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Having received her teaching degree, Sunset Shimmer is back at CHS to help guide along a new generation with the lessons she's had to learn about magic and friendship.

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Well, there's an interesting start. Somehow, I can't help but think that the "mission" isn't as "accomplished" as they might hope.
Looking forward to seeing where this one goes.

Baree #2 · Last Friday · · ·

Ok, good start, I'll be following to see where it goes.

Oh!
This looks fun.
Faved.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Hmm. I’m intrigued. Very intrigued. I’ll admit; I was kinda bummed out when Sunset explained that there’s no more magic, since magic is an essential part of Sunset’s personality. But this is your story and I won’t not read it because of it.

Excellent start. Into ‘Tracking’ it goes!

Very good and intriguing start, also I've got a funny feeling that the magic isn't fully gone and it will make a return in the near future.

Anyways I'm looking forward to seeing how your story will go, keep up the good work.

wait, let me guess. Hitch/Sprout will become Hall Monitors.

you have my attention

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To be fair, the story would probably work best if Sunset is just as surprised as everybody else about the magic coming back. So that could be why the author chose to do it that way.

Excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in this prologue chapter. Really appreciated Sunset recounting what she had been up to since she and the other Rainbooms graduated from Canterlot High (as well as that one rich idiot that got the teaching job at Crystal Prep because of having much better connections than her, despite Sunset being Cadance's sister-in-law's best friend). And, yeah, I have a hunch that the magic WILL be coming back gradually at first at moments that Sunset least expects or wants. But that's for later.

Anyway, certainly looking forward to more of this.

Sunset Shimmer as a teacher? That's a nice change. I wonder if she'll be a guide for Sunny, Hitch, Pipp, Zipp, and Izzy.

Stet709 #12 · Saturday · · ·

Interesting start!
Magic may be gone from this world, but with Sunset teaching at CHS, she'll be able to keep an eye on the portal out front (even if its inactive for 30 moons)
I'm curious to her reasons for preferring CPA over CHS, unless Twilight is teaching there.

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I like that theory. This is, after all, meant to cover concurrently with the events of Gen 5, so magic is going back. We’ll just have to wait.

“We’d get incidents even into our college years from time to time,” Sunset began to explain. “But they became less and less frequent. Couple of years ago, we recovered an Equestrian artifact that was messing with the people over in Maretime Bay. We shipped it off through the portal to Princess Twilight for safekeeping, and then these stopped working.” She held up the pendant for emphasis. “It’s just a pretty rock now that I keep with me for sentimental reasons. No magical powers, no ‘ponying up’ since. We figure that was the final bit of wild magic that had crossed the portals Twilight made during the last Friendship Games, and the stones going dormant was their way of telling us: ‘Mission accomplished.’ We believe there’s no more Equestrian magic left in this world, except for what I carry innately, and that is barely enough to light a candle without a way to focus it.”

Well, you jinxed it. Now we're screwed.

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Yup. One has to question Sunset’s wisdom, since she just tempted fate in the worst way possible.

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