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Bootsy Slickmane


Retired writer and graphic artist.

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Wat......WAT!

Don't get me wrong. I have nothing against the Molestia gags and jokes. I really don't. Hell, most of the time I chuckled when it was between her and another adult. That said, I'm glad that you wrote this. I'm glad because it paints a picture of what I would expect to see from the ponies when they found out what was happening.

Not a fan. There are other ways of showing this without going the length you have.

Good writing....good reactions
You have my thumb, those are the only reasons why.

I am going to drink the tears of everyone in this comments section
FEED ME MY PRETTIES!

Gotta love Evilestia. And Evilestia getting her comeuppance.

Well, that happened.

A very interesting story, though i was a little disappointed not to get any dialogue from Rarity. Her being both an element of harmony and the sister of the almost latest victim. All in all, and interesting story.

Dear goodness no:pinkiesick: Poor Sweetie Belle

Poor Sweetie, when she learns her sister had something to do with saving her she'll probably never leave Rarity's side again.:fluttercry: After all, she didn't get a memory wipe.

Well, that certainly was something.

I actually enjoyed this. I wish you would make more of it, though. Make it some long struggle. Not the fight, but make this a multi-chapter thing, detail how Luna became aware of this, her investigation, telling the elements, maybe Twilight breaking down as she was forced to relive memories she had repressed. No sexual details, but emotional.

Eh, either way, job well done, good sir. :ajsmug:

This story has the same formula that makes Kirby games so successful. Short, sweet, emphasis on mood instead of story, and the satisfaction of seeing the "bad guy" get taken apart by the Orbital Friendship Cannon.

I like it...

ANOTHER!!!

Imprisonment in the sun is it? How interesting. I suppose that's the only place she could be kept.
But then it does sort of beg the question of how Molestia came to be almost as much as the origin of Nightmare Moon, and I have to wonder if perchance the two events could somehow be related?

Should you put this in the extreme fetishes folder in clopfics? If you ever want to that is.

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Yep.

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I feel the same way, dude. This was a story that I both really wanted to write and really didn't want to write because I knew it had the potential to stir up some controversy, which is not something I ever write for the sake of. But I felt it needed to be done, so here it is.

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I'll admit that I may have gone a bit far. I was originally aiming for a Teen rating, but I ended up having a slap a Mature rating on instead. Perhaps that should have signaled me. Oh well.

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I'll get the funnel.

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Thank you kindly.

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Damn, I knew I was forgetting something. I might have to sneak back in and add a little something from her.

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At least Celestia didn't get very far.

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Thanks, Yeah, it could've benefiting from being longer, but I just seem to be suited to shorter works, for the most part. Maybe I'll go back at some point and expand this, but probably not.

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... maybe.

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Um, clop wasn't really the idea, but if anyone wants to add it, then sure.

EDIT: And it looks like someone has, now.

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Was there ever a time in the comic when Molestia went after underage foals? I'm fairly certain she never did. Every pony she "went after" was distinctly over the legal age. The "Down With Molestia" crew most certainly did their best to make it sound like she went after little girls, but I read the entirety of the comic shortly before DWM began and it never happened that I can recall.

The story was good, very dark, almost oppressively so, really. Which I guess means a good job was done on it. Well done.

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According to the KnowYourMeme page on the subject, the earliest known instance of Molestia had a picture of her going after Snails (and also not really being Celestia). Not much, but it's something.

Thanks. It ended up being darker than I'd intended. Not sure if it's a good thing or not, but that's the way the pony pronks, I suppose.

Comment posted by mcfarty deleted Mar 23rd, 2014

Well, on the bright side.
At least Molestia asked her name before the raping. Or she might've come off as a jerk. :raritywink:

4121750 I can't feed myself on my own tears! That's like cannibalism! And incest!
They're like cheerios and celery: apart, they are both quite delicious, but add them together and I just can't stomach them.

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Or does that then make it worse because it's more personal?

4124067 Yea, names make sex persona-
OHMYGOD YOUCOMMENTEDBACK!
Now that I have your attention... CONTINUE THIS!! Or make prequel with her and filly Twilight.

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Continue... this? Well, I did have an idea about Celestia getting free and seeking revenge on Twilight. Damn, that one would probably be about twice as dark as this one. Or I could have stuff about therapy sessions for the abused, but that doesn't sound that interesting to me. I guess I could do a prequel, and that would probably end up pretty damn dark too.

Since you seemed so excited, any ideas on how I should continue this?

4124977 "Getting revenge" sounds too generic.
But I love the idea.
Remember, Celestia is thousands of years old, you should show that wisdom is the sequel/prequel. Maybe she can revert the Mane 6 (and Luna) into fillies. Or have her hunt them down one by one.

