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A Halo-MLP fanfic.

The Rookie's memories are clouded and foggy. He awakes in a new world, a world innocent in nature. Peace is in peril.

Bi-weekly updates starting 03/12/24

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 26 )

I like this so far so more please

Hmm are the equestrians humans or Arthros?

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They're regular. It's a human in equestria story. 😄

Interesting, I like it!

I like the story I hope you continue it.😄

I finally found a story about my favorite character, please don't abandon it

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Will likely post more soon bear with me

I can't wait for more.

I’ve been wandering if this is before or after Luna’s return, but I have a sneaky suspicion that is before that event.

Great chapter, looking forward to the next.

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I’m pretty sure this is after.

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I wasn’t quite sure, some of the things she said at the end of the chapter just sounded strange I don’t know. I probably read it wrong in some way that made what she said sound peculiar to me.

You have my interest, let’s see where this goes…

He’s an ODST right? Just curious. Otherwise, I like where you are going with this!

This chapter was just poetic. The set up is awesome, and the feeling of Luna being an ancient demigoddess is nearly overwhelming! Great storytelling!

A little gremlin🤣🤣

Applejacks sister is applebloom not sweetie bell. I am feeling a bit nit picky about him being so okay with removing his armour so soon, but I can look past that.

He finally, officially meets Luna

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It was a misnomer. Thanks for the correction, it’s been fixed. As of yet, he hasn’t removed his helmet.

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Ah perfect. Keep up the good work mate!

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Appreciate the support.

Awe man It was getting good and I want more of this story.

The only thing that doesn't convince me is that the rookie talks more than normal, other than that I like how the story is developing

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