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Illumipony
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Well color me intrigued...
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
It's funny you should mention the kill scenes actually, as I was already trying to prolong those when I was writing. Clearly I didn't do so good of a job.
As for editing I wouldn't mind having someone reading over the chapter updates. If you have the time that is.
more like Sweetie HELL amirite
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It is a little bit of a darker world (Just incase the pony pedophiles didn't tip you off.) Thus the alternate universe tag.
wow, this is awesome!
Sweetiebell Fuck Yeah!!!
I Love this! Like and fave.
3477329 I've got time. ( also I like editing for stories I'm interested in)
Sweet Jesus and apple pie, what's way to die!
Any who, I'm not so sure she' justified killing them, but whatever, keep on posting for that sweetie bell nightmare fuel
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Oh and please do continue questioning her morality. That's the kind of reaction I love to get out of my characters. There's no true right and no true wrong, just what the character sees and how they react.
3489598>>3489458 I think that depends on where they planned on stopping. If they only took pictures then probably not but if they planned on raping then yeah they deserved it.
Thats my not so humble opinion
and the plot thickens.
You have now made my day.
3544058
Glad to hear it.
Nothing more satisfying then to hear that people have enjoyed the works of my sick depraved mind.
3544491 well then your mind maches mine.
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3546751
aren't the face pics fun.
3547965
Indeed
why is chapter two locked?
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Sorry, that was my bad. I accidentally uploaded it before I was finished editing. Give me, one or two days and it'll be back up.
3549732 ah, ok. can't wait for it!
YES!! new chapter soon!!!!! Can't wait. ^_^
*whistles* damn sweetie. ;)
.......More. Now.
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Comin to you, some time soon.
3555197 Also, i may sound like a sick fuck saying this, but i kinda like scenes in books or such where one or more people are being chased or toyed with by a supernatural creature. Not like in horror movies, but like the forest chase scene. Just the feeling of helplessness, and then begging for mercy, it just seems cool to me. Yes, i know i sound sick.
3555278
You're sick?
I'm the one who wrote this thing, what does that make me?
3557279 sexy
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Oh my, why thank you hot stuff.
3557279 A pineapple. It's the ONLY logical explination.
Eyyy.
Eyyyyy.
This is amazing, and I love you for having written it. There is a sort of overwhelming pleasure to be found reading something so incredibly steeped in blood, gore and sex, and there is a pervasive fondness one can feel only for characters who revel in that shedding of blood and that ravishing of delectable mares. In conclusion, I love this Sweetie Belle, and I hope she does nasty, nasty things to her friend (in a sexual way).
That said, I do have some two questions. 1) Does Rarity know about Sweetie Belle and demonhood and such? She seemed completely unused to the darker spectrum of life, murder and rape, and she didn't seem to connect Sweetie to the murders in Manehattan(?). Despite this, she walked in on Sweetie Belle before Sweetie did the whole filly-illusion-thingy. So was the illusion only dropped while she recast it, and it was on during the whole night, oder was? 2) Has Jake, Army Person Extraordinaire, looked at this yet? It seems to have a few thingamajiggers lying around, good sir.
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I'm glad you like the story so much. To answer your questions, no, Rarity doesn't know. The illusion thing you seem to be confused about, will be cleared up in the next chapter.
Edit: Sorry, two chapters.
As for the editing, you might have noticed there was a little mistake made involving me publishing the chapter before it was ready to be read. This also had the unfortunate effect of linking several people to a chapter which I had immediately taken off, which in turn led me to rush through the editing process and skip the beta-reader step entirely.
I'll... probably need to run clean up duty on this chapter sometime.
Well the mental images that this story has painted for me will be in my head for awhile. *sigh* I guess I'll just have to reread this story once it's finished to get them back "what a shame"
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Glad you're liking it.
Out of curiosity, what part has effected you the most so far?
I don't know why, other people of my age would find this terrible and disgusting, however i really like it and i'll follow this story till the end. Maybe it's sort of a fetish for me
In short: your story is awesome!
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Yes, it is weird how such trivial things such as rape, torture, and sadism can offend people. How can stuff like that possibly be upsetting?
In all honesty though, I'm glad you like the story. New chapters coming soon.
Very rarely do I find a story with both a good plot (Sweetie being a demon, not the other plot!), and plenty of depravity, gore, blood, sex, and badass fillies, with plenty of comedy. In short, I love it.
I completely agree.
Thank you for updating, i needed a big dose of awesomeness, and now i got too much.
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the best story ever!!
plz tell me this will get more better as time goes on.....
maybe a little more"action" between the cmc?
Silly ponies "monsters are not born, monsters are made" - some famous guy I can't think of right now
Yay, update
I was hoping for adoption rather than deh interbreedingz, partially because of plausibility, partially because I didn't want to go into the mess of "Half-demons" and whatnot, and partially because the idea of Rarity sharing a part of her life with someone through adoption seems truly generous to me. A better example than what we get in the show, where Rarity is oft more greedy than generous.
And Scootaloo certainly took to Sweetie Belle quickly once the murdering evil ponies thing came to front. Part of me now suspects she's been molested slash raped. Still...
How the 'ell did Rarity's mum get knocked up by a demon?
Did one o' 'em just go up and rape her in the night, or did she affair all over the place? Are they even aware? This family situation is getting more and more complicated. I await answers, because answers are updates, and updates are good.
Tally ho, good sir.
If Sweetie is a half-demon, does that make her less powerful than a full blooded demon, or does her demonic heritage completely override her pony nature or is that part of her otherwise insignificant?
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It'll be explained in more detail later. All I'll say for right now, is that it depends on what kind of demon we're talking about.
Actual character and insane ultraviolence as opposed to one overtaking the other...
Okay, I HAVE to see where this leads.