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This story is a sequel to Equestria: A New Generation


This story takes place between after 'Sunny-Day Dinners' in MLP G5 Sunset: Tell Your Tale.


Months later, Sunset, Sunny and their friends embrace the new age of Equestria as the magic and the friendship has returned and the three tribes are together again. But there are someponies that doesn't like the change and wants things the way there were while there something out there that might cause the disaharmony and might cause trouble for the magic. Join Sunset and her new generations friends as their adventures continues to keep the magic stable and keep the magic of friendship sparkling.


This story is an inspiration to Phantom-Dragon since it was his idea that inspired me to make this, so give credit to him.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 1177 )

This is why, i really dislike Posey. If it were up to me i'd banish her to Tartarus, if that's still around.

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Hey go easy, I don’t like her much as you do but she did aplogozie at the end of the first part of Male Your Mark, she just have a habit, like how she rally the ponies to help clean Maretime bay after hearing Sunny’s message

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Took me a some time do this, since 12 pm, to get this first chapter done, and trust me it wasn’t easy, it is a 44 or so minute special of make your mark

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Okay, fair enough. I just have issues with selfish people. Reference? Lickety Split from the 1986 Pony movie.

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It’s make your mark, this takes place before she became a little nice and see the error of her ways. Give it time until that part shows

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ok

I know Sunset loves her friends and wants to protect them, but try to make her

less agressive. Remember what I said I would do?

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Don’t worry, I’m planning on doing it, it was just this once since we’ll, that insult and complain Posey was saying, can really ticked up Sunset since she was from the time where ponies are together and magic is a norm, so she just a little ticked, besides posey did started it

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That’s why I have to do this as soon as possible, it’s Star at the 26 so that might gives me enough time to do each chapter a day at a time. And this was just the six minute part

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but I wouldn't say anything about Twilight or Celestia.


I'll admit I thought this was going to be just 1 chapter, but eh.

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It’s a 44 minute special, I can’t do that in one go, besides the Equestria: New Generation story, and the Make Your Mark Stories from other righters have pieces of the chapter 1 of Make Your Mark, but don’t worry I won’t put down complete in this thing yet, chapter two will come in pieces

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Don’t worry chapter 2 is on its way, working on it but will take time

Zoom and Thunder approach the window, which Zipp somehow left, as they close it as they continue on. What they didn’t know is that Zipp is right above them as she uses her wings to fly to the celin to stay hidden. Once the close it was clear, she landed back to the floor and decided to move to the wall to pretend to be sneaky as she frontflip to the otherside past her family picture of her, her sister and her mother, Queen Haven when she and her sister were just fillies.

Didn't they have a dad???

“I would’ve done the sneaky thing, but I’m done sneaking into somepony place and taking something in it for one lifetime.” Sunset pointed out her fair share of sneaking and stealing, one of how she stole the Element of Magic, Twilight’s crown, when they first met and the second time when she and her friends stole the Pegasus Crystal from Queen Haven during their first adventure that brought back the magic and reunite the three tribes.

You snuck into the castle while everypony was asleep, so......

nvm

“We gotta work on your choice of words, Pipp.” Sunset pointed, seeing that her words were not comforting.

Ah, like that one time with human Fluttershy.
But that wont be remembered

Sunset smiled at this as she found Hitch’s excitement cute. She looked at the Crystal Brighthouse with a proud smile, glad that Equestria is the way it’s supposed to be and magic returned. But then suddenly, the rainbow from the Brighthouse glitch out a bit, clear as day for Sunset to notice, which makes her worried. “What the…?” She asked, before she could tell the group, a bird flew over Hitch as it chirped before grabbing Pipp’s phone.

😊😊😊😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
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"Fo' sho'." Zipp finished. "Well, I, for one, do not agree." An angry voice called out. The Mane 6 turned and saw Posey step out of her house as she gave them an angry voice.

oh dear 😑+😬

“What's wrong with flying high up?” Pipp asked in confusion, along with Zipp since they can fly and they questioned Pipp’s reason while Sunset raised an eyebrow at it.

yeah, im also really comfused about that
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“You suddenly should be up in Maretime Bay with your Unicorn friend here and the rest of you join together and bring back the magic! And you think you are incharge of us because you are an alicorn!” Posey yelled out, pointing out her reasons

Well somepony needs to take charge of Equestria, and its alicorns!
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“You suddenly should be up in Maretime Bay with your Unicorn friend here and the rest of you join together and bring back the magic! And you think you are incharge of us because you are an alicorn!” Posey yelled out, pointing out her reasons

Shouldn't it be "show up"
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Okay that was a mistake while typing, gotta fix that

“And we will prove it that this is how it is, and how it was meant to be.” Sunset added as she and Sunny went to catch up to their friends as they walked back to the Brighthouse.

sigh....
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You know if you want I can leave this chapter in and try again while putting in the full movie together in once chapter so you can be ready for chapter 2

“And we will prove it that this is how it is, and how it was meant to be.” Sunset added as she and Sunny went to catch up to their friends as they walked back to the Brighthouse.

This will be the beginning of something great.

https://youtu.be/a04SPPsRBH4p

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no no no no.
Thats fine.

I just expected that to happen but its ok.
But its your choice

Comment posted by JesusG0987 deleted September 12th

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I’m planning to do that anyway it will save enough time to I just got used to tell your towels I’ll buy make a one chapter of time hi guess I didn’t think it through yet but I will do it anyway

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Tho, splitting it chapters will make people excited, waiting for more.

But im not in control.

Man this is awesome I’ve waited a long time for this and it’s awesome the way you’ve put sunset in the story like her being in the livestream with Sunny and even if it is aggressive I still like the way she stood up too posey and defended her friends and make a point but I’m just really excited that this is finally here so good luck and your work is awesome.

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tho question, since Sunset is umm (old) does she have those things under her eyes?

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You talk about bangs, then now, I’m the first story at the final chapter when Sunset became an alicorn she also got her youth back

Comment posted by FriendshipIsStillMagic deleted September 12th

Sunset smiled at this as she found Hitch’s excitement cute. She looked at the Crystal Brighthouse with a proud smile, glad that Equestria is the way it’s supposed to be and magic returned. But then suddenly, the rainbow from the Brighthouse glitch out a bit, clear as day for Sunset to notice, which makes her worried. “What the…?” She asked, before she could tell the group, a bird flew over Hitch as it chirped before grabbing Pipp’s phone.

what😳😳😳😳
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“What's wrong with flying high up?” Pipp asked in confusion, along with Zipp since they can fly and they questioned Pipp’s reason while Sunset raised an eyebrow at it.

Posey's
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They are, just making sure the magic and friendship are stable, something like that, I’m not dure

"Okay, wow. She was really nice, right, guys?" Izzy asked, she said between Zipp and Pipp, but they just give a smile as they walked off.

I was going to correct it to be girls but then I remembered Hitch.

Sorry buddy
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Still not used to seeing a stallion with a girl group, that's okay. We're still getting used to it, but hey it's great because we can't let the girls have all the fun, like Spike since he was the only boy with the Mane 6, and he was hardley notice.

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Understand Posey not wanting to call them their Majesty or whatever, but the entire town?

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