She could be suffering from "immortal illness". Discord and Luna went insane, might be her time.

But, whatever you do, I'm sure we'll love it. :raritystarry:

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Ooh, I just had another idea. Ten years after being locked away, a clinically-insane Celestia breaks free and is now hell-bent on one particular filly. Sweetie Belle, the one that got away from her.
Meh, that'd probably end up being even more generic, what with a lone teenage girl being stalked by a predator that she can't really combat.

Anyway, I make no promises because I'm terrible about making sequels, but I'll see what I can do.

4125198 Meeeeeeeh. :unsuresweetie:. If you do, please let it be under a year.
OH! Wait! :pinkiegasp: Let her target the CMC!

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Ever watch Human Centipede?

Careful about asking people to feed you in a situation like this.

Personally, I think the story stopped short of going too far, in that she never did get around to carrying out her activities. I *almost* thought she was going to pull a heel-face turn at the last moment, when she realized that her little ponies weren't as protected from her depredations as she thought, but glad it didn't go that way.

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Yeah, there was that fleeting moment where Celestia seems to feel regret. I waved at it as it passed by.

You vile, disgusting creature!

How dare you write like this? Showing such disrespect for the art of writing?

Do you think I'm okay with this? Because I'm not!

Just look at this, you're not dividing the paragraphs properly!

You either make an empty line OR you make an indent. But never EVER mix the two!

I hope you've learned your lesson. :duck:

(I liked the story though...)

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That's how I roll. :moustache:

Really, though, I've just never liked the look of only doing one of those. Just indenting always just looked weird and cluttered to me, while the vertical whitespace with no other cues felt jarring. That, and this redundant paragraphing style was drilled into me all through my school years.

I also sometimes completely disregard grammar rules during dialogue. Hey, not everyone speaks properly, and it's not my fault that the system is so inflexible. I'm gonna stop now, because I actually have a lot of issues with contemporary English. Perhaps it's bad form on my part, but I never did do things according to tradition, but rather according to what seemed right and worked well. I try to adhere to proper grammar so no one yells at me, but sometimes proper doesn't work for what I'm trying to convey, and I always put the story itself ahead of mechanics. I'm less an author and more a storyteller, really. Or maybe I'm just a stubborn and neurotic fool.

Thanks for dropping by, and I'm glad that you at least liked the story itself.

She's climbin' in yo windows!

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She's snatchin' yo ponies up!

4133247 trying to rape 'em so ya better

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hide ya foals, hide ya mare, and hide ya stallion, 'cause she rapin' e'rrybody out here!

Sweetie's eyes suddenly widened, and a smile found it's way onto her face. "Maybe I can get my cutie mark for being a princess's assistant! What do I have to do?"
Celestia chuckled quietly. "We shall see about that. And for now, just lie back and relax." With that, Celestia gently rolled Sweetie Belle over with her wing. She shifted, placing her head above the filly and her hooves on either side of her little body. Celestia leaned down, nuzzling Sweetie's stomach.

"By Royal Decree, raspberries for everypony! PHHHBBBBTTTTTT!"
"Hooray!"
"And after that, ice cream!"
And Sweetie Belle returned to Ponyville the next day after her fun adventure, THE END.

:trollestia:

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Oh what a different story it could've been.

This better be good or I will hate you forever.

danmit , no sex tag , should have took notice >_> .....

If I had any real goal in this one, it was to portray Celestia as being extremely creepy.

Mission fucking accomplished. Assuming that this was her going insane like Luna becoming Nightmare Moon, she's going to have some pretty legendary guilt issues to deal with when she gets back. Luna may have had a plan to make eternal night work, or may have been so far gone that she honestly didn't realize that she'd end the world. Celestia clearly knows what she's doing, here.

Creepy Celestia achieved. :twilightoops:

I liked this one. Starts off like a clopfic, and then BAM reality ensues.

Where "reality" is "the fictional world of Equestria where the forces of good always succeed via massive rainbow cannon."

Props for subverting my expectations.

By the way, there's a small grammar error, which I see people make all the time. The correct past tense of the verb "lead" is "led". Not to be confused with the noun "lead" (as in the metal) which is written like the former but pronounced like the latter. :derpyderp1: These should be fixed:
"beckoned Sweetie Belle through the door and lead her out of sight."
"none of the fillies you've chosen over the years have lead normal lives"

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Thanks for catching those. I have now fixed them. Also, I'm glad you liked it. I looked around, but didn't see any other story out there that takes a serious approach to this subject without turning into clop, so I felt I ought to fill that void.

Even though Celestia raping Sweetie Belle would have been nice to read, I do somewhat have respect for you for taking this fic in a different direction from expectations and showing the implications of what Celestia is doing.

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