Roxas and Naminé had resigned themselves to their fates, having merged with Sora and Kairi; their short lives had come to an end. What they didn't expect however, was to be drawn into a land of talking ponies. Now they must become its guardians as old enemies from their world's past threaten the future of this one.
Fate is up for grabs in a race against time as this new world around them starts becoming overwhelmed by darkness. Bonds of friendship and greater will be tested time and again as the two Nobodies try to find their place in this new world and keep it from being consumed.
The future is up for grabs, and it will be up to Roxas and Naminé to decide which will come to pass.
A collaborative effort with my friend, shagohad12
Takes place post Kingdom Hearts II. Kingdom Hearts is under ownership of Disney and Square Enix. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and all its subsidiaries are owned by Hasbro. This story is written for entertainment purposes only. No copyright infringement was intended.
I can't wait for more! (Also, Welcome Back)
Just hope you don't have Sora and co. appear keep it between the two of them and don't have them move around in human form it will be weird.
7785966 nope, human all the way baby
Nice, I think I like the new start, I haven't heard anything from the original story for a while now, which just means I'm not that mad about it.
I just hope that Sora is still really strong headed, and maybe they are even going to become Ponys this time?
I admit I would like to see Sora X someone else, but Namine is okay too, at least this way there is no typicall teasing from Rarity, or the knowing grin from Applejack. It is not that bad, but I often feel like they kind of force the main char and someone else to be together.
edit: okay that happened, well I accidently started to explain again, what I often see and what probably happens to often, but maybe I just don't find the really good storys that are trying something different. Like a Carrot Top story without a herd for once, and maybe a long one too? Or a herd in which I can actually believe that they like the main char and aren't doing that out of social norm and more because they actually like him.
I can't speak for everyone, but I even think there shouldn't always be an expert (Rarity/Applejack), that can see if someone is in love by the way they move or some other reason I heard when someone tried to justify that Cadance always knows it.
It is like everyone would often overreact and it wouldn't be allowed for ....uuhhh Big Mac to meet with someone, without being on a date, or suddenly having a future wife. They can predict stuff way to fast, or already assume it if there isn't anything that would prove it. Then the main char is destined to blush about everything, and I can say that at least that is an overreaction sometimes.
I The last thing I want to talk about, since I already started with it, is that it is always the main char (male) that is seduced by someone, acting wimpy and without a free will, doing everything the others want from him or practically marrying someone because he is told not to hurt them. I just don't know many storys with a Woman in it.
- I still prefer versions, where Cadance can either only figure out who would have a really good basic to be something more, but isn't able to predict the ultimate special somepony for everyone.
- 2. I like it too, if Cadance is just not forcing the main char to act if they feel uncomfortable or think it isn't what they want for themself.
Sometimes they just let her act that way to push the story or something like that, this is what it often feels like to me.
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Also welcome back man
7786441 Are you referring to Roxas? Because Sora isn't in this story.
7786004 Be serious it'd be awckward as hell everybody would be looking at them, plus they wouldn't be able to eat half the stuff everyone else is eating.
7787169 So? They're staying human.
7787190 Don't you mean "They're staying human."? Seriously you just write your stories directly on fimfiction?
7787555 No, I use Gdocs and usually have an awesome editor to go over my chapters
7787086 yes your right
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I'd like to read this, but you're making the same mistakes I did when I started writing, mainly no spaces between paragraphs and when someone starts talking.
Which is weird because the very last part was well edited, I'd probably find out who did the editing for that part and get them to look over the story again, they will probably have a heart attack when they see the complete lack of spacing between paragraphs.
8060735 Um, that's how writing works. There's not supposed to be a space between paragraphs. Just because that's what you see most commonly on this site, doesn't make it correct. And the last chapter had no editor, so I'm not sure what you're referring to.
8060866 Sorry was a bit tired when I posted that comment so I didn't explain what I meant correctly, you are right, to a point.
While there's nothing wrong with the way you do paragraphs, it comes out almost looking like one giant paragraph.
You can feel free to just ignore this, it's your story after all and everyone has a different way of writing, but it wouldn't hurt to add a bit more spacing between paragraphs just to make it look a bit cleaner.
Also I wasn't referring to your last chapter, but rather the very last part of chapter 1.
8060895 That's typical book style. It is the cleaner version as it looks more professional.
8060897 Well then I guess it looks weird to me because I've never read a book in that format before. Every book I've read was done in the way I described, maybe is an Australian thing.
8060904 Must be because I've never seen any book that does that style. Not even in British books.
I hope Roxas is still doing that "I don't respect Celestia thing", no matter if he means it that way or not.
I want to see a combo with Roxas and Pinkie so badly, just because I image the possibilities.
It would be nice if you would find a way to describe those moments in the game where Sora summoned "Stitch" (Lilo & Sticht). Not sure what I'm expecting, but I just thought it could be interessting to read about them sharing some strange connection during the combo or something like that.
I really like where this is going. More please!
This is fun! I really hope you come back to continue this. Hmm, has the Sunset thing not happened in this timeline? She should recognize humans.
So disappointing this was canceled.