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“There are three things all wise men fear: the sea in storm, a night with no moon, and the anger of a gentle man.” - Patrick Rothfuss

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Opaline has declared herself the greatest Fire Alicorn in Equestria.

The actual greatest Fire Alicorn in Equestria would like to disagree.


Featured 2/22/2024 - 2/25/2024!

Chapters (1)
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Just had a daydream about Sunset having fire powers. Coincidence? I think not.

Lovely little bit of madness. I do enjoy seeing Sunset kick burn ass.

Opaline blinked. "Who the devil are you?"

I absolutely loved the ponifed DBZ story icon as it immediately grabbed my attention and had me grinning like a lunatic. xD

Anyways great story.

Opaline looked to Sunny Starscout. "Is she having a seizure?"

"If she soils herself, you and Misty are cleaning it up."

The six ponies (and one knocked out baby dragon) could only stare at the absurd devastation wreaked by their newfound friend.

Such devastation was not their intention.

And yeah, Sunset's in for a rude wake-up call. At least the time dilation is friendly enough that she can say goodbye if need be. Of course, the new filly seems to have the situation well in hoof, but Sunset does still have to grapple with that "everypony she knew and loved is dead thing." But that's outside the scope of the story. Delightful bit of showing the Jenny-come-lately how it's done.

“It’s over 9000!”

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!

A wild Sunset attacks.

"Hitch is trying very hard."

:facehoof: No. He's really not. Hitch didn't even try.

welp. that just happened. (walks over to the cooked dead body of Opaline) dose anyone want a leg or a wing??

Sunset does a Goku going Super Saiyan 3. Absolute arson incarnate ensues.

Accurate to her character, to be honest.

Sunset: so this false alicorn thinks she is a fire alicorn? HA!
im gonna ENJOY THIS

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She is a fire unicorn
She has fire magic

Opaline: "Thanks to the dragonfire I absorbed, an ultimately fruitless effort. But if it's any consolation...that hurt like Hell."

Wanderer D
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I hate the cover art. But the story got an honest laugh out of me. Poor Opaline, her fate was already decided when she encountered a character from a point past season 1 of FIM.

"The fuck you are," said Sunset Shimmer.

This feels really on-brand.

Upvoted purely for the chapter title. :pinkiehappy: I mean, the rest of it's good too, but I'd already upvoted it by then.

Silly, random, and short. Top-tier 10/10 fic across the board.

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I hate the cover art.

There were several others I considered but unfortunately all the really good ones (like the one in the author's note) were animated and did not cooperate well with FIMFic's cover art system. Which is sad because come on!
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That's adorable!

THAT was actually amusing!m I can imagine in hell/tartarus/whatever, Opaline is wondering just what the blazes (pun intended) happened

Apparently Opaline didn’t know when to run away. So at least we know Sunset has a power level over 9000.

"Okay, that's what I thought you said. You made the right call in bringing me in, kid. Let's go handle this 'Opaline'."

I KEEP THINKING OF OPALESCENCE, RARITY'S CAT. 😭

"The fuck you are," said Sunset Shimmer.

LOVE HER THIS SO DAMN MUCH.

" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH– "

This is so Sunset-core.

An aura of pure energy ignited around Sunset Shimmer as she reached the peak of her power up sequence, cascading outwards as she became a miniature sun.

OH MY LUNA– SHE TURNED INTO A FRICKING SUN?!

Sunset Shimmer yawned. "It has been so long since I cut loose like that. I gotta come back more often." Laughing, she shook her head. "I swear, you spend a decade or two in a non-magic world and you just forget how awesome it is. Not that any of you would know about that, eh?" She winked at the ponies… who all stared at her silently.

Live laugh Sunset Shimmer.

"Last time, on Ponyball Z; Opaline was acting the Mickey to Sunset and now they have to fiiiiiiiiight!"

Quality crackfic right here.

Ri2

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That's the joke and why he's the Flash. This IS him trying very hard.

Sunset is THE Super-Dee-Duper Alicorn. Fusing silicon is no small feat. You do NOT make her MAD.

Opaline may be nothing to the true Fire Alicorn, but both of them are nothing compared to the Nuke Deer

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All jokes aside, I feel like Opaline and Sunset would have a really fun dynamic that should definitely get explored more

The most powerful alicorn? Why do I recall that one of them is a unicorn, even the cover art says so, so like, why bother the conflict...

Jokes aside, nics fic. Fire is fun to play with, they're beautiful when small and powerful when enlarged. Celestia and Daybreaker would like to sign up for the next round.

Literally perfect. That is all.

"The fuck you are," said Sunset Shimmer.

Establishing character moment

"Oh dear lord –" is all Opaline could say before the flames washed over her.

Taste the power of the Sun. Applied directly to the forehead.

The Legendary Fire Alicorn who appears once every 1000 years!

I was thinking. "From the minds of Mortal Mares, the mightiest of Ponies: SUNSET Z!"

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH–"

That's one of the best lines ever.

"The fuck you are," said Sunset Shimmer.

So's that one.

This is the best "Sunset in G5" story I've ever read. Congratulations on getting Featured. Have a Spikestache.
:moustache:

That was a fun refreshing read:pinkiehappy:

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So which of you mods do we need to annoy the most to get animated cover art as a thing?

Wanderer D
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11833360 none. That would be for knighty.

With that ending, this seems like one of those silly stories that could turn into a series. "Sunset fixes Generation 5"

hilarious and honestly much more humane way to end opalene then how the show did.

Whilst funny enough, this does raise a question I've long had about this sort of media; why doesn't anybody just shoot their opponent as they're powering up?

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i havent even watched gen 5 and i can tell that Opaline deserved that 100%

and thank GOODNESS someone else writes Alicorn Sunset like a supernova; extremely underrated

rly fun short and sweet fic heheh 👍👍👍

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When this creature is emotionally positive, does that mean we have a...

:pinkiesmile: ...wait for it...

HAPPY NUKE DEER! :pinkiehappy:





:facehoof:

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Because logic is stupid in these kinds of situations, also, nobody wants to watch/read it.

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"Darn you Sunset! You am no real Fire Alicron!"

That is certainly one way to go even further beyond.

All hail the alicorn super saiyan.

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