“Oh, dear sweet Luna, I can just tell this is gonna be awesome!”

I completely agree.

Thank you for updating, i needed a big dose of awesomeness, and now i got too much.

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the best story ever!! plz tell me this will get more better as time goes on.....maybe a little more"action" between the cmc?

“Applebloom,” I say, my tone matching the deadpan look on my face, “if getting lit on fire, having my face smashed in a dozen times against solid stone, and being eaten alive by a dragon didn't kill me, then what makes you think poking me in the eye with a stick will?”

Silly ponies "monsters are not born, monsters are made" - some famous guy I can't think of right now

Yay, update

I was hoping for adoption rather than deh interbreedingz, partially because of plausibility, partially because I didn't want to go into the mess of "Half-demons" and whatnot, and partially because the idea of Rarity sharing a part of her life with someone through adoption seems truly generous to me. A better example than what we get in the show, where Rarity is oft more greedy than generous.

And Scootaloo certainly took to Sweetie Belle quickly once the murdering evil ponies thing came to front. Part of me now suspects she's been molested slash raped. Still...

How the 'ell did Rarity's mum get knocked up by a demon? Did one o' 'em just go up and rape her in the night, or did she affair all over the place? Are they even aware? This family situation is getting more and more complicated. I await answers, because answers are updates, and updates are good.

Tally ho, good sir.

If Sweetie is a half-demon, does that make her less powerful than a full blooded demon, or does her demonic heritage completely override her pony nature or is that part of her otherwise insignificant?

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It'll be explained in more detail later. All I'll say for right now, is that it depends on what kind of demon we're talking about.

Actual character and insane ultraviolence as opposed to one overtaking the other...

Okay, I HAVE to see where this leads.

Please update this story.

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Sorry, it's running a little slow.

You may have to wait until next year to read it.

You have earned a favorite good sir.

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Why thank you!

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Okay, okay, geeze calm down. I'll probably have it done either today or the day after, and then it'll just need to go through the beta reader before it's uploaded.

Hm.

Pretty interesting so far. One has to wonder, however, if Scootaloo`s overeagerness at the "superhero" thing won`t lead her into making Sweetie Belle inadvertent offers she, vell... wouldn`t have the resolve to refuse.

Reminds me of when I told my ( didn't know at the time ) brony friends that I was a bring

PS they said this " welcome too the herd, new colt"

I can't agree more Scootaloo!

Also, loved that little chicken joke aimed at Scoots... and her response to it.

A ba**ss superhero indeed

"The noir hero is a knight in blood caked armor. He's dirty and he does his best to deny the fact that he's a hero the whole time." frank miller

I though of this when scootalo called sweete bell a hero.

what the fuck scootaloo. WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK SCOOTALOO!

7160893 It is both cool and terrifying that she is so excited about her friend being an Akuma (that means devil or demon in Japanese for a those of you who didn't know).

And look! Aw, she's already starting her own cult! They grow up so fast, don't they?

7531636 Would you happen to know where i can apply to join?

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Hail our demonic Lord and savior, Sweetie Belle!

Demonic Best Friend? Sign me up!

My eyes fly open. The tears I just threatened to produce dry up. I look up at my orange-coated friend, who is grinning from ear-to-ear. “So, you're like a superhero then, a totally wicked, badass, superhero! That is so cool!”

With that premise, more like a anti-hero then a superhero

Edit: Saved it with a spoiler tag, did she see it?

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Ssssssshhh, she doesn't know.

So I'm just gonna guess that Sweetie Belle is basically a reverse/evil Jesus and her father is Satan or something. That would make for a very interesting Bible.

Anyway, awesome man, have a belated keep at it!