of reincarnation and transmigration, they find themselves thrust into a world they once regarded as mere fiction: the vibrant and enchanting realm of My Little Pony. However, their arrival brings a startling twist as they awaken in new equine bodies, far removed from their familiar bipedal forms.
Faced with the daunting task of avoiding altering the history they know of, or triggering unforeseen consequences that are unpredictable. They must think and act carefully, concealing their true identities while adapting to their new lives in this enchanting, animated world.
Welcome to the enchanting realm where the lines between reality and fiction blur.
Thankfully, our main characters won't be easily caught. Such a shame there's something different in the history books though...
(FIRST FEW CHAPTERS WILL FOCUS ON HOW THEY WILL ADAPT TO PONYVILLE BEFORE THE FIRST EPISODE)
(UPDATES APPEAR RANDOMLY)
(Changed it to T-rating)
Interesting concept. I like how you turned the ‘normal’ horse into an alicorn pony as well lol. I do hope you plan the timeline out and don’t drop this story.
I haven't read anything yet, but I will say this. Those names are wild.
Loving this concept
I love this so far :)
Neat
I do like the concept of a regular horse joining as well
It thought that the opening scene was D&D.
Not bad. I haven't seen that many MLP fics yet so this'll be interesting. I'll be watching this improve.
Ok good start, but you need a human tag
I'm enjoying this, keep it up author!
Excuse me, I don't believe this story should be E-rated due to the potty mouth presented in the opening paragraphs.
Maybe give this a T-rating please.
While the comment below me is a little childish in wording, I have to agree. The violence, death, and swearing ABSOLUTELY requires the use of the Teen rating over the E rating.
Ooooh, are they gonna say their foreigners?
And they plan to start their new Lives in Equestria?
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I couldn't help but read that out loud in a British accent. The words "Heed, Detest, and Dare to" just scream Britain to me.
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Well, pinkie can interpret Maud so I can see how she understands her
This story seems run from childhood dream as the same interesting,innocent……
This story give me a chance to recall those in my brain but yet can't remembered memories.So,thank for you work,hope you can keep this writing sytle and continue
Good concept, slightly confusing writing.
It somewhat gets across character, but it's fast paced and a lot of stuff is happening without discrete detail. The writing is readable, but doesn't flow.
Let's see how the next chapter will be.
The context behind the litRPG elements is not explained. The "system" is a thing I only know about from encountering it outside of fimfiction, but I'm still new to the genre. I feel like the litRPG elements need better explanation and context in the story. They're just there, and the reader is expected to understand them. I've never heard of this game dungeon thing, what does it do and how does it play into the story, other than giving the characters convenient access to whatever stuff they want.
Earlier, the characters were upgrading stuff in the castle. It is mentioned that the upgrades are conveniently free, but this is not expanded upon.
Additionally, the characters can conveniently make stuff like beds and stuff and have access to some kind of external funds.
They have all these abilities that come out of nowhere, are not explained and conveniently solve all their problems.